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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, taking picture for them always made me feel relaxed if I got some really good photos.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

Well I prefer Ruben views. As for me, I absolutely like the high building and city light.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

Personally I do like other countries then my motherland. Personally I want to see something new and I'm not familiar with.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答较简短且有语法和用词错误。建议:1) 用主句直接回答(Yes, I do.)并在后面用一到两句补充原因或感受;2) 注意时态一致性和名词复数形式(pictures);3) 使用更自然的表达如 "it relaxes me" 或 "I feel relaxed when I take good photos"。示例结构:一简单肯定句 + 一具体原因/感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Taking pictures relaxes me, especially when I manage to capture a really good shot because it feels rewarding and helps me notice small details in the scene.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答有口误(Ruben)和语法问题(复数、冠词、搭配)。建议:1) 直接给出偏好并用连接词解释原因(I prefer urban views because...);2) 注意名词复数(buildings)和固定搭配(city lights);3) 提供具体细节支持(e.g. skyline, nightlife)。

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I love the skyline and the city lights at night. The tall buildings and bustling streets create a dramatic atmosphere that I enjoy photographing.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 表达重复且有措辞错误(then 应为 than,motherland 可用 country)。建议:1) 用一到两句直接比较并解释原因;2) 避免重复词汇,使用连词(because, so)使逻辑清晰;3) 提供具体例子说明想看新事物(different architecture, cultures)。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing new landscapes and different cultures. For example, I like photographing unfamiliar architecture and local street scenes that I can't find at home.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Yes, taking picture for them always made me feel relaxed if I got some really good photos.

Yes, taking pictures of them always makes me feel relaxed if I get some really good photos.

错误类型:动名词/名词复数和时态混用。 问题与修改建议: 1) picture 应为复数 pictures,因为指的是多张照片(与 them 呼应)。 2) 介词搭配应为 taking pictures of them(固定搭配)。 3) 时态要一致:前半句描述一种习惯或一般情况,应使用一般现在时 makes(而不是 made)。条件从句也用一般现在时 get(而不是 got)。 改进建议:描述习惯性行为时使用一般现在时,注意固定搭配 and 名词复数形式。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Well I prefer Ruben views. As for me, I absolutely like the high building and city light.

Well, I prefer rural views. As for me, I absolutely like the tall buildings and city lights.

错误类型:形容词拼写与名词形式错误、可数名词单复数、可数名词搭配复数。 问题与修改建议: 1) 'Ruben' 拼写错误,应为 'rural'(乡村的)。 2) 'high building' 不自然,且 building 是可数名词,若泛指应使用复数 tall buildings(高楼/高楼群)。 3) 'city light' 表达不自然且应为复数 city lights(城市的灯光/夜景)。 改进建议:注意单词拼写,使用形容词 tall 而不是 high 描述建筑高度时更自然;可数名词在泛指时用复数。

Present tense issue

× Personally I do like other countries then my motherland. Personally I want to see something new and I'm not familiar with.

Personally, I do prefer other countries to my motherland. I want to see something new that I'm not familiar with.

错误类型:时态/比较连词和关系从句结构错误。 问题与修改建议: 1) 比较结构错误:应使用 prefer A to B 而不是 'prefer A then B'(then 用错,应该是 to)。 2) 第一部分用 do like 可以,但 prefer 更贴切问题(Do you prefer...)。修改为 I do prefer other countries to my motherland。 3) 第二句不完整,'I'm not familiar with' 需要先行词,建议用定语从句 that I'm not familiar with 或者把结构改为 I'm not familiar with them。将两句合并为 I want to see something new that I'm not familiar with。 改进建议:比较时用 prefer ... to ...;使用关系从句连接不熟悉的事物,保证先行词存在并保持句子完整。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
LightBright; Animate; Flimsy; Nimble; Gentle
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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