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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course, I like taking picture the about different views, because I have which it which is many places and where have lots of beautiful scenery. Scenery such as in Xiamen, it's a seaside city, there are many bridges and.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I prefer urban areas because there are many tall buildings in the city and there are around different shapes, colors and they are also have some straight and beautiful parks in such as I had taken many beautiful photos in the.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I prefer views in many countries because the scenery are very stunning and appealing. I can face my eyes on natural landscape such as in Finland. It is very beautiful and it provide from the waterfront.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 在回答中要更直接和简洁地回应问题,并改进语法与句子结构。建议用一句话表明喜好(主题句),随后用一到两句具体说明原因或举例,避免重复和碎片化表达。注意动词形式(take pictures)、冠词,以及连词使用,使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love capturing beautiful scenery. For example, in Xiamen, a seaside city, I often photograph the coastline and the many bridges, which look spectacular at sunset.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 44.0

Gợi ý: 回答时先给出明确立场(城市或乡村),然后提供具体理由和一两个细节支持,使用连接词(for example, because)来保持逻辑。注意名词单复数、形容词搭配和句子完整性,避免未完成句。

Ví dụ: I prefer urban areas because cities have diverse architecture and vibrant colors. For example, I often photograph tall buildings with interesting shapes and nearby well-designed parks, which create striking contrasts in my pictures.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 先明确表态(国内或国外),然后给出具体原因并举例。修正语法错误(scenery不可数,use ‘is’或‘are’根据 noun, use correct verbs),并用连词连接句子。提供更具体的细节如景色特征或感觉,会更有说服力。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer unique landscapes and cultural scenery. For instance, in Finland the waterfronts and pristine lakes create a peaceful atmosphere that I find very inspiring for photography.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Yes, of course, I like taking picture the about different views, because I have which it which is many places and where have lots of beautiful scenery.

Yes, of course. I like taking pictures of different views because I have been to many places that have lots of beautiful scenery.

问题类型:动词 + -ing 形式 以及其他相关错误。错误解析:原句中“taking picture the about different views”搭配错误,正确表达为“taking pictures of different views”(动词短语 take pictures of)。此外句中有残缺结构“because I have which it which is many places and where have lots of beautiful scenery.”,应改为完整从句“because I have been to many places that have lots of beautiful scenery.” 使用现在完成时“have been to”表示到过许多地方。改进建议:掌握固定搭配“take pictures of”,并使用完整的定语从句或关系代词来修饰名词;学会使用现在完成时表示过去经历。

Sentence structure errors

× Scenery such as in Xiamen, it's a seaside city, there are many bridges and.

For example, in Xiamen — it's a seaside city with many bridges.

问题类型:句子结构错误。错误解析:原句结构杂乱,断句不完整,结尾“and.”后缺信息。改为简洁完整的句子“in Xiamen — it's a seaside city with many bridges.” 如果列举其他景物可以继续补充。改进建议:注意完整句子要有主语和谓语,避免用不完整的并列连接词结尾。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I prefer urban areas because there are many tall buildings in the city and there are around different shapes, colors and they are also have some straight and beautiful parks in such as I had taken many beautiful photos in the.

I prefer urban areas because there are many tall buildings in the city with different shapes and colors, and there are also some neat and beautiful parks where I have taken many photos.

问题类型:形容词或副词使用不当及结构混乱。错误解析:原句“there are around different shapes, colors”搭配不当,应为“buildings with different shapes and colors”。“they are also have”语法错误,应为“there are also”或“they also have”。结尾“in such as I had taken many beautiful photos in the.”不完整且时态不当,改为“where I have taken many photos”。改进建议:理清句子主语,使用正确的介词短语(with, where),动词搭配时态与语境一致(现在完成时表示过去经历与现在相关)。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I prefer views in many countries because the scenery are very stunning and appealing.

I prefer views in many countries because the scenery is very stunning and appealing.

问题类型:代词(或主谓一致)使用不当。错误解析:“the scenery”是不可数名词或集合概念,应与单数动词连用,故用“is”而不是“are”。改进建议:注意不可数名词和集合名词通常与单数动词搭配;练习常见名词的单复数用法。

Present tense issue

× I can face my eyes on natural landscape such as in Finland.

I can feast my eyes on natural landscapes, such as those in Finland.

问题类型:现在时态与短语使用错误。错误解析:“face my eyes on”是不正确的固定搭配,正确短语是“feast my eyes on”,意为“尽情欣赏”;“natural landscape”最好用复数“landscapes”或用“the natural landscape”并调整上下文。改进建议:记忆并使用固定短语(phrasal expressions),注意单复数一致以匹配语境。

Verb in the present participle form

× It is very beautiful and it provide from the waterfront.

It is very beautiful, and it provides beautiful views from the waterfront.

问题类型:现在分词/动词形式错误。错误解析:“it provide”缺少单数第三人称 -s,应为“it provides”。短语“provide from the waterfront”搭配错误,应为“provides beautiful views from the waterfront”或“is beautiful from the waterfront”。改进建议:注意第三人称单数动词变形(动词+s),并学习常见动词短语的正确搭配。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
StraightUnswerving; Honest; Logical; Successive; Undiluted
TallIn height; Demanding
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