Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Avoid filler phrases like "so that's why" and minor grammar errors (e.g., "get damage" → "get damaged"). Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because digital files are easier to organize and keep safe. For example, I store my notes in cloud folders, so I can search and access them from any device without worrying about papers getting damaged.

Gợi ý: Give a complete, grammatically correct response with one clear reason and a brief supporting detail. Avoid repeating the same point and finish sentences fully. Use a linking word like "because" or "since" and correct plural/verb forms ("desktops are" not "desktop are").

Ví dụ: I use both, but I prefer typing on a laptop because it’s portable and convenient. For instance, I can take my laptop to the library or a café, whereas desktops stay at home or in college.

Gợi ý: Start with a concise topic sentence and then give a specific detail to make the answer more informative. Avoid repetition ("computer class" twice) and improve phrasing ("on keyboard" → "on the keyboard").

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was a child in primary school. In our ICT lessons we had a dedicated session on typing, and that’s where I learned basic key placement and practiced touch-typing.

Gợi ý: Provide a structured answer: state the main method, then give one or two specific practices or resources and explain briefly how they help. Avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words like "for example" or "also".

Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I type short paragraphs and essays every day and use online typing tests to track my speed and accuracy, which helps both my typing and my English writing.

× I definitely prefer typing over writing because when I type I can store my data in a soft copy and nowadays soft copies are easier to handle than hard copies.

✓ I definitely prefer typing to handwriting because when I type I can store my data in a soft copy, and nowadays soft copies are easier to handle than hard copies.

Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A over B' (article/type usage). 'Handwriting' is more idiomatic than 'writing' here. Added a comma before the conjunction for clarity.

× Like hard copies get damage a lot so that's why.

✓ Hard copies get damaged a lot, so that is why I prefer soft copies.

Original is fragmented and missing passive form 'damaged'. Rewrote to form a complete sentence with correct passive verb and clear reference to preference.

× I type on both but I prefer to type on laptop because it is easy to carry at different places while desktop are mostly available in home or in college.

✓ I type on both, but I prefer to type on a laptop because it is easy to carry to different places, while desktops are mostly available at home or at college.

Singular/plural and article errors: use 'a laptop' (article) and 'desktops' (plural) to match 'both' context. Use 'at home' and 'at college' prepositions and 'carry to different places' is more natural.

× So that's why I prefer laptop because I can use it while I.

✓ So that's why I prefer a laptop, because I can use it while I am traveling or when I am away from home.

Original sentence is incomplete ('while I' is unfinished). Completed the sentence with plausible intended meaning and corrected article 'a laptop' and added appropriate clause with present continuous to match context.

× I learned it in my childhood at school.

✓ I learned it during my childhood at school.

'During my childhood' is more natural than 'in my childhood'. Tense 'learned' is correct past tense for a completed action.

× In my computer class, there was a specific class for computer where I first saw the computer and learned how to type on keyboard.

✓ In my computer class, there was a specific lesson about computers where I first saw a computer and learned how to type on a keyboard.

Use 'a specific lesson' and 'a computer' (articles), and 'on a keyboard' requires the article. 'Lesson about computers' is clearer than 'class for computer'.

× I improve my typing mainly by practicing.

✓ I improve my typing mainly by practicing.

Sentence is grammatically correct: present simple used for habitual action. No change needed.

× I try to write different kinds of paragraphs and essays which are also useful for improving my English.

✓ I try writing different kinds of paragraphs and essays, which are also useful for improving my English.

Both 'try to write' and 'try writing' can be correct, but 'try writing' is more natural when referring to a method for improvement. Added a comma before the non-restrictive relative clause.

× So two things I can improve at same time, that is typing and my English writing.

✓ So I can improve two things at the same time: my typing and my English writing.

Original word order is awkward. Reordered to a natural English structure, added 'the'/'my' and punctuation to clarify the list and use of 'the same time'.

× So I prefer to improve it by practicing.

✓ So I prefer to improve my typing by practicing.

Clarified the pronoun 'it' to 'my typing' for clarity. The form and tense are otherwise correct.