Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your response is clear and relevant, but a few improvements will raise your score. Reduce repetition (avoid phrases like "you know" and repeating 'typing' too often). Start with a concise topic sentence, then give two specific supporting points with linking words. Add a brief example to make it more concrete. Keep it to a maximum of 4–5 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more convenient and efficient. For example, I can type on my phone or laptop and send messages instantly, which saves time. Moreover, typing is usually faster and neater than writing, especially when I need to share notes with classmates.

Gợi ý: Good direct answer and structure. Improve coherence by using linking words (e.g., "at work" vs "at home") and avoid vague phrasing like "work well." Add a short specific detail about tasks you do on each device to enrich the answer.

Ví dụ: I type on both desktop and laptop every day. At work I use a desktop for tasks like document editing and data entry because it has a larger screen and a full keyboard; at home I use a laptop to browse the internet and chat with friends.

Gợi ý: The answer answers the question but is repetitive (repeating "I remember" several times) and contains a hesitation ("I I") and an imprecise detail. Start with a clear time phrase, give one or two concise supporting details, and avoid repetition and fillers. Mention what was difficult and, if possible, how you overcame it.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school during a computer class. The teacher taught us basic finger positions and at first it was difficult to type quickly, but regular practice helped me improve.

Gợi ý: Reasonable answer but somewhat general and includes unnecessary personal memory. Give a clear strategy (topic sentence), then list specific methods and use linking words. Mention modern tools or exercises (e.g., typing software, timed tests) to show range of methods.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice and specific exercises. For example, I use online typing programs to do timed drills and accuracy tests, and I also practice by transcribing short articles to build speed and precision.

× I prefer typing to writing because first, typing is convenient.

✓ I prefer typing to writing because, first, typing is convenient.

Punctuation/clarity issue: add a comma after 'because' or set off 'first' with commas to improve readability. This is not a core grammar type from the provided list, so it's left as a clarity suggestion.

× You know you can use your mobile phone or use your laptop to output something.

✓ You can use your mobile phone or your laptop to type something.

Incorrect use of prepositions/word choice: 'to output something' is unnatural in this context. Use a verb appropriate to the action (type) and remove redundant 'you know' and repeated 'use'. Suggestion: use parallel structure 'use your mobile phone or your laptop to type something.'

× And also, typing is faster than writing when you're trying to communicate things to others.

✓ Also, typing is faster than writing when you are trying to communicate with others.

Present tense/word choice: 'you're' is fine but expanded for formality; 'communicate things to others' is awkward — use 'communicate with others.' This fixes preposition use and natural phrasing.

× Actually I type on both laptop and desktop because when I am on work I have to use a desktop to work well.

✓ Actually, I type on both laptop and desktop because when I am at work I have to use a desktop to work effectively.

Present tense and preposition error: 'on work' is incorrect; correct preposition is 'at work' (Grammar ID 11). Also 'work well' is awkward; 'work effectively' is more natural (word choice/usage).

× When I go back home I use my laptop to surf the Internet and also to chat with my friends.

✓ When I go back home, I use my laptop to surf the Internet and chat with my friends.

Incorrect use of prepositions/punctuation: add a comma after the introductory clause. Parallel structure: remove redundant 'also to' and use 'and chat' for natural phrasing.

× I remember I learned how to type with a keyboard when I was in primary school.

✓ I remember learning how to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school.

Past tense and verb form: 'I learned' is acceptable, but native phrasing uses 'I remember learning' (verb + -ing) and preposition 'on a keyboard' is more natural than 'with a keyboard.' This applies to Grammar IDs 5 and 8; follow instruction to choose matching type — primary issue: past tense/verb form converted to gerund after 'remember' (ID 8).

× I remember there was a lesson where a teacher told us how to use the keyboard to type on the laptop and I I remember it was difficult.

✓ I remember there was a lesson where the teacher showed us how to use the keyboard to type on a laptop, and I remember it was difficult.

Multiple issues: incorrect article use ('a teacher' to 'the teacher' if referring to a specific class instructor) and repetition 'I I'. Also 'type on the laptop' -> 'type on a laptop' for generality. Main error types: article errors (ID 22) and sentence structure/duplication (ID 26). Remove duplicate 'I' and fix articles and punctuation to form one clear sentence.

× Well I think it's all depends on how much you practice to type.

✓ Well, I think it all depends on how much you practice typing.

Present tense and verb form: 'it's all depends' is incorrect; correct is 'it all depends' (subject-verb agreement/auxiliary issue — ID 27). After 'practice' use gerund 'typing' not infinitive 'to type' (ID 8). Added comma after introductory 'Well.'

× I remember in my primary school I spent a lot of time practicing how to type accurately and fast to pass that exam.

✓ I remember that in primary school I spent a lot of time practicing typing accurately and quickly to pass that exam.

Past tense is fine, but word forms and adverb use need correction: use gerund 'practicing typing' (ID 8), prefer adverb 'quickly' instead of 'fast' when modifying a verb (ID 13). Also add 'that' or a comma for clarity; remove 'my' before 'primary school' unless emphasizing possession.