Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I like typing more because every day I must practice the listening and reading and do some. I ask reading on website. So when I must give my answers I need to tie my keyboard and give the best answers.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
A laptop keyboard because you love everyday. When I must go to school, I always use a laptop to study and I have a habit that every day I always type on keyboard. So when sometimes I must use a keyboard or a desktop, I think it's too difficult for me to adapt.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Let me see when I was trying around for five years soon in July almost. My parents also have a simple platforms in typing on keyboard. So when I was a child they started to teach for me how to type keyboard with 10 fingers.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Everyday SM formation with you every day. I always use my laptop to tie on keyboard. Even I can tie a commitment with my parents and I promise with them I will follow and obey them and I agree in time for example a text and a message that I need to be.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two clear, specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences and avoid unclear phrases (e.g., “tie my keyboard”). Focus on why you prefer typing with concrete examples.
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I often practise reading and listening online, so typing lets me take notes and search for information quickly. Also, typed answers look neater and are easier to edit.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 46.0Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence (state which you use) and follow with 1–2 specific reasons. Use correct pronouns and tense, and add linking words for coherence (e.g., 'because', 'so', 'however'). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “you love everyday.”
Ví dụ: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I take my laptop to school and study on it. As a result, I am used to the laptop layout and find desktop keyboards harder to adapt to. However, I can still type on a desktop if necessary.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear time reference, then give concise supporting detail about how you learned. Use correct time expressions and simpler phrasing (e.g., “when I was about five” or “at age five”), and avoid vague words like “trying around.”
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about five years old. My parents used a simple typing program and taught me the ten-finger method, so I practiced a little every day.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 38.0Gợi ý: Give a clear, structured answer: start with one main method you use to improve, then add a specific routine or example. Use correct verbs (e.g., 'type', 'practice') and avoid unclear phrases. Mention frequency and a concrete activity (online lessons, timed tests, or daily practice).
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising on my laptop every day for 20 minutes. For instance, I use online typing lessons and timed tests to increase my speed and accuracy, and I set a daily goal to type messages and short texts without looking at the keys.
× I like typing more because every day I must practice the listening and reading and do some.
✓ I like typing more because every day I must practice listening and reading and do some exercises.
This sentence has issues with verb forms and missing objects, categorized as a present tense/verb usage problem. 'Practice the listening and reading' is unnatural; 'practice listening and reading' is correct. 'Do some' is incomplete; add a noun such as 'exercises'. Suggest using gerunds after 'practice' and providing clear objects.
× I ask reading on website.
✓ I read articles on websites.
This sentence uses incorrect verb 'ask' and incorrect noun form. The speaker likely means they read material online. Use the verb 'read' and plural 'websites' or 'a website' depending on context. Maintain simple present tense for habitual action.
× So when I must give my answers I need to tie my keyboard and give the best answers.
✓ So when I have to give my answers I need to use my keyboard and give the best answers.
'Must' is acceptable but 'have to' is more natural; main error is 'tie my keyboard' which is incorrect word choice. It should be 'use my keyboard'. This is a sentence structure/verb choice problem. Use 'use' for operating a keyboard.
× A laptop keyboard because you love everyday.
✓ A laptop keyboard because I use it every day.
The student incorrectly uses 'you' instead of 'I' and 'love' is wrong verb. This is a pronoun and present tense issue. Replace with 'I use it every day' to express personal habit.
× When I must go to school, I always use a laptop to study and I have a habit that every day I always type on keyboard.
✓ When I go to school, I always use a laptop to study, and I have a habit of typing on the keyboard every day.
Problems: unnecessary 'must' when expressing routine ('go to school'), awkward phrase 'have a habit that every day I always type' should be 'have a habit of typing... every day'. Also add article 'the' before 'keyboard'. This is present tense and article/structure correction.
× So when sometimes I must use a keyboard or a desktop, I think it's too difficult for me to adapt.
✓ So when I sometimes must use a desktop keyboard, I think it's too difficult for me to adapt.
Redundant 'keyboard or a desktop' is unclear; 'desktop keyboard' is clearer. Keep 'must' or 'have to' for occasional necessity. This is a verb usage and sentence clarity issue.
× Let me see when I was trying around for five years soon in July almost.
✓ Let me see — I started learning about five years ago, around July.
Original is ungrammatical and unclear. Use past tense 'started learning' and time expression 'about five years ago, around July'. This corrects sentence structure and past tense usage.
× My parents also have a simple platforms in typing on keyboard.
✓ My parents also provided a simple typing platform for me.
Errors: 'a simple platforms' mixes singular article with plural noun; 'in typing on keyboard' is incorrect. Correct to 'a simple typing platform for me' or 'simple platforms for typing'. Fix article-noun agreement and preposition use.
× So when I was a child they started to teach for me how to type keyboard with 10 fingers.
✓ So when I was a child they started to teach me how to type on the keyboard with all ten fingers.
Problems: 'teach for me' is wrong preposition/pronoun use; say 'teach me'. 'Type keyboard' needs preposition 'on the keyboard'. '10 fingers' is better as 'all ten fingers'. This fixes pronoun, preposition, and gerund/infinitive usage.
× Everyday SM formation with you every day.
✓ Every day I practice typing with this program every day.
Original is unintelligible ('SM formation'). Interpret as practicing with a program. 'Everyday' should be 'every day' (adverbial phrase). Provide clear subject and verb. This corrects tense and structure.
× I always use my laptop to tie on keyboard.
✓ I always use my laptop to type on the keyboard.
The error is 'tie on keyboard' — wrong verb 'tie' instead of 'type'. Also add article 'the' before 'keyboard'. This is a simple verb choice correction.
× Even I can tie a commitment with my parents and I promise with them I will follow and obey them and I agree in time for example a text and a message that I need to be.
✓ I can even make a commitment with my parents; I promise them I will follow their rules and be on time when replying to texts and messages.
Multiple errors: 'tie a commitment' should be 'make a commitment'; 'promise with them' should be 'promise them'; 'follow and obey them' is redundant—'follow their rules' suffices; 'agree in time' unclear—likely 'be on time' or 'reply on time'. Restructure sentence for clarity and correct verb and preposition usage.