Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and use natural phrasing; add a clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting points with specific examples. Avoid grammatical errors (e.g., "provides you a spelling check" should be "provides spelling and grammar checks"). Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more efficient. For example, typing on a computer gives me spelling and grammar checks that help reduce mistakes, so I can finish reports more quickly and accurately.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence and avoid hesitations and repetitions. Use clear reasons and specific details (e.g., "my course materials are PDFs and online articles"). Correct small errors ("are" → "is/are" depending on noun). Link points with "because" and "also".

Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop because most of my study materials are online PDFs and webpages. Also, I practise on the computer to prepare for computer-based exams like IELTS, so I can improve my speed and accuracy.

Gợi ý: Give a clear timeline and concise supporting detail; avoid fillers and awkward phrases. Use correct verb forms and smoother linking (e.g., "Since then, I have practised regularly, which helped me"). Be specific about how often you practised or how it helped in school or work.

Ví dụ: I learned to type in middle school when our teacher gave us basic keyboard lessons. Since then I have practised regularly, which made typing an important skill for college assignments and later for work.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then give specific methods and frequency. Avoid grammar mistakes ("diving a lot of essay" unclear) and unnecessary repetition. Use linking words like "for example" or "also" and correct phrases ("watch the keyboard" → "look at the keyboard").

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising every day, for example typing essays and assignments on my laptop. I also watch YouTube tutorials to learn touch-typing techniques so I can type without looking at the keyboard and increase my speed.

× One of them is more efficient and faster.

✓ One of them is more efficient and faster than the other.

The sentence uses 'One of them' but does not complete the comparison; pronoun reference and comparison object are missing. Adding 'than the other' clarifies what 'one' is compared to, improving clarity and grammaticality.

× Moreover, typing on the computer and phone provides you as a spelling check and a grammar correction which make your work more efficient and accurate.

✓ Moreover, typing on the computer or phone provides you with a spell checker and grammar correction tools, which make your work more efficient and accurate.

The original has incorrect pronoun/preposition combination 'provides you as' and incorrect noun forms. Use 'provides you with' to indicate what is provided, change 'a spelling check' to 'a spell checker' and 'a grammar correction' to 'grammar correction tools', and add a comma before the relative clause for correct punctuation and agreement ('which make').

× No, I usually type on a laptop when I'm studying because most of the, my material, uh, are online and digital like, uh, BDF and digital, uh, text box.

✓ No, I usually type on a laptop when I'm studying because most of my materials are online and digital, like PDFs and digital text boxes.

The phrase 'most of the, my material' is confused; use 'most of my materials' (plural) to match 'are'. 'Material' can be uncountable, but here plural 'materials' fits. 'BDF' is likely 'PDF', and 'text box' should be plural 'text boxes'. This corrects noun form and agreement with the verb 'are'.

× Moreover, uh, I'm, I'm preparing for take care and IELTS exam on the computer, so I need to practice to be more, uh, faster, uh, on the right.

✓ Moreover, I'm preparing for the TOEIC and IELTS exams on the computer, so I need to practice to become faster and more accurate.

The original contains incorrect names and word choices ('take care' likely intended 'TOEIC'), article and plural errors ('the TOEIC and IELTS exams'), and awkward phrasing 'practice to be more faster, on the right.' Use 'practice to become faster and more accurate' to express the intended meaning with correct comparative form and word order.

× I learned to type in middle school where my teacher taught us typing a basic skills.

✓ I learned to type in middle school where my teacher taught us basic typing skills.

The sequence of past actions is correct, but word order and article use are wrong: 'taught us typing a basic skills' should be 'taught us basic typing skills' to use correct adjective order and count noun form.

× After that, I practice regularly, which it's very impo uh, right timing.

✓ After that, I practiced regularly, which was very important for timing.

The narrator refers to past events, so past tense 'practiced' is appropriate. The clause 'which it's very important timing' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'which was very important for timing' to make a coherent past-tense subordinate clause.

× It's become an important skill.

✓ It has become an important skill.

Contraction 'It's' is ambiguous (it is/it has). In context about a past development, 'It has become' (present perfect) is appropriate to indicate a change over time.

× You should be, uh, known in the work and the college and in everything in your life.

✓ You should be known in the workplace, at college, and in all areas of your life.

The original misuses 'the work' and 'the college'. Use 'the workplace' and 'at college' for natural English, and 'in all areas of your life' for broader scope. This corrects preposition and noun choice errors.

× Actually any skills need to be practiced to improve it.

✓ Actually, any skill needs to be practiced to improve.

Subject-pronoun and number agreement: 'any skills' with singular 'it' is inconsistent. Use singular 'any skill' with singular verb 'needs' and omit the redundant 'it'. Also add a comma after 'Actually'.

× So I'm I'm practicing regularly on these skills, diving a lot of essay and assignment on my laptop.

✓ So I'm practicing these skills regularly, writing a lot of essays and assignments on my laptop.

The verb 'diving' is incorrect; context requires 'writing'. Use plural 'essays and assignments' and correct word order 'practicing these skills regularly' for natural present continuous description of habitual action.

× That's helped me a lot.

✓ That has helped me a lot.

Use present perfect 'has helped' to link past actions to the present. 'That's' contraction is acceptable but expanded form clarifies meaning; original 'That's helped' can be interpreted as 'That has helped', so corrected to full form for clarity.

× Moreover, I'm watching videos on the YouTube to learn new how to write without watch the keyboard to be more faster.

✓ Moreover, I'm watching videos on YouTube to learn how to type without looking at the keyboard so I can be faster.

Remove unnecessary article 'the' before YouTube, change 'learn new how to write' to 'learn how to type', use gerund 'looking' after 'without', and replace 'to be more faster' with 'so I can be faster' for correct comparative and infinitive use.