Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing rather than handwriting because handwriting. My handwriting is terrible. And handwriting. Makes me. Tired.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes, I type on my laptop every day. I use it to study English every day. So typing is my.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I learned how to type for the first time when I began to work. At that time it was difficult for me to type, but I tried to practice many times, so I.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I practiced typing every day about 30 years ago when I began to work.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答は簡潔ですが、文が断片的で不自然です。まずトピック文で直接答え、その後理由をつなぎの語(for example, because, so)を使って述べ、具体例を加えてください。また文法(冠詞・語順)と流暢さを改善するために練習し、不要な反復や短い中断を減らしましょう。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is difficult to read and writing by hand makes my wrist tired. For example, when I take notes in lectures, typing lets me capture more information quickly and organize it later on my laptop.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答は主旨を伝えていますが、終わり方が不完全で繰り返しがあります。トピック文の後に理由や頻度、具体的な用途を短く付け加え、文を完全に締めくくってください。接続詞(because, so, therefore)を使って論理を明確にしましょう。
Ví dụ: Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every day to study English because I type essays, do online exercises, and watch video lessons. As a result, typing has become a daily habit for me.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答は時制と基本構成が正しいですが文末が途切れています。最初に時点を明確に述べ、その後詳細(どんな仕事だったか、どのくらい練習したか)を接続詞でつなぎ、結論で締めましょう。より具体的な数字やエピソードを入れると説得力が増します。
Ví dụ: I learned to type on a keyboard when I started my first job about ten years ago. At first it was very difficult, but I practiced for at least 30 minutes every day, so after a few months I became much faster and more accurate.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答が曖昧で情報が矛盾しています("30 years ago"は練習法として現在形に合わない)。改善方法を述べるときは現在の具体的な方法(練習頻度、使う教材やウェブサイト、目標)を示し、接続詞で理由や効果を説明してください。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing on online typing websites for 20 to 30 minutes each day, focusing on accuracy first and then increasing speed. I also use typing games and do regular timed tests to track my progress.
× I prefer typing rather than handwriting because handwriting.
✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is terrible.
The original has a sentence fragment and an unnatural comparison. Use 'prefer A to B' rather than 'prefer A rather than B'. Also combine the reason into one complete sentence to avoid a fragment; include the subject and verb 'my handwriting is terrible'.
× And handwriting.
✓ My handwriting tires me.
This is a sentence fragment. It lacks a clear subject and verb. Make it a complete sentence by stating 'My handwriting tires me.' or 'Handwriting makes me tired.'
× Makes me.
✓ It makes me tired.
Fragment missing subject and predicate. Use a subject ('It' or 'Handwriting') and complete predicate 'makes me tired' to form a full sentence.
× Yes, I type on my laptop every day.
✓ Yes, I type on my laptop every day.
This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. (Present simple is appropriate for habitual action.)
× So typing is my.
✓ So typing is my preference.
Fragment missing a noun. 'Typing is my' is incomplete; add the noun 'preference' to complete the meaning.
× I learned how to type for the first time when I began to work.
✓ I learned how to type for the first time when I began working.
Both 'began to work' and 'began working' are grammatical, but 'began working' is more natural here. Use consistent verb forms after 'begin'.
× At that time it was difficult for me to type, but I tried to practice many times, so I.
✓ At that time it was difficult for me to type, but I practiced many times, so I improved.
The original ends with a fragment 'so I.' Finish the idea by stating the result ('I improved'). Also 'tried to practice many times' is wordy; use 'practiced many times' for clarity.
× Yeah, I practiced typing every day about 30 years ago when I began to work.
✓ Yes, I practiced typing every day about 30 years ago when I began working.
Use 'Yes' instead of colloquial 'Yeah' in a test situation. 'Began working' is more natural than 'began to work' here; past simple 'practiced' correctly matches the time reference.