Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “I prefer typing.”), avoid unclear words (“phoned”, “needliness”) and repetition, and give one specific reason with a brief example. Use linking words like “because” to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing. Because my handwriting is often messy and hard to read, I find typing faster and neater. For example, I can edit documents easily on my laptop and share them with classmates without worrying about legibility.

Gợi ý: Reduce filler words and be more precise. Start with a clear statement (desktop or laptop), then give one or two specific tasks you do and a reason. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect purposes and results.

Ví dụ: I type on a laptop every day because both my work and studies are digital. For instance, I write emails, reports and essays online, which helps me stay productive and meet deadlines.

Gợi ý: Good structure and specific timeframe. Remove hesitations and slightly expand with one linking word to show sequence (e.g. “then”), and specify the practice duration or improvement with a measurable detail if possible.

Ví dụ: I learned to type about two years ago when my brother gave me my first laptop. After that, I practiced daily with online typing exercises for several weeks, and within a month my speed increased from about 20 to 50 words per minute.

Gợi ý: Clarify and organize your answer: start with a topic sentence describing your main methods, then give specific examples and results. Avoid unclear phrases like “towards per minute educational lessons.” Use linking words such as “first,” “then,” and “as a result.”

Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly by practicing on typing websites and using apps for timed drills. First, I do short daily drills to build muscle memory; then I use lessons that focus on accuracy. As a result, my error rate has decreased and my typing speed has risen steadily.

× Usually I'm phoned.

✓ Usually I'm on the phone.

The student used 'phoned' (past participle of 'phone') incorrectly as an adjective. The correct idiom is 'on the phone' to indicate being engaged in phone calls. Use the prepositional phrase 'on the phone' to describe current or usual phone usage. Suggestion: say 'I'm on the phone' or 'I usually use my phone.'

× I'm quite fond of typing because my handwriting tends to be quite messy messy and people who read it can usually dislike my handwriting because of its needliness.

✓ I'm quite fond of typing because my handwriting tends to be quite messy, and people who read it often dislike it because it looks untidy.

Several issues: repeated word 'messy messy' is a redundancy; 'can usually dislike' is unnatural—use 'often dislike' or 'usually dislike'; 'needliness' is not a correct noun for 'untidy'—use 'untidiness' or better 'looks untidy.' Also avoid repeating 'my handwriting' twice by using a pronoun. Suggest concise phrasing: '... tends to be quite messy, and people who read it often dislike it because it looks untidy.'

× Uh, yes, my work and studies rely heavily uh, on, uh, my laptop in general and uh, usually I tend to type, uh, some, uh, various texts every single day, uh, in order to stay uh, productive and uh, hit all the deadlines.

✓ Yes, my work and studies rely heavily on my laptop, and I usually type various texts every single day to stay productive and meet all the deadlines.

Remove filler words and correct verb choice: 'rely heavily on' is correct; 'tend to type some various texts' is awkward—use 'usually type various texts.' 'In order to stay productive and hit all the deadlines' should be 'to stay productive and meet all the deadlines.' Use present simple for habitual actions. Suggest practicing concise sentence structure and replacing fillers with pauses or brief hesitations only when speaking.

× I learned to type quickly and accurately about two years ago when my brother gave me my first laptop. Uh. After that, I practiced every single day using online typing exercises for a few weeks and my speed and accuracy improved a lot.

✓ I learned to type quickly and accurately about two years ago when my brother gave me my first laptop. After that, I practiced every day using online typing exercises for a few weeks, and my speed and accuracy improved a lot.

Mostly correct tense usage (past simple) for completed past actions. Minor issue: extraneous 'Uh.' and 'every single day' can be shortened to 'every day.' Keep past simple consistently for the sequence: 'gave' -> 'practiced' -> 'improved.' Suggest removing filler words and unnecessary intensifiers for clarity.

× As I just mentioned, I practiced regularly on dedicated typing websites and apps, and consistent time drills help to build, uh, my muscle memory. And over time this improved both my accuracy and towards per minute educational lessons corrected bad habits.

✓ As I just mentioned, I practiced regularly on dedicated typing websites and apps, and consistent timed drills helped build my muscle memory. Over time, this improved both my accuracy and speed per minute, and guided lessons corrected my bad habits.

Original has several structural and word-choice problems: 'consistent time drills' should be 'consistent timed drills' or 'time-based drills'; tense must be past for the completed learning period ('helped' instead of 'help'); 'improved both my accuracy and towards per minute' is ungrammatical—probably intended 'accuracy and speed per minute' or 'accuracy and words per minute.' 'educational lessons corrected bad habits' needs a subject and possessive: 'guided lessons corrected my bad habits.' Rephrase into clear clauses and keep tense consistent. Suggest replacing fillers and choosing precise nouns ('speed' or 'words per minute').