Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds (uh), correct grammar (e.g. “better at typing” not “very great”), and provide one specific reason or brief example. Use a linking phrase if adding a second point.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting. As a software engineer I type every day, so my typing speed and accuracy are much better than my handwriting. For instance, I can draft emails and code much faster on a keyboard, which saves me time.

Gợi ý: Provide a complete sentence and add a short supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid short fragments and be slightly more specific (e.g. model or reason).

Ví dụ: I type on a laptop keyboard every day. I use a personal MacBook for my software engineering work, so I rely on its keyboard for coding and communication.

Gợi ý: Give a clear time reference and reduce repetition and fillers. Start with when, then explain briefly how you were taught, using linking words like “when” or “during”. Be more specific about what you practiced.

Ví dụ: I learned to type at primary school when we had computer classes. Our teacher showed us proper finger placement and we practised touch-typing with exercises and timed drills.

Gợi ý: Structure the answer: start with a topic sentence, then give two linked reasons. Remove repetition and use varied vocabulary (e.g. “practice”, “tasks”, “freelancing”). Mention one specific practice or tool if possible.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly through daily work tasks for my company, which require a lot of coding and documentation. In addition, I do freelance projects in my spare time, and I also use online typing drills to practise accuracy and speed.

× I prefer typing because I'm a software engineer and my typing speed is very great on keyboard.

✓ I prefer typing because I'm a software engineer and my typing speed on the keyboard is very good.

The phrase 'very great' is not natural in English; 'great' and 'very' are redundant together and 'good' fits collocation with 'typing speed'. Also 'on keyboard' needs the definite article 'the' before 'keyboard'. Use 'very good' or just 'great' and include 'the' before 'keyboard' for correctness and naturalness.

× Uh, instead of the writing it I feel some difficulty in handwriting.

✓ Instead of writing by hand, I find handwriting difficult.

The original has awkward pronoun and article placement ('the writing it') and unnatural structure. Replace the phrase with a clear gerund phrase 'instead of writing by hand' and use 'I find handwriting difficult' to express the same idea with correct pronoun and sentence structure.

× I type on laptop keyboard.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard.

English requires an article before singular countable nouns. 'Laptop keyboard' is a singular countable noun phrase and needs 'a'. Using 'a laptop keyboard' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I have personal MacBook and I do my software engineering work on my laptop.

✓ I have a personal MacBook and I do my software engineering work on my laptop.

The singular countable noun 'personal MacBook' requires an indefinite article 'a'. Adding 'a' makes the noun phrase grammatically correct.

× I learned it from my school.

✓ I learned it at my school.

The verb 'learned' is acceptable, but the preposition 'from' is incorrect for indicating where you learned something; use 'at' or 'in' for places. Change 'from my school' to 'at my school' to indicate location.

× Uh, we have computer classes in our school and our teachers, uh, tell us how to type on the keyboard, how we can speed up our hands on keyboard.

✓ We had computer classes at school and our teachers taught us how to type on the keyboard and how to speed up our typing.

Tense should match past context ('learned' earlier), so change 'have' to 'had' and 'tell' to 'taught'. 'Speed up our hands on keyboard' is unidiomatic; 'speed up our typing' is natural. Also use 'at school' instead of 'in our school' for naturalness.

× And we have done much of practice on keyboard.

✓ And we did a lot of practice on the keyboard.

The phrase 'much of practice' is incorrect; use 'a lot of practice' or 'much practice'. Also use past tense 'did' to match previous past events and include 'the' before 'keyboard' for correct article use.

× I improve my typing by doing my daily work of my software engineering, my daily task which my company has assigned me.

✓ I improve my typing by doing my daily software engineering tasks that my company assigns me.

Use present simple for habitual actions ('improve', 'assigns'). 'Daily work of my software engineering' is awkward; 'daily software engineering tasks' is clearer. Use 'assigns me' rather than 'has assigned me' to express repeated current assignments.

× Also at the free time I do some freelancing and my typing speed and typing is getting improved day by day and by daily practice.

✓ Also, in my free time I do some freelancing, and my typing speed is improving day by day with daily practice.

Use 'in my free time' not 'at the free time'. 'Typing speed and typing is getting improved' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'my typing speed is improving'. Prefer present continuous 'is improving' for a gradual ongoing change and 'with daily practice' for natural phrasing.