Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more natural: give a concise topic sentence, then add 1–2 supporting details with correct word choice and linking words. Correct vocabulary errors (e.g., "hand shredding" -> "handwriting" or "hand style"; "tell lectures" -> "remember lectures"). Avoid repetition and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I process ideas more actively, so lectures stick in my memory. Also, my neat handwriting motivates me to review notes more often.

Gợi ý: Good structure and clear reasons; improve naturalness by shortening and using simpler linking words. Replace formal or awkward phrases (e.g., "wherein") with "so" or "which means". Keep answer to 2–3 sentences and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: I type on a laptop every day because we don't have a desktop at home. A laptop is much more convenient and portable, so I can work anywhere, while a desktop stays in one place.

Gợi ý: Good chronological answer. Make it more natural by using past tense consistently and a clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details. Avoid repeating the same idea. Change "bought me a laptop keyboard" to "bought me a laptop" and correct verb forms.

Ví dụ: I learned to type in high school after my father bought me a laptop. I practised a lot doing homework and assignments in Microsoft Word, which helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid repetition: start with a clear statement about methods you use to improve typing (regular practice, exercises, online tools), then give a specific example. Use present tense for ongoing habits and avoid repeating the same origin story twice.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice and targeted exercises. For example, I use online typing tests for 15 minutes a day and type my assignments in Word to build speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting over typing because a lot of people compliments my hand shredding and it makes me more motivated to write and also I can remember.

✓ I prefer handwriting over typing because a lot of people compliment my handwriting and it makes me more motivated to write, and I can remember better.

Problems: 'a lot of people compliments' has subject-verb agreement error — 'people' is plural so use 'compliment' (Grammar Problem Type ID 27). 'hand shredding' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'handwriting' (type 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs / 26 Sentence structure). Also 'I can remember' needs 'better' to complete comparison. Suggestion: Use plural verb with plural subject, replace incorrect noun with 'handwriting', and add 'better' for clarity. Suggested IDs: 27, 13

× I will tell lectures when I write it rather than when I type it.

✓ I will tell teachers when I write things rather than when I type them.

Problems: 'tell lectures' is incorrect word choice — you 'tell teachers' or 'tell lectures' is wrong (Grammar Problem Type 11 Incorrect use of prepositions/12 Incorrect use of pronouns/26 Sentence structure). Pronouns and reference are unclear: 'it' is ambiguous; use 'things' and plural 'them' to match. Also 'will tell' is acceptable if future intent; keep tense consistent. Suggestion: Use 'teachers' and clear plural nouns/pronouns. Suggested IDs: 11,12,26

× I type on a laptop keyboard every day because we don't have a desktop.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because we don't have a desktop computer.

Problem: 'desktop' as a standalone noun is acceptable colloquially but clearer to use 'desktop computer' (Grammar Problem Type 22 Article errors / 13 word choice). Suggestion: Add 'computer' for clarity. No tense issue. Suggested IDs:22,13

× A laptop is much more convenient and very portable, wherein I can bring it anywhere I go, whereas a desktop is stationary and stays on the table.

✓ A laptop is much more convenient and portable; I can take it anywhere I go, whereas a desktop is stationary and stays on the table.

Problems: 'much more convenient and very portable' is redundant — use one intensifier (Grammar Problem Type 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). 'Wherein I can bring it anywhere I go' uses incorrect conjunction/relative adverb 'wherein' (Grammar Problem Type 16 Incorrect conjunction use / 11 Incorrect use of prepositions). Use 'I can take it anywhere I go'. Suggestion: Remove redundancy, replace 'wherein' with a simple clause, and use 'take' instead of 'bring' when speaking of taking the laptop with you. Suggested IDs:13,16,11

× Well, when I was in high school, my father bought me a laptop keyboard, so I did my homework and assignments in Microsoft Word and that's where I learned and practice my typing skills.

✓ Well, when I was in high school, my father bought me a laptop, so I did my homework and assignments in Microsoft Word and that's where I learned and practiced my typing skills.

Problems: 'bought me a laptop keyboard' is odd; likely 'bought me a laptop' or 'bought me a keyboard' (Grammar Problem Type 13 word choice / 22 Article errors). Also tense inconsistency: 'learned and practice' mixes past and present — should be 'learned and practiced' to match past context (Grammar Problem Type 5 Past tense issue). Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for actions that happened in high school and correct the object purchased. Suggested IDs:5,13,22

× Well, practice made it better.

✓ Well, practice made it better.

Original sentence is grammatical but short and slightly unnatural; it is acceptable in past reference. No correction necessary. If improving style, you can say 'Well, practice made me better' or 'Well, practice improved my skills.' (No Grammar Problem Type applicable). Suggested IDs:6

× When my father bought me a laptop keyboard, I started doing my homework in Microsoft Word.

✓ When my father bought me a laptop, I started doing my homework in Microsoft Word.

Problem: 'bought me a laptop keyboard' likely wrong noun; use 'laptop' (Grammar Problem Type 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs/word choice). Tense 'bought' and 'started' are consistent past — correct. Suggestion: Use 'laptop' for clarity. Suggested IDs:13,5

× That's when I started practicing and enhancing my typing skills.

✓ That's when I started practicing and improving my typing skills.

Problems: 'practicing and enhancing' is grammatically acceptable but 'enhancing' is less natural than 'improving' in this context (Grammar Problem Type 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs/word choice). Tense and form are correct. Suggestion: Use 'improving' for a more natural collocation with 'typing skills'. Suggested IDs:13,8