Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify your main idea with a correct topic sentence, correct grammar, and specific supporting details. Use linking words and avoid unclear phrases. For example, say why handwriting helps memory, give a clear example, and keep it to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand during lectures, I can recall details more easily later because writing forces me to summarise and process the ideas.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence saying which device you use, then give concise reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (use 'laptop' not 'notebook' interchangeably) and avoid repetition. Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I use a laptop every day because I am majoring in visual communication design. Since most design software runs on laptops, I need it for class projects and editing, so I rely on it daily.

Gợi ý: Give a clear time statement and explain briefly how you learned, using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid fragmented phrases and be specific about the setting or activities in class.

Ví dụ: I learned to type in elementary school during weekly computer classes. We practised typing lessons and simple exercises on classroom computers, which helped me develop basic speed and accuracy.

Gợi ý: State the main method clearly, then explain how it helps with specific details. Correct vocabulary errors (use 'tools' or 'methods', not 'vessels') and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep it concise.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising in online games and chat platforms because they force me to type quickly and clearly. For example, fast-paced multiplayer games require quick chat messages, which has helped increase my typing speed and accuracy.

× I prefer to handwriting because it helps me to remember where of something.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember things.

The verb 'prefer' can be followed by a gerund (handwriting) or 'to' + infinitive, but not 'to' + gerund. 'To handwriting' is incorrect. Also 'to remember where of something' is ungrammatical; 'remember things' is a clear, grammatical alternative. Suggestion: use 'I prefer handwriting' or 'I prefer to write by hand' and use 'remember' without 'to' here.

× For example and I when I stole the ions I had a lot of writings even if computer.

✓ For example, when I studied the lessons I wrote a lot, even without a computer.

This sentence has multiple structure and word choice errors. 'For example and I when I stole the ions' is ungrammatical and seems to intend 'for example, when I studied the lessons'. 'Stole the ions' is a result of wrong word segmentation; 'studied the lessons' fits context. 'I had a lot of writings' should be 'I wrote a lot' or 'I had a lot of writing'. 'Even if computer' should be 'even without a computer'. Suggestion: simplify and use correct verbs ('studied', 'wrote') and prepositions ('without').

× I type on a notebook every day.

✓ I type on a laptop every day.

The student likely means 'laptop' not 'notebook' (notebook can be ambiguous). If 'notebook' is intended as 'paper notebook', the correct phrase would be 'I write in a notebook' rather than 'type on a notebook'. Also article choices: 'on a laptop' is correct. Suggestion: use precise vocabulary and correct collocations: 'type on a laptop' or 'write in a notebook'.

× Notebook is my soulmate because I am I majoring.

✓ My laptop is my companion because of my major.

The original repeats 'I' and uses 'Notebook' without an article. 'I am I majoring' is incorrect; correct form is 'because of my major' or 'because I am majoring in it.' Suggestion: avoid repeating pronouns and use proper possessive or subject forms: 'My laptop is my companion because of my major' or 'My laptop is my soulmate because I am majoring in visual communication design.'

× I am majoring in visual communication design.

✓ I am majoring in visual communication design.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses the present continuous correctly to describe current study. No correction needed.

× A laptop is essential for this major.

✓ A laptop is essential for this major.

Sentence is correct; 'a laptop' and 'this major' are appropriate. No change needed.

× So I use laptop every day.

✓ So I use my laptop every day.

Missing possessive article 'my' before 'laptop'. Use 'my laptop' for clarity. Suggestion: include appropriate possessive or article when referring to specific items.

× In elementary school, I learned how to type.

✓ In elementary school, I learned how to type.

This sentence is correct; 'learned' correctly uses the past tense to describe a past event. No change needed.

× There were also computer class in our school so when we or have to learn about the how to type so we go there.

✓ There were also computer classes at our school, so when we had to learn how to type, we went there.

Multiple errors: 'computer class' should be plural 'computer classes' or 'a computer class' with correct verb agreement. Use 'at our school' not 'in our school' for classes. 'when we or have to' is ungrammatical; intended 'when we had to'. 'the how to type' should be 'how to type'. Tense consistency requires past tense: 'had' and 'went'. Suggestion: keep plurality and verb tense consistent: 'There were also computer classes at our school, so when we had to learn how to type, we went there.'

× There are really helpful vessels in this.

✓ There are really helpful lessons for this.

'Vessels' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'lessons' or 'resources.' Use 'lessons' or 'resources' to match context. Suggestion: choose vocabulary that matches meaning: 'helpful lessons' or 'helpful resources'.

× I improve my type typing in the game.

✓ I improve my typing in games.

Use the gerund 'typing' after 'improve my'. 'Type typing' is redundant and incorrect. Use plural 'games' if speaking generally. Suggestion: 'I improve my typing by playing games' is even clearer.

× In game we have to chat so rapidly and best and clearly.

✓ In games we have to chat very quickly and clearly.

'In game' should be 'In games'. 'so rapidly and best and clearly' is awkward; use 'very quickly and clearly'. 'best' is unnecessary. Suggestion: use appropriate adverbs and correct word order: 'very quickly and clearly' or 'as quickly and clearly as possible'.