Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more direct with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations and fill words, correct grammar (e.g. "I feel" not "I feels"), and use one or two supporting details with linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences. For example: state your preference, then briefly explain why with a contrast. Watch pronunciation of contractions and article use.

Ví dụ: I like both, but if I had to choose I prefer handwriting for personal things and typing for official communication. For instance, I write my journal by hand because it helps me think more deeply, but I type emails and letters because it is faster and easier to edit.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, avoid repetitions and filler words, fix collocations (e.g. "daily work" not "daily works"), and avoid irrelevant or unclear statements. Limit to 3–4 concise sentences and give one concrete reason or example. Improve coherence using linking words if needed.

Ví dụ: Yes, I type on a laptop every day. I only have a MacBook, which I use for work, study and emails. I find it comfortable and reliable, so I spend many hours on it each day.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear time reference, avoid contradiction (saying laptop then desktop), and use correct tense and phrasing ("I learned to type" not "I learn"). Give one short supporting detail about how you learned. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in grade five. My father bought a desktop computer after I passed a scholarship exam, and I taught myself to type little by little by practicing at home.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence about your improvement methods, avoid vague or incorrect phrases (e.g. "Ben Islands" unclear), and provide specific details such as practice frequency, exercises or resources. Use linking words to explain cause and effect. Keep answer concise (3–4 sentences).

Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly by practicing every day and using online typing exercises. Because I studied information technology, I had many assignments that required fast typing, so I practiced regularly and gradually increased my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer, uh, I don't say like, I prefer handwriting or, uh, typing because I like both, uh, when I write my journal, I prefer handwriting because when I write by my hand, I feels like I, uh, living in my own thoughts, but uh, when it come to text or letter or something, uh, official.

✓ I prefer handwriting and typing because I like both. When I write my journal, I prefer handwriting because when I write by hand, I feel like I am living in my own thoughts. But when it comes to texts, letters, or something official, I prefer typing on my phone or laptop because it is quick and easy to use.

Pronoun and verb form errors: 'I write by my hand' should be 'by hand'; 'I feels' should be 'I feel' (subject-verb agreement); 'I, uh, living' needs auxiliary 'am' to make 'I am living'. 'When it come' should be 'when it comes' (subject-verb agreement). Also clarified pronoun references and made sentences natural and cohesive. Suggestion: use simple subject-verb structures and ensure pronoun matches verb forms; include auxiliary verbs where required. ID:12

× I prefer type by, uh, using mobile phone or laptop because it's very quick and easy to access.

✓ I prefer to type using a mobile phone or a laptop because it is very quick and easy to access.

Missing articles and infinitive form: 'prefer type by, using' should be 'prefer to type using'. 'Mobile phone or laptop' requires articles in this context: 'a mobile phone or a laptop'. Suggestion: after 'prefer' use 'to' + verb when stating a specific action, and include indefinite articles for countable singular nouns. ID:1

× I do, uh, with my laptop. I don't have desktop, I only have MacBook.

✓ I do, with my laptop. I don't have a desktop; I only have a MacBook.

Missing articles: 'desktop' is a countable noun and needs the indefinite article 'a'. 'MacBook' as a product name normally takes the article 'a' when referring to one device. Suggestion: include 'a' before singular countable nouns and use punctuation to separate clauses. ID:22

× I use that every day for my daily works and educational work and also my, umm, official works.

✓ I use it every day for my daily work, my studies, and my official work.

Word choice and plurality: 'works' is awkward here; 'work' is an uncountable noun when referring to general activities. 'Educational work' is better expressed as 'my studies'. Also 'that' referring to MacBook is better as 'it'. Suggestion: use 'work' (uncountable) for general activities and replace repetitive 'work' phrases with clearer nouns. ID:13

× Umm, I like to, umm, spend my time with my laptop because it's very, uh, mindful and relax for my uh. Mentally health because my MacBook is 1 achievable thing of my life.

✓ I like to spend time with my laptop because it helps me relax and is good for my mental health; my MacBook is one important thing in my life.

Incorrect adjective/adverb forms: 'mindful and relax' should be 'helps me relax' or 'is relaxing'. 'Mentally health' should be 'mental health'. '1 achievable thing' is incorrect; use 'one important thing' or 'a meaningful possession'. Suggestion: use 'relaxing' or 'helps me relax' and the noun 'mental health'. Use clear adjectives like 'important' rather than unclear phrases. ID:13

× I actually can't remember the specific date, but I remember when I was grade 5, uh, my father bought me a laptop as a gift because I passed my uh, scholarship, umm, in grade 5.

✓ I actually can't remember the specific date, but I remember that when I was in grade 5 my father bought me a laptop as a gift because I passed my scholarship exam.

Preposition and noun form: 'was grade 5' should be 'was in grade 5'. 'Passed my scholarship' is incomplete; 'passed my scholarship exam' clarifies the event. Past tense 'bought' is correct. Suggestion: include 'in' with grade levels and specify the noun 'exam' after 'scholarship'. ID:11

× Uh, that was the first time I use uh, desktop. It was a desktop actually, not a laptop.

✓ That was the first time I used a desktop. It was a desktop, actually, not a laptop.

Verb tense and article: 'use' should be past tense 'used' to match 'that was the first time'. Also 'desktop' needs the article 'a'. Suggestion: when referring to an event in the past, use past tense verbs. ID:12

× Uh, meet that desktop. I, uh, learn little by little how to type and how to write in the keyboard, type in the keyboard.

✓ When I got that desktop, I learned little by little how to type and how to use the keyboard.

Fragment and verb tense: 'meet that desktop' is incorrect; use 'When I got that desktop' or 'When I first used that desktop'. 'I learn' should be past 'I learned' to match past narrative. 'Write in the keyboard' should be 'use the keyboard' or 'type on the keyboard'. Suggestion: use correct verbs for acquiring (got, received) and 'type on/ use the keyboard'. ID:26

× MMM because ICT is the one of my favorite language I did for my higher study.

✓ Hmm. ICT was one of my favorite subjects when I pursued higher studies.

Wrong word choices and structure: 'the one of my favorite language' is ungrammatical; use 'one of my favorite subjects'. 'I did for my higher study' should be 'when I pursued higher studies' or 'in my higher education'. Suggestion: use 'subject' for academic areas and proper phrasing for studying (pursued, studied). ID:4

× Uh, I did information technology as a major umm. So I have had to uh, learn how to type with my laptop quickly.

✓ I majored in information technology. So I had to learn how to type quickly on my laptop.

Incorrect verb forms and auxiliary usage: 'did information technology as a major' is unnatural; use 'majored in information technology'. 'I have had to learn' is awkward here; simple past 'I had to learn' fits the past context. Also 'type with my laptop' should be 'type on my laptop'. Suggestion: use 'majored in' and past simple for completed past obligations. ID:9

× And I type every day, Uh, I think consistency is the key for, uh, Ben Islands.

✓ I type every day. I think consistency is the key to becoming better.

Incorrect phrase 'key for Ben Islands' appears to be mispronounced or wrong. 'Consistency is the key to' is the correct collocation. Replace unclear phrase with 'becoming better' or 'improvement'. Suggestion: use 'the key to' + noun/gerund and choose a clear phrase for intended meaning. ID:6

× I mean, you learn something, uh, it's applied to myself and I build my ability to.

✓ I mean, when you learn something and apply it, you improve your skills and build your ability.

Pronoun and reflexive errors and incomplete clause: 'it's applied to myself' is incorrect; use active subject 'you apply it'. 'I build my ability to' is incomplete; finish with the intended result 'build your ability' or 'improve your ability'. Suggestion: use active voice ('you apply it') and complete the sentence with what ability is built. ID:26