Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify your main idea with correct vocabulary and simpler sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence saying whether you prefer handwriting or typing, then give one or two specific reasons using correct words (e.g. "handwriting helps me remember things"). Reduce hesitation and repetition. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect reason and result.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing things down helps me remember them better. For example, when I write a to-do list by hand, I rarely forget tasks because the act of writing reinforces my memory.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first, then give two specific reasons and use linking words (e.g. "however", "because"). Correct common grammar mistakes (use "prefer" + noun/gerund, and correct word order). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: It depends: at home I prefer a desktop because the larger screen makes it easier to see and work for long periods. However, at school I prefer a laptop because it is portable and more convenient to carry between classes.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear time reference and then give one specific detail. Reduce filler words and correct tense (use past tense for past events). Use linking words like "when" or "because" if explaining context.

Ví dụ: I learned to use a keyboard when I was eight years old during a computer class at primary school. At first I mainly used it for playing video games rather than for study, so I learned basic typing while having fun.

Gợi ý: Give a clear method for improvement with specific steps or activities and avoid vague or confusing phrasing. Use correct verb forms and explain why the method helps (e.g. "playing games helped my speed and accuracy"). Use 1–2 concise sentences with linking words like "by" or "through".

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing games and exercises, which help increase my speed and accuracy. I also practise typing short paragraphs every day to build consistency and reduce errors.

× Actually I more prefer hard waiting because if you hardwaiting with something will make you more memorable like like mushroom nooks or writing something, writing something will make you more remember this thing you need you gotta do.

✓ Actually I prefer handwriting more because handwriting something makes it more memorable; for example, taking notes or writing things down helps you remember what you need to do.

Errors: incorrect adverb placement ('more prefer' should be 'prefer... more' or simply 'prefer'), incorrect word choice ('hard waiting' and 'hardwaiting' are wrong; intended 'handwriting' or 'handwriting something' and 'taking notes'), missing subjects and verbs and awkward structure. Suggestion: Use correct noun 'handwriting', place 'more' after the verb 'prefer' or omit it, use simple present to express habitual preference, use clear examples such as 'taking notes' and use full clauses with subjects and verbs. Grammar problem type ID: 13 or 20 (use 13 here).

× MMM depends really both. If I typing in my home I would more prefer desktop because you have a bigger screen that you can see clear than what you type.

✓ It depends, really; I like both. If I type at home I prefer a desktop because the bigger screen lets you see what you are typing more clearly.

Errors: verb form 'typing' should be base form 'type' after 'if I', and 'would more prefer' is incorrect for present habits—use 'prefer'. 'You have a bigger screen that you can see clear' has incorrect adjective/adverb usage and clause structure; use 'lets you see... more clearly' and use continuous 'what you are typing'. Suggestion: Use correct conditional structure 'If I type...' and third person singular or base forms as needed, and place adverbs correctly ('more clearly'). Grammar problem type ID: 2

× Umm but if I if I if I at school I'm more prefer laptop because it make you typing more.

✓ But if I'm at school I prefer a laptop because it makes typing easier.

Errors: 'I'm more prefer' is ungrammatical—use 'I prefer'. 'It make you typing more' has incorrect verb agreement and gerund use; use 'it makes typing easier' or 'it makes it easier to type'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement ('it makes') and use appropriate noun or adjective ('easier') instead of 'more'. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Uh, in my impression, umm, I learn how to use keyboard when I'm 8 years old at primary school, in, in some ice, in some technology lessons.

✓ Well, to my recollection, I learned how to use a keyboard when I was 8 years old at primary school, in some technology lessons.

Errors: tense inconsistency—'I learn' should be past 'I learned' because it refers to a past event; 'when I'm 8 years old' should be 'when I was 8 years old'. Also 'in some ice' is incorrect word choice; likely 'in some classes' or 'in technology lessons'. Suggestion: Use past tense for past events and correct nouns ('classes' or 'technology lessons'), and fix 'to my recollection' for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Yeah, that's the first time I touch keyboard, but I'm always, I'm always use it to play some video game instead of studies.

✓ Yes, that was the first time I touched a keyboard, but I've always used it to play video games rather than for studying.

Errors: tense mismatch—'that's the first time' and 'I touch' should be past 'that was the first time I touched'. 'I'm always use it' is ungrammatical—use present perfect 'I've always used it' to indicate a habitual action from past to present. 'Video game' should be plural 'video games', and 'instead of studies' is better as 'rather than for studying'. Suggestion: Use past simple for the specific past event and present perfect for long-term habits; correct noun forms and prepositional phrases. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Uh, the most improved way is about play some video game and make you and make you have a habit that which, which place is the English way?

✓ Well, the best way to improve is to play some video games, which can create a habit of using English more often.

Errors: awkward structure and wrong word choices—'the most improved way is about play' is ungrammatical; use 'the best way to improve is to...'. Repetition 'make you and make you' is redundant. The clause 'that which, which place is the English way?' is unclear; intended meaning seems to be 'habit of using English'. Suggestion: Simplify the sentence: use 'the best way to improve is to...' followed by a gerund or infinitive, avoid repetition, and express the result clearly ('create a habit of using English more often'). Grammar problem type ID: 26