Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 명확하고 이유를 제시한 점은 좋습니다. 다만 중간의 반복적인 말투(예: 'uh', 문장 끊김)와 문법 오류(‘can’t fix the letters if I type wrong letters’ → 의미 모호)를 줄여야 합니다. 더 구체적인 이유(예: 속도, 편집 용이성, 저장 및 공유)와 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 이어보세요. 문장은 2~4개로 유지하고 불필요한 반복을 제거하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient than handwriting. It also makes editing easy, so I can correct mistakes quickly and save my work digitally. For these reasons, I usually choose typing over writing by hand.

Gợi ý: 답변은 직접적이고 이유를 포함하고 있어 좋습니다. 다만 'uh' 같은 비언어적 표현과 문장 중간의 끊김을 줄이고, 문장을 더 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 또한 'Words' 대신 'Microsoft Word'로 정확한 표현을 쓰고, 하루 빈도를 구체적으로 말하면 더 구체성이 높아집니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I need to finish assignments and prepare presentations for university. I usually use Microsoft Word or Google Docs for typing, and I typically work on my laptop for two to three hours a day.

Gợi ý: 시작은 좋지만 문장 구조와 시제 일치(‘I have to learn’→과거형), 중복 표현(‘there there’) 및 불필요한 중단을 고쳐야 합니다. 배경(몇 학년, 어떤 활동으로 연습했는지)을 구체적으로 추가하면 더 설득력 있습니다. 연결어를 사용해 경험의 결과를 자연스럽게 설명하세요.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in elementary school in a computer class. We practiced typing lessons and exercises regularly, which helped me build speed and accuracy. As a result, I can type comfortably now.

Gợi ý: 방법을 제시한 점은 긍정적이나 문장의 연결과 명확성이 많이 부족합니다. ‘I used’라고 끊긴 부분을 완성하고 구체적인 방법(예: 타자 연습 사이트, 속도 연습, 정확성 연습)과 빈도(하루에 몇 분)도 제시하세요. 또한 불필요한 반복과 'uh'를 제거하세요.

Ví dụ: I improved my typing by practicing every day on my laptop, using online typing tutors and drills to increase speed and accuracy. I also chat with friends regularly, which helped me practice typing in real situations, and I spent about 30 minutes a day on these activities.

× I prefer typing because it is more convenient and I can type more text than in paper.

✓ I prefer typing because it is more convenient and I can type more text than on paper.

'in paper' is incorrect; use the preposition 'on' with 'paper' when referring to writing on a sheet. Suggestion: say 'on paper' for comparison with typing.

× And uh, I can't fix the letters if I. Type wrong letters, so that is why I like typing.

✓ And uh, I can't fix the letters if I type the wrong letters, so that is why I like typing.

The sentence had an incorrect capitalisation and missing article. Use lowercase 'type' and include the definite article 'the' before 'wrong letters' to specify which letters. Also combine fragments into one sentence.

× Yes, uh, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have to complete my assignment and prepare my presentations in university.

✓ Yes, uh, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have to complete my assignments and prepare my presentations at university.

'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match general habitual action. Also use preposition 'at university' (see preposition rules). Ensure subject-verb agreement remains correct.

× So I use my laptop every day and I usually use. Words or Google Docs for typing.

✓ So I use my laptop every day and I usually use Word or Google Docs for typing.

'Words' is incorrect; the program name is 'Word'. Remove the stray period. Use correct proper noun and punctuation.

× When I was in elementary school, uh there there was a class named computer classes.

✓ When I was in elementary school, there was a class called computer class.

Duplicate word 'there there' and awkward phrase 'named computer classes'. Use 'there was' plus 'called' and singular 'computer class' for clarity.

× So I have to learn about typing and practice typing everyday.

✓ So I had to learn typing and practice typing every day.

The action took place in the past, so use past modal 'had to' instead of present 'have to'. Also 'everyday' should be two words 'every day' when meaning 'each day'.

× This experience was very helpful because. These days I can type easily.

✓ This experience was very helpful because these days I can type easily.

Unnecessary period breaks the sentence. Combine clauses and keep 'these days' with present ability 'can type'.

× To improve my typing, I practiced typing every day on my laptop or computer and. I used. And uh, I usually chat with my friends on social media and this experience was very helpful for my typing, so This is why I can improve.

✓ To improve my typing, I practiced typing every day on my laptop or computer, and I usually chat with my friends on social media; this experience was very helpful for my typing, so that is why I have improved.

Fix sentence fragments and tense consistency. Use past tense 'practiced' for past actions and present perfect 'have improved' to show result up to now. Remove stray periods and capitalisation errors. Use proper conjunctions and punctuation to connect ideas.