Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장 구조를 간결하고 자연스럽게 고치고, 반복을 피하며 이유를 명확히 제시하세요. 예: 주제문으로 바로 답하고 이어서 업무에서 컴퓨터를 자주 사용한다는 구체적 이유를 연결하세요. 연결어(so, because)를 적절히 사용하고 불필요한 중복을 제거하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because I use a computer a lot at work, so typing is faster and more convenient for me.

Gợi ý: 대답을 한 문장으로 명확히 정리하고, 'it is' 같은 불필요한 반복을 제거하세요. 이유를 구체적으로 설명하며 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 만드세요.

Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I use a laptop for work, and its compact design makes it easy to carry and control.

Gợi ý: 질문에 직접적으로 시기(언제)를 제시하고, 게임 경험이 타이핑 실력에 어떻게 도움이 되었는지 구체적으로 설명하세요. 불명확한 표현('I don't support')을 피하고 문법을 바로잡으세요.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was a child because I played a lot of computer games like StarCraft, which forced me to practice the keyboard and improve my speed.

Gợi ý: 방법을 구체적으로 설명하고, 비용이나 접근성 관련 표현은 명확히 하세요. ‘자연스럽게 늘었다’는 표현을 명확한 문장으로 바꾸고, 연습 방법(게임, 연습 프로그램 등)을 예로 들며 연결어를 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: I haven't taken formal lessons, but my typing has improved naturally because I play computer games often; playing fast-paced games helped me practice reflexes and key accuracy.

× I prefer. I prefer typing. Because I usually use a computer with my company work.

✓ I prefer typing because I usually use a computer for my work.

The original contains sentence fragments and unnatural word order. 'I prefer.' is a fragment; 'Because' cannot start a sentence here. 'with my company work' is incorrect preposition and noun choice. Use 'because' to join clauses and 'for my work' for purpose. Also combine the repeated 'I prefer' into one clear sentence. Suggestions: Combine clauses into one sentence, avoid fragments, use correct preposition 'for'. Use 'I prefer typing because I usually use a computer for my work.'

× I usually type laptop keyboard every day because I use a laptop.

✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because I use a laptop.

Missing preposition 'on' before 'a laptop keyboard' and the article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' is needed. The phrase should be 'type on a laptop keyboard.' Suggestions: Use 'type on' plus the appropriate article: 'on a laptop keyboard.'

× So it is. It is easy to control.

✓ It is easy to use and control.

'So it is.' is unnecessary and 'easy to control' is odd when referring to a laptop; 'easy to use and control' is more natural. Combine into one sentence. Suggestions: Remove redundant filler and choose verbs appropriate to the object (use/control).

× Maybe I don't support when I was young and playing a game.

✓ Maybe I started when I was young by playing games.

'Don't support' is incorrect meaning and wrong tense/modal usage. The speaker likely means 'I started' or 'I learned' typing when young. 'When I was young and playing a game' is ungrammatical; use 'when I was young by playing games' or 'when I was young, playing games.' Suggestions: Use 'started' or 'learned' for the beginning of an action in the past: 'I started when I was young by playing games.'

× Korean people like to play a computer game or StarCraft 2 and.

✓ Korean people like to play computer games like StarCraft 2.

Article 'a' before 'computer game' is optional when speaking generally; the trailing 'and' is incomplete. Use plural 'computer games' for general statements and give an example 'like StarCraft 2.' Suggestions: Use plural for general preferences and avoid dangling conjunctions: 'computer games like StarCraft 2.'

× I don't afford but my typing scares is uh, grow.

✓ I couldn't afford lessons, but my typing skills grew naturally.

'I don't afford' is wrong; 'afford' needs an object and proper tense: 'couldn't afford.' 'my typing scares is uh, grow' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'my typing skills grew.' Use past tense 'grew' if learning happened in the past. Also add 'skills' to clarify 'typing.' Suggestions: Use 'couldn't afford' for past inability and 'typing skills grew' for natural improvement: 'I couldn't afford lessons, but my typing skills grew naturally.'

× Grow up naturally because I usually play a game with computer.

✓ They grew naturally because I usually played games on the computer.

'Grow up naturally' is incorrect for 'skills'; 'play a game with computer' has incorrect preposition and article. Use 'played games on the computer' and 'they grew naturally' (referring to skills). Suggestions: Refer to skills explicitly and use correct prepositions: 'My typing skills grew naturally because I usually played games on the computer.'