Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Well, actually I prefer typing because I think it's a convenient and faster. It can save a lot of time.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Will I take on that portable keyboard every day? Because I I often watch movie and do some homework likes uh, Ethel on my computer.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Well I I learn tadpole on a keyboard when I tried in my pro from my school on computer classes teacher teach teach me typing.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Well, actually I think I do some, uh, tapping aside and practical skills improve my typing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、语法更准确,并在必要时补充具体原因或例子。避免重复词(如“actually”)和语法错误(如“a convenient and faster”)。可以用一到两句补充说明方便之处或适用场景,使用连接词使表达连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's generally faster and more convenient. For example, when I take notes on my laptop I can organize and search them easily, which saves time when I study.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答需直接且清晰。现在句子含糊、有重复和词汇错误(如“Ethel”应为“either”或具体任务)。建议先用一句话明确说明使用哪种设备,接着用一两个具体原因或例子支持,避免填充词和重复。
Ví dụ: I usually use my laptop keyboard every day because it's portable and convenient. For instance, I watch movies and do homework on my laptop, so I don't need a desktop.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答当前语法和词汇错误较多,信息不清晰。应先给出时间点或阶段(例如“at primary school”或“a few years ago”),然后简短说明学习途径(例如“computer class”),避免重复和错误词。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school during computer classes. My teacher showed us the proper finger placement and we practiced with typing exercises.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更具体,说明具体方法和频率,使用连接词让结构清晰。避免含糊短语(如“tapping aside”)。可以提到练习工具、练习时长或进步效果。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing on online typing websites for about 20 minutes a day. I also focus on accuracy first, then gradually increase my speed, which has helped reduce errors.
× Well, actually I prefer typing because I think it's a convenient and faster. It can save a lot of time.
✓ Well, actually I prefer typing because I think it's more convenient and faster. It can save a lot of time.
句中使用形容词比较级时需要保持并列结构一致。原句中用“a convenient and faster”,前者是带不定冠词的单数形容词短语,后者是比较级,二者不一致。应改为“more convenient and faster”或更自然地改为“more convenient and faster”或“more convenient and more efficient”。建议使用“more + 形容词”构成比较级,或将两项都用比较级或都用并列结构。
× Will I take on that portable keyboard every day? Because I I often watch movie and do some homework likes uh, Ethel on my computer.
✓ Do I use that portable keyboard every day? Because I often watch movies and do some homework, like, on my computer.
原句中使用疑问句时动词和助动词时态不当,且人称和动词不一致。“Will I take on”不符合习惯表达,应为一般现在时询问习惯使用“Do I use”。另有名词复数和动词形式错误:movie应为movies,do some homework后不接复数名词“likes”,应为“like”。建议使用简单现在时描述日常习惯,并注意名词复数和动词一致。
× Will I take on that portable keyboard every day? Because I I often watch movie and do some homework likes uh, Ethel on my computer.
✓ Do I use that portable keyboard every day? I often watch movies and do some homework on my computer.
原话包含重复词“I I”、句子分割不当并使用了不完整的从句“Because ...”。用“Because”开启的从句不能单独作为句子。应把内容合并成完整句子,去掉重复并修正词序和词形。建议练习避免句子碎片,保证每句都有主语和谓语。
× Well I I learn tadpole on a keyboard when I tried in my pro from my school on computer classes teacher teach teach me typing.
✓ Well, I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school; the computer class teacher taught me typing.
原句时态混乱且动词形式不正确。描述过去经历应使用一般过去时,learn应为learned,且“teach teach me”重复且应为过去式taught。单词“tadpole”应为“to type”或“type”,“pro”应为“primary school”。建议使用清晰的过去时叙述,并检查单词拼写与动词过去式形式。
× Well I I learn tadpole on a keyboard when I tried in my pro from my school on computer classes teacher teach teach me typing.
✓ Well, I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school; my computer class teacher taught me typing.
原句存在重复词、拼写错误和句子结构混乱(如“when I tried in my pro”不通顺)。需要把时间状语和主句结构清晰表达:用“when I was in primary school”表示时间,用过去时的谓语表达发生的动作。建议简化句子,依次表达时间、地点和动作。
× Well, actually I think I do some, uh, tapping aside and practical skills improve my typing.
✓ Well, actually I practice some typing exercises and practical skills to improve my typing.
原句动词时态和用法不当。“I do some, uh, tapping aside”不符合英语表达,tapping aside不是常用短语。应使用一般现在时表示经常性动作“I practice typing exercises”,并使用不定式“to improve”表示目的。建议多用固定搭配如“practice typing exercises”,“improve my typing”等。