Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more concise and grammatical: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and incorrect prepositions/phrasing (e.g., say "prefer handwriting to typing", "I write in my journal every morning"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect idea and keep within four sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting to typing because I keep a daily journal. Every morning I read the Bible and then write a short devotion and a few verses in my journal, which helps me focus for the day.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence and correct small errors (remove filler sounds like "MMM", avoid repeating words). Provide one clear example and use a linking phrase such as "for example". Keep it concise and natural.

Ví dụ: I type on a laptop every day because it's the only computer I have. For example, I use it to search for jobs and to complete daily tasks like emails and forms.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and a clearer timeline: say when you learned (e.g., "when I was in Grade 1") and give one concise supporting detail about the class or teacher. Avoid uncertain abbreviations and incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in Grade 1 because we had a computer class. The teacher showed us basic typing and we practiced simple exercises on the school computers.

Gợi ý: Answer with a clear topic sentence describing how you improved, then add a specific example and a linking word like "because" or "so". Remove unnecessary phrases and adjust tense consistency ("when I worked").

Ví dụ: I improved my typing by practicing daily at work. When I worked as a medical technologist, I had to enter laboratory results every day, so I gradually became much faster and more accurate.

× I prefer handwriting than typing because I love to write on my journals wherein every time I wake up I always read my Bible and after that I do the devotion and write verses and how it will help me throughout the day.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because I love to write in my journal; every time I wake up I read my Bible, do my devotion, and write verses about how they will help me throughout the day.

Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A than B'. Use 'write in my journal' rather than 'on my journals' (singular 'journal' is more natural). 'Wherein' is formal and unnecessary; break into clearer clauses. Use parallel verbs 'read, do, and write'. Use 'verses about how they will help me' to make meaning clear.

× MMM, since I only have a laptop, that's what I'm using in my everyday task.

✓ MMM, since I only have a laptop, that's what I use for my everyday tasks.

Use simple present for habitual actions: 'I use' rather than 'I'm using'. 'Everyday task' should be plural 'everyday tasks' or 'everyday work'. 'For' is the correct preposition here.

× For example, when I need to to search for a job, I always use my laptop and type it.

✓ For example, when I need to search for a job, I always use my laptop to do that typing.

Remove duplicate 'to'. Use 'to search' (infinitive) after 'need'. 'Type it' is vague; 'do that typing' or 'type my application' clarifies the action. Maintain infinitive structure after 'need'.

× I learned how to type on a keyboard since I was Grade 1, I think BEC.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in Grade 1, I think.

Use 'when' not 'since' for a specific past time. 'Since' requires a starting point continuing to present. 'Grade 1' usually needs 'in' before it. 'BEC' is unclear; remove unless necessary.

× As far as I remember, we had a computer subject that teaches us how to use the computer and from then on during our computer subject our teacher.

✓ As far as I remember, we had a computer class that taught us how to use the computer, and our teacher helped us from then on.

Mixed tenses: use past 'taught' because it's a past class. 'Computer subject' is better as 'computer class'. The original sentence is incomplete; finish the clause by stating what the teacher did.

× Oh, as far as I remember, I used to be so slow at typing and then when I work as a medical technologist in a laboratory wherein we use computer every day, we had to type our laboratory results and from then I got used to it and became fast.

✓ Oh, as far as I remember, I used to be very slow at typing, and when I worked as a medical technologist in a laboratory where we used computers every day, we had to type our laboratory results, and from then I got used to it and became faster.

Consistency of past tense: use 'worked' not 'work'. 'Where' is more natural than 'wherein'. Use plural 'computers'. 'Very' is a better adverb than 'so' for formal correction; 'faster' is comparative adjective. Maintain past tense throughout for a past job.