Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer typing because it is much more efficient. I can type quickly, easily data mistakes and store documents on the cloud for future upsides. For example, when I am researching or writing emails, I often use.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Well, I type laptop keyboard every day. Because of technical development, people often communicate with friends and families on a laptop. Besides, they are possible and convenient, so I can work or study anywhere.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school because I liked playing online games and I need to chat and cooperate with my friends during games, so I practiced a lot.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Well, I use online typing programs to boost my speed and accuracy. For example, I do daily 5 minutes exercise on websites like Typing Club to work on common key combinations and improve my frequency.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然且語法正確;避免語句不完整和用詞錯誤。先給出主旨句,然後用一到兩句具體細節支持,並使用連接詞使語意更流暢。例如修正語法錯誤('easily data mistakes'、'future upsides')並補完未說完的句子。練習時注意發展完整句子且控制在最多五句內。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it is faster and more efficient than handwriting. For instance, I can edit text easily and store documents in the cloud, so I don’t worry about losing my work. When I research or write emails, typing helps me work more quickly and organize information better.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答需更直接且句子要完整。避免笨拙或不恰當的表達(如 'they are possible')。首先回答問題(desktop or laptop),然後用一兩句具體理由支持,使用連接詞如 'because' 或 'so' 來連接想法。注意單複數和詞彙搭配。
Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because laptops are portable and convenient. As a result, I can work or study anywhere, and I can easily stay in touch with friends and family online.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 內容還算具體,但有時態和一致性錯誤('need' 應為 'needed')。可用更簡潔的連接詞來提高流暢度。先交代時間點,再說原因與具體情況,控制在三句內。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school. I needed to chat and cooperate with friends while playing online games, so I practiced a lot to become faster and more accurate.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答清晰且具體,但有些用詞不準確(如 'improve my frequency' 應為 'increase my speed' 或 'improve my typing speed')。數字表達應自然('five minutes a day')。可以用連接詞加一個結果句描述效果。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by using online programs to boost speed and accuracy. For example, I do five minutes of exercises each day on sites like TypingClub to practice common key combinations, and this has helped me type more quickly and with fewer mistakes.
× I can type quickly, easily data mistakes and store documents on the cloud for future upsides.
✓ I can type quickly, avoid data mistakes, and store documents on the cloud for future use.
原句中“easily data mistakes”结构不正确,动词短语搭配错误且意思模糊;“upsides”用法不当,语境中应为“use”(用途/将来使用)。建议将并列动词用连词and连接,并使用正确的动词短语“avoid data mistakes”。(对应问题类型:26 句子结构错误)
× For example, when I am researching or writing emails, I often use.
✓ For example, when I am researching or writing emails, I often use a computer.
原句缺少宾语,句子不完整。需要补充具体宾语(如a computer或my laptop)以使句子完整并与前文内容衔接。(对应问题类型:23 句子缺少动词/宾语导致结构不完整)
× Well, I type laptop keyboard every day.
✓ Well, I type on a laptop keyboard every day.
原句缺少介词on以表明在键盘上打字,导致结构不自然。应使用介词短语“on a laptop keyboard”。(对应问题类型:11 不正确的介词使用)
× Because of technical development, people often communicate with friends and families on a laptop.
✓ Because of technical development, people often communicate with friends and family using laptops.
原句中“friends and families”搭配不自然,通常用“friends and family”或“friends and families”视语境而定;此外“on a laptop”改为复数或更自然的“using laptops”。建议改为“friends and family using laptops”。(对应问题类型:12 人称代词/名词使用及26句子结构)
× Besides, they are possible and convenient, so I can work or study anywhere.
✓ Besides, they are portable and convenient, so I can work or study anywhere.
原句使用“possible”不合适,意想表达“便携的(portable)”。应使用形容词“portable”修饰设备。保持并列形容词顺序合理。 (对应问题类型:13 形容词/副词使用不当)
× I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school because I liked playing online games and I need to chat and cooperate with my friends during games, so I practiced a lot.
✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school because I liked playing online games and needed to chat and cooperate with my friends during games, so I practiced a lot.
句子主要在过去时态,句中“I need”应与上下文时态一致改为过去时“needed”。保持时态一致是必要的。 (对应问题类型:5 过去时问题)
× For example, I do daily 5 minutes exercise on websites like Typing Club to work on common key combinations and improve my frequency.
✓ For example, I do a daily five-minute exercise on websites like Typing Club to work on common key combinations and improve my speed.
原句中“daily 5 minutes exercise”缺少冠词并且数词和名词形式应为“a daily five-minute exercise”。另外“frequency”语义不当,应该用“speed”(打字速度)。建议使用连字符构成复合形容词。 (对应问题类型:22 冠词错误 与14 量词使用)