Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Améliorez la clarté et la précision: commencez par une phrase directe qui répond à la question, évitez hésitations (« uh ») et expressions confuses (« arrived in papers and pants »). Donnez un ou deux détails concrets et utilisez un mot de liaison si nécessaire. Travaillez la prononciation et la fluidité en répétant des phrases simples et pertinentes.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because I find it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I can organize ideas more clearly, which makes studying easier later.

Gợi ý: Rendez la phrase plus naturelle et compacte: commencez par la réponse directe (laptop), puis ajoutez deux détails spécifiques et un lien logique. Corrigez les erreurs de grammaire et d'articles (« my feedbacks », « send for the teachers tasks »).

Ví dụ: I use a laptop every day because I attend online courses and type my notes and feedback. I also submit assignments to my teachers by email, so a laptop is more convenient.

Gợi ý: Structurez votre réponse: dites clairement si vous avez appris formellement ou non, puis précisez quand and how you practiced. Évitez répétitions inutiles et expressions confuses. Utilisez des phrases courtes et un vocabulaire simple pour expliquer le processus d'apprentissage.

Ví dụ: I never had formal typing lessons; I learned by practicing on the computer since I was a teenager. Over time I improved by writing emails and homework daily.

Gợi ý: Donnez une réponse claire et structurée: commencez par la stratégie principale (pratique quotidienne), puis ajoutez des détails concrets sur ce que vous écrivez et comment vous mesurez l'amélioration. Évitez répétitions et précisions vagues (« adventure and disadvantage »).

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by writing every day on my laptop. For instance, I practice by composing short essays on different topics and timing myself to increase speed and accuracy.

× Well, to be honest, I prefer handwriting because, uh, when I was younger I just, uh, arrived in papers and pants. I don't use a lot of phones and uh, I have a luck in the scale typing on computer. Exactly.

✓ Well, to be honest, I prefer handwriting because when I was younger I just wrote on paper. I didn't use phones much and I wasn't good at typing on a computer.

The sentence contains incorrect word choices and awkward adverb/adjective usage. 'Arrived in papers and pants' is nonsensical; replace with 'wrote on paper'. 'I don't use a lot of phones' should be past tense 'I didn't use phones much' to match 'when I was younger'. 'I have a luck in the scale typing on computer' is incorrect; use 'I wasn't good at typing on a computer'. Suggestions: choose accurate verbs, match tense across clauses, and use appropriate adjectives/adverbs ('much', 'good').

× Honestly I use laptop a lot because I have some courses and I need to write like my notes and my feedbacks for the course and send for the teachers tasks.

✓ Honestly, I use a laptop a lot because I have some courses and I need to write my notes and feedback for the course and send tasks to the teachers.

Errors include missing articles ('a laptop' instead of 'laptop'), unnecessary 'like' before examples, incorrect plural 'feedbacks' (uncountable noun 'feedback'), and wrong preposition 'send for the teachers tasks' should be 'send tasks to the teachers'. Suggestions: add necessary articles, remove 'like', treat 'feedback' as uncountable, and use correct prepositions ('to').

× I don't learn the, I don't learn how to type in on keyboard because because I just like technics.

✓ I didn't learn how to type on a keyboard because I just liked technology.

Tense incorrect: speaking about past learning should use past tense 'didn't learn' rather than present 'don't learn'. 'in on keyboard' has wrong prepositions; use 'on a keyboard'. 'like technics' is incorrect word choice; 'liked technology' or 'liked mechanics' depending on meaning. Suggestions: use past tense for past events and correct prepositions 'on a keyboard'.

× This scale automatically for using keyboard one time or one time more than time and, uh, and well, uh.

✓ The keyboard felt natural to use after a few times, and it became automatic.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and incoherent ('This scale automatically for using keyboard one time or one time more than time'). Reconstruction needed to convey intended meaning: repeated practice made using the keyboard automatic. Suggestions: express sequence and result clearly using past tense and linking words ('after', 'and it became').

× Recently I improve my typing because I write every day on laptop exactly when I started to write like an essays about adventure and disadvantage or or any topic.

✓ Recently I have improved my typing because I write every day on my laptop. I started by writing essays about advantages and disadvantages or any topic.

Tense and article issues: 'Recently I improve' should be present perfect 'I have improved' to show recent change. 'on laptop' needs article 'on my laptop'. 'exactly when I started to write like an essays' is awkward; separate into two sentences and use 'essays' with correct modifiers. Also 'adventure and disadvantage' likely intended 'advantages and disadvantages'. Suggestions: use present perfect for recent changes, include possessive/article with devices, correct noun forms and word order.