Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and precise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and incorrect phrases (e.g., “light down”), and give one or two concrete reasons with linking words. Aim for 2–3 sentences only and use correct collocations such as “type up documents” or “create slides.”

Ví dụ: I prefer typing when I work because it is faster and more efficient. For example, I can quickly type up documents and create slide decks, which saves me a lot of time.

Gợi ý: Improve fluency and clarity by removing hesitations and finishing your sentence. Provide a concise reason using linking words (e.g., “because” or “so”). Use correct grammar: “I’m used to my own laptop” or “I’m familiar with my laptop.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I am familiar with my own device, so I can work more quickly and avoid making mistakes.

Gợi ý: Give a clear time reference and correct vocabulary. Replace awkward phrases like “University School student” and “light down the minutes” with “at university” and “take minutes/notes.” Use one linking phrase to explain cause and effect.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was at university because I had to take notes and sometimes write minutes for classes, which helped me improve my speed.

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and specific. Replace vague phrases with concrete actions and correct grammar: “I practise typing at work” and “I use typing apps on weekends.” Use linking words like “also” or “in addition” and give one specific example of an app or practice method.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing mostly by practising at work every day, which builds muscle memory; in addition, I use a typing app like TypingClub on weekends to work on speed and accuracy.

× I especially use computers and it shortened my time to light down, light down some documents or making some decks.

✓ I especially use computers because they shorten the time it takes to write down documents or make decks.

Original errors: incorrect verb forms 'shortened' (past) and awkward phrase 'light down' (wrong verb) and mixed gerund 'making' after 'or' causing parallelism error. Use present tense 'shorten' to match habitual action, replace 'light down' with 'write down', and use parallel infinitive or base verbs 'write down' and 'make' for correct structure. Suggestion: keep verbs in the same form and use correct collocations (write down documents, make decks).

× That's why it's better for me to use keyboards.

✓ That's why it's better for me to use a keyboard.

Original uses plural 'keyboards' while context refers to the device the speaker uses personally. Use singular 'a keyboard' to refer to the general item one uses. Also 'use a keyboard' is the natural collocation. Suggestion: match pronoun/ noun number to intended meaning and typical expression.

× Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day when I work.

✓ Yes, I type on a laptop every day when I work.

Original is not ungrammatical but redundant: 'laptop keyboard' is acceptable but 'laptop' suffices. No tense change needed. Suggestion: simplify to natural phrasing 'type on a laptop'. (This change is optional.)

× I usually use my own laptop and this is because, umm, I can get used to use my own computer This short, uh, this?

✓ I usually use my own laptop because I am used to it.

Original has awkward and ungrammatical phrasing: 'get used to use' combines two structures incorrectly and repeats 'my own computer'. Correct form is 'be/get used to something' or 'be used to using something'. Here present state 'I am used to it' fits. Suggestion: use 'be used to' + noun, or 'get used to' + -ing when describing the process of becoming accustomed.

× I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was in University School student.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was a university student.

Original has wrong word order and form 'University School student' is awkward. Use article 'a' and the adjective 'university' before 'student'. Past tense 'learned' is correct for a past event. Suggestion: use 'a university student' for natural English.

× That is because I have to. Uh, light down the minutes of the class in university and this experience makes me improve my typing.

✓ That is because I had to write down the minutes of the class at university, and this experience helped me improve my typing.

Original mixes tenses and uses wrong verb 'light down'. Use past tense 'had to' and 'helped' to describe a past obligation and its result. Replace 'light down' with 'write down' and use 'at university' for location. Also 'makes me improve' is awkward; use 'helped me improve'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent when describing past experiences and use correct verbs and prepositions.

× I usually type on my daily work.

✓ I usually type as part of my daily work.

Original 'type on my daily work' is ungrammatical because 'on' is wrong preposition and the noun phrase is awkward. Use 'as part of my daily work' or 'in my daily work' to show activity occurs during regular tasks. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and natural collocations.

× This umm, leads to an improvement of my typing skill.

✓ This, um, leads to an improvement in my typing skills.

Use article 'an' is present but collocation 'improvement in' is more natural than 'improvement of'. Also plural 'typing skills' is more idiomatic. Suggestion: use 'improvement in' and 'typing skills'.

× In addition, on weekends I usually using the apps for typing games.

✓ In addition, on weekends I usually use apps for typing games.

Original has incorrect verb form 'using' after auxiliary 'usually' where the base verb 'use' is required. Remove 'the' unless referring to specific apps; 'apps for typing games' is natural. Suggestion: after adverbs like 'usually' use base verb form, or use 'I am usually using' for continuous habitual actions with 'be' verb.