Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid filler words ("like", "uh"); start with a clear topic sentence, briefly give one or two specific reasons, and use linking words (e.g. "however", "because") to contrast situations. Also correct small grammar errors ("more better" → "better").

Ví dụ: I prefer typing for most tasks because I can type much faster and rely on spellcheck to reduce mistakes. However, for personal or formal letters I choose handwriting because it feels more personal and thoughtful.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct sentence stating which you use, then add concise supporting details with clearer vocabulary and fewer repetitions. Correct role phrase ("warehouse associate") and avoid redundant words like "so" repeated. Use linking words like "because" and "therefore."

Ví dụ: I type on a desktop every day because I work as a warehouse associate and the site only provides desktop computers for data entry and receiving tasks. Therefore I rely on the desktop for all my typing work.

Gợi ý: Use past tense consistently and give a clear time reference in one or two sentences. Replace informal expressions ("3rd standard") with natural phrasing ("third grade") and combine sentences with linking words like "when" or "during."

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in third grade during my first computer lab class. That was the first time I used a computer and the teacher showed us basic typing and how to use the keyboard.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence about your main method, then add specific current tools and how they help, using linking words ("nowadays", "for example"). Avoid hesitations and improve verb forms ("I used" → "I used to").

Ví dụ: I improved my typing by practicing regularly in Notepad, copying paragraphs from books to build speed and accuracy. Nowadays I also use websites and apps like TypingMaster, which help me practice with games and exercises to increase speed and reduce errors.

× Like it depends upon the situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

The original uses 'Like' as a filler and 'depends upon' is acceptable but 'depends on' is more natural; 'it' is fine. Remove filler and use standard preposition. Suggestion: start sentences without 'like' and use 'depends on'.

× Like in the typing I can type faster but if I have to write a letter physical letter then I have to prefer with the handwriting.

✓ When typing, I can type faster, but if I have to write a physical letter, I prefer handwriting.

Errors: unnecessary filler 'Like', redundant phrase 'letter physical letter', incorrect 'have to prefer with'. Fix by reordering: use 'when typing', 'prefer handwriting', and place article 'a' before 'physical letter'.

× But typing is more better because you can turn on the auto correction and there is a less chance of uh in correction.

✓ But typing is better because you can turn on autocorrect and there is less chance of incorrectness/errors.

'More better' is a double comparative (use 'better'). 'Auto correction' is better expressed as 'autocorrect' or 'auto-correction'. 'a less chance of in correction' is incorrect; use 'less chance of errors' or 'fewer errors'. Remove filler 'uh'.

× So I work in a warehouse as a warehouse associated.

✓ I work in a warehouse as a warehouse associate.

'Associated' is incorrect form; the correct noun is 'associate'. Also remove leading 'So' and redundant 'a warehouse' repeated; keep 'a warehouse' and 'warehouse associate'.

× I usually work on desktop because I have to put do the data entry and receiving stuff so so on over there only desktop computers are available.

✓ I usually work on a desktop because I have to do data entry and receiving tasks, and only desktop computers are available there.

Problems: 'work on desktop' needs article 'a desktop'; 'put do' is wrong — use 'do'; 'receiving stuff' is informal — use 'receiving tasks'; 'so so on' is filler; word order improved by moving 'only desktop computers are available there'.

× So I use desktop computer every day for typing.

✓ So I use a desktop computer every day for typing.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'desktop computer'. Keep present simple tense 'use'. Remove filler 'So' where possible.

× I learn typing on keyboard.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard.

Tense error: the action happened in the past, so use past tense 'learned'. Also use infinitive 'to type' and include article 'the' before 'keyboard'.

× When I was child I was studying in 3rd standard.

✓ When I was a child, I was in 3rd grade.

Missing article 'a' before 'child'; 'studying in 3rd standard' is non-native phrasing — use 'in 3rd grade' or 'in the third grade'. Include comma after time clause.

× On that time they do a first computer lab practice.

✓ At that time, we did our first computer lab practice.

Use past tense 'did' not 'do'; preposition 'At that time' is correct; 'they' likely refers to 'we' (teacher and students) — adjust pronoun for clarity; include possessive 'our'.

× So on that time they told us how to type and how to use the computer.

✓ So at that time they taught us how to type and how to use the computer.

Use past tense verb 'taught' instead of 'told' for instruction; use 'at that time' not 'on that time'. 'Told us' can be correct but 'taught us' is clearer for learning.

× That is the first time I use computer in my life.

✓ That was the first time I used a computer in my life.

Tense mismatch: use past tense 'was' and 'used' for past event; include article 'a' before 'computer'.

× To be very honest, I used to use notepad.

✓ To be honest, I used to use Notepad.

Minor: 'To be very honest' is okay but 'To be honest' is more natural. Capitalize 'Notepad' if referring to the program. 'Used to' indicates a past habitual action, which fits if the student no longer does it.

× I just take a book and try to type the paragraphs by my own.

✓ I would take a book and try to type the paragraphs on my own.

Tense and phrasing: use past habitual 'would take' or 'used to take' if speaking of past practice; 'by my own' is incorrect — use 'on my own'.

× But nowadays there are too many websites or the applications from which we can practice.

✓ But nowadays there are many websites and applications where we can practice.

'Too many' implies excess — use 'many' unless criticizing. 'or the applications' is incorrect; use 'and applications'. 'From which we can practice' is awkward — use 'where we can practice'.

× Like the typing master.

✓ For example, TypingMaster.

'Like' as filler is unnecessary; 'Typing Master' likely is a proper noun — use correct name 'TypingMaster' or 'Typing Master' and present as an example. Better to link to previous sentence: 'For example, TypingMaster.'

× It really helps to improve your typing while playing games or typing the words.

✓ It really helps improve your typing by letting you play games or type words.

Use 'helps improve' (no 'to') or 'helps to improve' both acceptable; streamline phrasing: 'by letting you play games or type words'. 'Typing the words' is redundant; use 'type words'.