Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I think I prefer handwriting. For example, this time, this iOS test, I can choose to typing or handwriting, but I eventually choose handwriting because I think I'm used to handwriting. In my practice time. I usually write on my iPad. So I think I am a person who prefer more on handwriting.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
No, I don't. I don't usually tap on desktop or laptop keyboard every day because I still use. I've had to take a note, so I still use handwriting more than typing on the keyboard.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
The time that I learned how to type on a keyboard is when I was studying in elementary school. During the elementary school time, my teacher taught me how to type on my keyboard and after that I graduated from elementary school, I having a typing lessons test on my Senior High School.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I think the only way to improve my typing speed is practice and practice. For example, during the time that I was studying in Senior High School, I would like to have in the lessons of typing English. So I practice and practice every day on typing on the keyboard.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 句子结构和连贯性需改进:回答要更简洁自然,开头给出明确主旨句,然后用一两句具体原因和例子支持。注意时态和冠词等小错误,避免重复表达(如“I think”多次出现)。可以使用连接词如“because”或“so”让逻辑更清晰。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember things better. For example, when I take notes on my iPad I write by hand, which makes it easier to review later. So although I can type, I usually choose handwriting for studying.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更直接且句子更流畅:先直接回答,然后给出一到两点具体原因。避免语法错误和不完整句(如“because I still use.”)。用流利的连接词(because, so, therefore)连接原因与结论。
Ví dụ: No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day because I usually take notes by hand. As a result, I rarely use a keyboard except for long documents or emails.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 需要更自然的时态和更简洁的表达:用一到两句说明学会打字的大致时间和具体场合,避免冗长重复。注意动词形式(例如 use past tense: 'I had a typing lesson')。可用连接词如“then”或“later”说明时间顺序。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in elementary school, where my teacher taught basic keyboard skills. Later, in senior high school, I took a formal typing test to improve my speed.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答要具体说明练习方法和频率:除了反复练习,还可以提到具体练习工具、练习内容(盲打、速度练习、在线练习网站)和练习时长。减少重复词句,使用有组织的结构。
Ví dụ: I improved my typing mainly through daily practice. For instance, in senior high school I spent 20–30 minutes a day on typing exercises, focusing on touch-typing and speed drills using online practice sites.
× I think I prefer handwriting. For example, this time, this iOS test, I can choose to typing or handwriting, but I eventually choose handwriting because I think I'm used to handwriting.
✓ I think I prefer handwriting. For example, this time, this iOS test, I can choose to type or handwriting, but I eventually chose handwriting because I think I'm used to handwriting.
问题类型:动词后接 -ing 形式 或 动词不定式使用错误(Grammar Problem Type ID: 8)。“choose” 后面应接不定式 to + 动词原形或直接接动词原形(在某些结构中),不是动名词“typing”。另外时态一致性问题:前文为过去发生的选择,应该用过去时“chose”。建议:在“choose”后使用“to type”或“type”,并把“choose”改为过去时“chose”。
× In my practice time. I usually write on my iPad.
✓ In my practice time, I usually write on my iPad.
问题类型:介词/标点使用错误(Grammar Problem Type ID: 11)。原句“In my practice time.”不应为独立句,句号断开导致句子碎片。应与后句连接并用逗号。建议:将句子合并并使用逗号,保证连贯性。
× So I think I am a person who prefer more on handwriting.
✓ So I think I am a person who prefers handwriting more.
问题类型:代词/主谓一致等(Grammar Problem Type ID: 12 与 27)。“person who”作主语单数,谓语动词应为三单“prefers”(Grammar Problem Type ID:2/27)。此外短语“prefer more on handwriting”用法不自然,正确为“prefer handwriting more”。建议:把动词改为“prefers”,并调整词序为“handwriting more”。
× No, I don't. I don't usually tap on desktop or laptop keyboard every day because I still use.
✓ No, I don't. I don't usually type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day because I still take notes by hand.
问题类型:句子结构错误(Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)和词汇使用(动词“tap”不合适)。原句末尾“不完整:because I still use.”缺少宾语和明确表达。应该使用“type”而非“tap”,并说明用手写记笔记。建议:将“tap”改为“type”,并补全原因为“take notes by hand”。
× I've had to take a note, so I still use handwriting more than typing on the keyboard.
✓ I've had to take notes, so I still use handwriting more than typing on the keyboard.
问题类型:动词后接 -ing 形式 或 名词复数问题(Grammar Problem Type ID:8 与 1)。常用短语为“take notes”(复数),不是“take a note”。建议:将“a note”改为复数“notes”。句子中“typing”用法可以保留(动名词作比较对象)。
× The time that I learned how to type on a keyboard is when I was studying in elementary school.
✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was studying in elementary school.
问题类型:时态/句子结构(Grammar Problem Type ID:6 与 26)。原句冗长且时态表达重复,应使用简单过去时“I learned... when I was...”更自然。建议:简化为时间状语从句并使用过去时。
× During the elementary school time, my teacher taught me how to type on my keyboard and after that I graduated from elementary school, I having a typing lessons test on my Senior High School.
✓ During elementary school, my teacher taught me how to type on the keyboard. After I graduated from elementary school, I had typing lessons and a test in senior high school.
问题类型:介词/短语和动词形式错误(Grammar Problem Type ID:11、8、26)。“During the elementary school time”不自然,应为“During elementary school”。“I having a typing lessons test”动词形式错误,应为过去时“had”,且“typing lessons test”应拆分为“typing lessons and a test”或“a typing-lesson test”。大小写“Senior High School”也不需要大写每个词。建议:调整为自然表达并使用过去时。
× I think the only way to improve my typing speed is practice and practice.
✓ I think the only way to improve my typing speed is practice, practice, and practice.
问题类型:冠词/表达重复(Grammar Problem Type ID:22)。原句缺少连词或标点使表达不自然。可以通过重复并用逗号增强口语强调,或改为“is to practice again and again”。建议:使用“practice, practice, and practice”或改为“不停练习”的不定式结构。
× For example, during the time that I was studying in Senior High School, I would like to have in the lessons of typing English.
✓ For example, when I was studying in senior high school, I had typing lessons in English class.
问题类型:介词和时态/句子结构错误(Grammar Problem Type ID:11、6、26)。“I would like to have in the lessons of typing English”结构不正确。应直接陈述过去经历:I had typing lessons in English class 或 I took typing lessons. 建议:使用“when I was”引出过去时间,并用“had”或“took”来描述过去的课程。
× So I practice and practice every day on typing on the keyboard.
✓ So I practiced and practiced every day typing on the keyboard.
问题类型:动词形式与时态(Grammar Problem Type ID:8 与 5)。前文指过去习惯,应使用过去时“practiced”。短语“practice on typing”冗余,改为“practiced... typing on the keyboard”更自然。建议:把动词改为过去时并删除多余的介词“on”。