Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more concise, natural and organized. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and unclear phrases like "it's a scenery" or "I feel like ceremony."

Ví dụ: Yes. I usually look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the passing landscape. For example, I often try to notice interesting buildings or fields and sometimes take photos to remember the trip.

Gợi ý: Provide a complete, grammatically correct response with specific details and linking words. Avoid pronunciation errors (e.g., "portos" → "photos") and finish your sentences. Mention when and why you review the photos to add content.

Ví dụ: Yes. I often take photos from the car window because I want to capture beautiful scenes during a trip. Later, I look back at these images to remember the journey and to share the best ones with my friends.

Gợi ý: This answer is clear and relevant but can be improved with more precise vocabulary and better linkage. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and add one specific example or comparison to strengthen the response.

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood: sometimes I prefer the mountains, and sometimes the sea. For example, I prefer the mountains in winter because there are ski resorts near my town, while in summer I choose the sea because I enjoy swimming and relaxing on the beach.

× It's a scenery when traveling by bus or by car uh, because I always uh, try to capture the moment uh, and uh, I also in this time I feel uh, more uh, comfortable and uh, I feel like uh, ceremony.

✓ It's a beautiful scenery when traveling by bus or by car, because I always try to capture the moment, and at that time I feel more comfortable and calm.

The word 'scenery' is a non-count noun and should not take the indefinite article 'a'. 'In this time' is incorrect; 'at that time' or 'at those times' is appropriate. 'Ceremony' is the wrong word choice; 'calm' fits the intended meaning. Also remove filler words and correct punctuation to improve clarity.

× Yes Sir, I take portos of the scenery outside the car window because when I travel by car I always try to capture the beautiful moments and also later I throw back and when I see this beautiful photos I.

✓ Yes Sir, I take photos of the scenery outside the car window because when I travel by car I always try to capture beautiful moments, and later I look back at these photos.

Correct 'portos' to 'photos'. 'The scenery' is acceptable but can be left as 'scenery'; drop 'the' if speaking generally. 'I throw back' is incorrect; use 'I look back at' or 'I look back on'. 'These photos' is a correct demonstrative with plural noun; 'this beautiful photos' is wrong because 'this' should be 'these'. Remove the incomplete ending and finish the sentence.

× Actually it depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer mountains and sometimes I prefer sea.

✓ Actually it depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer the mountains and sometimes I prefer the sea.

When referring to types of natural features in general with preference, English commonly uses the definite article 'the' before 'mountains' and 'sea' (the mountains, the sea). This is an article usage tied to general nouns of geography.

× I like mountains in the winter because there are many resorts near my town and also I like sea in the summer because it's very beautiful and also I like swimming.

✓ I like the mountains in winter because there are many resorts near my town, and I also like the sea in summer because it's very beautiful and I enjoy swimming.

Use 'the mountains' and 'the sea' when speaking generally about these features. 'In the winter' can be shortened to 'in winter' or use 'the winter'; both are acceptable, but be consistent. Replace 'I like swimming' with 'I enjoy swimming' to sound more natural. Also fix conjunctions and punctuation for fluency.