Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, correct grammar and use clear reasons with linking words. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Pay attention to verb forms, articles, and avoid repetition. For example, replace phrases like “it can helps me” with “it helps me” and clarify unclear parts (e.g., “unwill my mom” unclear — perhaps you meant “unplug from my phone” or “give my mom a break”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching changing landscapes. For example, I find countryside views calming, and looking outside helps me relax and disconnect from my phone. Therefore, it’s a good way to rest during a journey.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and one specific detail. Use correct verb tenses and simpler vocabulary if unsure. Avoid filler words and repetition. Use a linking phrase like “for example” or “because” to show reason. Fix grammar: “I capture and keep these moments for myself” and “I look at the pictures to remember special times.”

Ví dụ: Only when the scenery is especially beautiful do I take photos. For example, I often photograph mountain views or sunsets and save them on my phone so I can look back and remember that trip.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give two specific reasons with accurate vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words like “because” and “also.” Correct verbs and nouns (e.g., “surfing,” “seafood,” “I can relax in the atmosphere” should be “I can relax in a peaceful atmosphere”). Avoid informal fragments like “It's all daily sauce.”

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I enjoy surfing and eating fresh seafood by the shore. Also, I love listening to the sound of the waves because it helps me relax and feel peaceful.

× Yes, I always look out the windows when I travel by bus or car.

✓ Yes, I always look out the window when I travel by bus or car.

The phrase 'look out the windows' uses a plural noun but the context refers to a single window of the bus or car in general; 'the window' is more natural. This is a plural/article issue (IDs 1 and 22). Suggestion: use 'the window' or 'the windows' consistently depending on whether you mean one vehicle's window or multiple windows; in general speaking use singular 'the window.'

× I really love it because sometimes I feel really amazing for me and so it can helps me relax and break break far from the phone so I can unwill my mom.

✓ I really love it because sometimes I feel really happy, and it helps me relax and take a break from my phone so I can avoid bothering my mom.

Multiple problems: 'amazing for me' is awkward and should be 'happy' or 'amazed' (word choice/adjective issue ID 13). 'It can helps' is subject-verb agreement and modal misuse: after 'can' use base verb 'help' not 'helps' (IDs 2 and 4). 'Break break far from the phone' is incorrect structure; use 'take a break from my phone' (sentence structure ID 26). 'Unwill my mom' is incorrect word choice; likely 'avoid bothering my mom' (pronoun/word use ID 12/13). Suggestion: simplify phrases and use base verbs after modals, and choose correct adjectives.

× Just when I travel, the scanneries were very amazing, beautiful.

✓ Whenever I travel, the scenery is very beautiful and amazing.

'Scanneries' is incorrect plural; 'scenery' is an uncountable noun (plural issue ID 1 / article ID 22). 'Were' shifts to past tense unnecessarily; present simple 'is' fits the habitual action (present tense issue ID 6). Reorder adjectives to 'beautiful and amazing' for natural word order (ID 18). Suggestion: use 'scenery' and present tense for general statements.

× I always capturing and keep this moment for for my myself, and I always, uh, look at the picture to drilling the time and unforgettable memorize.

✓ I always capture and keep these moments for myself, and I often look at the pictures to remember those unforgettable times.

'I always capturing' uses wrong verb form; use base form 'capture' with simple present (present tense/verb form IDs 6 and 8). 'Keep this moment for for my myself' has duplicate words and wrong pronoun; use 'these moments for myself' (pronoun and plural issues IDs 12 and 1). 'Look at the picture to drilling the time and unforgettable memorize' mixes gerunds and nouns incorrectly; use 'look at the pictures to remember those unforgettable times' — 'remember' is correct verb and 'unforgettable times' is correct noun phrase (verb form and sentence structure IDs 8 and 26). Suggestion: use simple present for habits, correct pronouns, and 'remember' rather than 'drilling' or 'memorize' in this context.

× I prefer the sea because I can surfing and eat some seafood by the sea.

✓ I prefer the sea because I can surf and eat seafood by the sea.

After modal 'can' use base verb 'surf' not gerund 'surfing' (modal/verb form IDs 4 and 8). 'Eat some seafood' is acceptable but 'eat seafood' is more natural here; 'by the sea' is fine. Suggestion: use base verbs after modals and avoid unnecessary words like 'some' unless specifying quantity.

× It's all daily sauce and I can hear the wave of the sea.

✓ The atmosphere is refreshing and I can hear the waves of the sea.

'It's all daily sauce' is incorrect idiom and unclear; likely intended 'It's a daily source of relaxation' or 'The atmosphere is refreshing' (word choice/adjective ID 13). 'Wave' should be plural 'waves' because you usually hear many waves (singular/plural ID 1). Suggestion: use clear idiomatic expressions and correct plurality for countable nouns.

× It's so incredible and I can chilling and relax the atmosphere.

✓ It's so incredible and I can chill and relax in that atmosphere.

After 'can' use base verb 'chill' not gerund 'chilling' (modal/verb form IDs 4 and 8). 'Relax the atmosphere' is incorrect collocation; you relax in an atmosphere, or the atmosphere relaxes you. Use 'relax in that atmosphere' (preposition and collocation IDs 11 and 13). Suggestion: use correct verb forms after modals and appropriate prepositions for collocations.