Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Keep your answer clear, avoid repetition, and use correct grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and article use (e.g., "when I travel" not "when I traveling") and avoid repeating words like "enjoy" twice.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching different landscapes. For example, I especially like seeing deserts and small villages, as they give me a sense of place and make the journey more interesting.

Gợi ý: Provide a concise, grammatical response and be specific about frequency and reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct collocations ("take photos" rather than "take photo", "natural views" or "beautiful scenery"). Avoid repeating words and fix word order.

Ví dụ: Not always, but sometimes I take photos when I see attractive natural scenery. For instance, if there is a striking mountain or a colorful sunset, I will take a quick photo to remember the view.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and organize your reasons clearly. Use correct pluralization and verbs ("mountains give me good vibes and make me feel refreshed"). Limit to one topic sentence plus one or two supporting details, linked with words like "because" or "for example". Avoid fragmented sentences and vague expressions.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because they give me a peaceful atmosphere and make me feel refreshed. For example, hiking among tall trees and breathing fresh air helps me relax much more than visiting beaches, where I often find it crowded.

× Yes, I look out the window at the scenery when I traveling by bus or car because I love to watch desert and I enjoy enjoy the view of places when I am traveling so.

✓ Yes, I look out the window at the scenery when I am traveling by bus or car because I love to watch the desert and I enjoy the view of places when I am traveling.

The sentence omits the auxiliary verb 'am' before the present participle 'traveling'; English uses the present continuous 'am traveling' for ongoing actions. Also 'desert' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific landscape in general, and the duplicated word 'enjoy' and the trailing 'so' are unnecessary. Suggestion: use 'am traveling', include 'the' before 'desert', remove the duplicate 'enjoy' and the final 'so' for a fluent sentence.

× Not every time, but sometimes I take photo of the scenery outside the car window whenever I I see natural and good. View of the nature.

✓ Not every time, but sometimes I take photos of the scenery outside the car window whenever I see something natural and beautiful, or a nice view of nature.

'Take photo' should be pluralized to 'take photos' when referring to photos in general (singular/plural issue combined), and 'whenever I I see' has a duplicate 'I'. 'Natural and good' is an incorrect adjective choice and order; use 'natural and beautiful' or 'something natural and beautiful'. 'View of the nature' is incorrect article/preposition usage; use 'view of nature' or 'a nice view of nature'. Suggestion: pluralize 'photo', remove duplicate words, choose appropriate adjectives, and correct the noun phrase 'view of nature'.

× I prefer the mountain because mountain give me good vibes and feel refreshed.

✓ I prefer the mountains because they give me good vibes and make me feel refreshed.

'Mountain' should be plural when expressing a general preference ('the mountains') and the subject-verb agreement requires 'mountains give' rather than 'mountain give'. Using 'they' refers back to 'mountains'. 'Feel refreshed' needs a subject ('make me feel refreshed') or reflexive construction; here 'make me feel refreshed' is natural. Suggestion: pluralize 'mountain' to 'mountains', match verb agreement, and include 'make me' before 'feel refreshed'.

× Refreshed.

✓ I feel refreshed.

A single word 'Refreshed.' is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. To express the intended idea, use a full clause such as 'I feel refreshed.' Suggestion: include subject and verb to complete the sentence.

× Traveling in sea is.

✓ Traveling at sea is not as good for me.

'Traveling in sea is.' is an incomplete sentence and uses an incorrect preposition; the correct phrase is 'at sea' or 'by the sea'. The sentence also lacks a complement. Suggestion: use 'Traveling at sea is not as good for me.' or 'Traveling by the sea is not as refreshing.' depending on intended meaning.

× Travelling in mountain is far better than travelling in sea.

✓ Traveling in the mountains is far better than traveling at sea.

Use 'the mountains' and 'at sea' for natural collocations. Also the noun forms should be plural when speaking generally about mountains, and include the definite article 'the' with 'mountains'. Consistent spelling of 'traveling' (single or double l) is acceptable depending on variety; maintain one form. Suggestion: use 'Traveling in the mountains is far better than traveling at sea.'

× Mountains are so good then see so.

✓ Mountains are so beautiful to see.

The original phrase 'so good then see so' is ungrammatical and misuses 'then' and 'so'. A concise correction is 'Mountains are so beautiful to see.' which uses proper adjective placement and infinitive construction. Suggestion: simplify to a clear adjective phrase such as 'so beautiful to see'.