Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and use present simple for habitual actions. Remove fillers ("umm") and give one specific supporting detail. Use linking words if adding another sentence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because it helps me feel like I’m really on a journey. For example, I enjoy watching changing landscapes, such as fields and small towns, pass by.

Gợi ý: Use clear nouns and simple sentence structure. Correct word choices (e.g. "scenery" not "Canary") and remove unclear fragments. Give one clear reason and an example, using a linking word like "because" or "especially".

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window, especially when we drive through mountains, because the views are very picturesque and I want to keep memories of them.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence stating your preference. Give one or two specific reasons using correct vocabulary (e.g. "sea" or "mountains") and linking words like "because" or "because of". Avoid unclear words and fragments.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I enjoy the wide horizon and the calming sound of waves. For example, sitting on the beach helps me relax and clear my mind.

× Yes, I looked out the window because it feels like, umm, I'm traveling.

✓ Yes, I look out the window because it feels like I'm traveling.

The student mixed past tense 'looked' with present-tense context 'it feels' and 'I'm traveling'. All parts should match present tense when describing habitual actions. Use 'look' (simple present) for habitual behavior: 'I look out the window.' Keep 'it feels' and 'I'm traveling' in present form for consistency. Suggestion: Use simple present for routines: 'I look out the window because it feels like I'm traveling.'

× The landscape is so good everywhere.

✓ The landscape is beautiful everywhere.

'Good' is an adjective but 'landscape' is better described with adjectives like 'beautiful' or 'scenic'. Also 'everywhere' is acceptable but 'scenic everywhere' or 'beautiful everywhere' reads more natural. Suggestion: Replace 'good' with 'beautiful' or 'scenic' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, I often take photos of those Canary outside the car window, especially when traveling through picturesque and area like mountains.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window, especially when traveling through picturesque areas like mountains.

Multiple problems: 'Canary' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'scenery'. 'picturesque and area like mountains' is ungrammatical: 'areas like mountains' requires plural 'areas' and 'like' to compare. Present participle 'traveling' is fine but the surrounding nouns must be correct. Suggestion: Use 'scenery' for general views and 'areas' plural for countable locations: 'picturesque areas like mountains.'

× I guess the roads capturing with those who are you help me present memories and.

✓ I guess the photos of the roads captured from the window help me preserve memories.

This sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'The roads capturing with those who are you' is meaningless. The intended idea is that photos taken of the roads help preserve memories. Use passive or active clear structure: 'photos of the roads captured from the window' or 'photos I take of the roads from the window.' 'Present memories' is incorrect verb choice; use 'preserve memories.' Suggestion: Rephrase to a clear subject-verb-object construction: 'Photos I take of the roads from the window help me preserve memories.'

× I prefer see because she is still Horizon now.

✓ I prefer the sea because the horizon is still and calm now.

This sentence has multiple problems: 'prefer see' should be 'prefer the sea' (noun with article). 'she' incorrectly refers to the sea; use 'it.' 'is still Horizon now' is ungrammatical—likely meaning the horizon is calm or still. Also 'Horizon' should be lowercase 'horizon'. Suggestion: Use 'I prefer the sea because the horizon is calm now.' or 'I prefer the sea because it looks calm.'

× So if you like.

✓ So I like it that way.

'So if you like' is a fragment and does not complete the thought. It is unclear whether the speaker means 'so I like it that way' or 'so if you like, you can...' Provide a full sentence to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: Complete the sentence: 'So I like it that way.' or 'If you like, you can choose the sea.'

× A word is wilderness.

✓ One word to describe it is 'wilderness.'

Original is ungrammatical and ambiguous. If the speaker wants to say a single word that describes the sea or scene, use 'One word to describe it is "wilderness".' Also 'wilderness' may not be the best descriptor for the sea; choose a better word if needed. Suggestion: Use a complete phrase: 'One word to describe it is wilderness.' or choose a more accurate word like 'tranquility' depending on meaning.