Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organize your reply: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct basic grammar (tense and articles). Aim for 2–3 sentences, e.g. state you enjoy looking out the window and give one specific reason and example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always look out the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, I enjoy watching changing landscapes because seeing mountains or the sea relaxes me and makes the journey more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and articles, and be more specific. Begin with a direct answer, then give one clear reason and a short example. Avoid incomplete sentences. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and link ideas with words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery because they help me remember special moments. For example, I usually photograph coastal sunsets or mountain views and later share them with family.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, natural topic sentence then support it with specific reasons and a brief example. Avoid repeating the question phrase and correct word choice and grammar (e.g. 'breaks from work' instead of 'incurs from the workplaces'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because their peaceful atmosphere helps me relax after work. For example, a weekend in the hills refreshes my mind and reduces stress much more than a busy beach holiday.

× Yes, of course, because I think this is the part of the travelling whenever we are we were travelling in bus or car, it is mandatory to see outside to enjoying the nature if you are travelling on mountains or if you are travelling in beach or the crowded.

✓ Yes, of course, because I think when we are traveling by bus or car, it is important to look outside to enjoy the scenery, whether we are traveling in the mountains, at the beach, or through crowded areas.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: mixed tenses ('are we were travelling'), incorrect prepositions ('in bus' should be 'by bus'), incorrect infinitive/gerund ('to enjoying' should be 'to enjoy'), and awkward phrasing ('travelling in beach' and 'the crowded'). The sentence was reorganized into a clear conditional/time clause 'when we are traveling by bus or car' and parallel phrases 'in the mountains, at the beach, or through crowded areas'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent, use correct prepositions (by bus/car, in the mountains, at the beach), and use the base form after 'to' for infinitives ('to enjoy').

× Yes, obviously when we are travelling we took a lot of photos just to create a memory.

✓ Yes, obviously when we are traveling we take a lot of photos just to create memories.

The sentence mixes present continuous 'we are traveling' with past simple 'we took'. Maintain consistent tense; because the idea is a habitual action, use present simple 'we take'. Also 'a memory' is better as plural 'memories' for repeated actions. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and plural nouns when referring to repeated events.

× That photos remind us the beautiful moment we have enjoyed.

✓ Those photos remind us of the beautiful moments we have enjoyed.

'That photos' is incorrect: use the plural demonstrative 'those' for plural nouns. Also 'remind us the beautiful moment' requires the preposition 'of' and plural 'moments' to match repeated experiences. Suggestion: use correct demonstratives (this/that for singular, these/those for plural) and include necessary prepositions ('remind us of').

× So it is the basic part of the.

✓ So it is a basic part of the experience.

The original is an incomplete sentence and lacks the object after 'of the'. I completed it with 'the experience' to convey meaning. Suggestion: ensure sentences are complete with subject and verb and a clear object or complement.

× I prefer mountains because mountains are mountains.

✓ I prefer the mountains because they are calming.

Repeating 'mountains are mountains' is uninformative and awkward. Also 'mountains' in general can take the definite article 'the mountains' when speaking about them as a category. I replaced the repetition with a clear adjective 'calming' to explain the preference. Suggestion: avoid tautology and use articles appropriately; use descriptive language to explain reasons.

× Indian landscape refresh my mind and relax my inner soul whenever I get incurs from the workplaces.

✓ The Indian landscape refreshes my mind and relaxes my inner soul whenever I get away from work.

Subject-verb agreement: 'Indian landscape' (singular) requires verbs with -s in present simple ('refreshes', 'relaxes'). 'Get incurs from the workplaces' is incorrect phrasing; the intended meaning is likely 'get away from work'. Also 'workplaces' is awkward; use 'work' or 'the workplace'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, choose natural collocations ('get away from work', 'the Indian landscape'), and use verbs that match the subject in number.