Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more coherent and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, gonna), correct vocabulary (e.g., 'different' not 'differences'), and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always enjoy looking out of the window when I travel by bus or car. It helps pass the time and I often notice interesting things, such as different neighbourhoods or people going about their day. For example, last week I saw a colourful street market that made the journey much more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Make the answer direct and concise. Use correct verb forms and reduce hesitation. Give a brief reason and one specific example. Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, but not very often. I usually only take photos when I see something striking, such as a dramatic sunset or an unusual building. Otherwise I prefer to simply enjoy the view without taking pictures.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons. Avoid fillers and incorrect word choices ('veil','say','lively of the wave'). Keep sentences complete and use linking words like 'because' or 'and'.

Ví dụ: I prefer both the mountains and the sea because together they create a beautiful contrast. For instance, mountains provide peaceful hiking trails while the sea offers calming waves and fresh air, so a coastal mountain area is ideal for relaxing and exploring.

× I always love to do that. Looking outside the window is gonna make you feel, uh, not boring.

✓ I always love to do that. Looking out of the window makes you feel less bored.

The phrase 'Looking outside the window is gonna make you feel, uh, not boring' contains several issues: incorrect verb form and informal future 'gonna', and awkward adjective use. 'Looking out of the window' uses the correct preposition for the action. Use present simple 'makes' for habitual effects. Replace 'gonna' with 'makes' and 'not boring' with 'less bored' because 'boring' describes things, while 'bored' describes a person's feeling. Suggestion: use 'looking out of the window makes you feel less bored.'

× And you have to see something that differences and you can see something new, some new friend over there outside.

✓ And you will see different things, and you might see something new, maybe a new friend outside.

'Something that differences' is ungrammatical; 'different' is the adjective form. 'You have to see' implies obligation; 'you will see' or 'you might see' fits better for observation. Use plural 'things' after 'different'. Also 'some new friend over there outside' should be 'maybe a new friend outside' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use 'you will see different things' and 'you might see a new friend.'

× Uh, my answer is yes, but is uh, not quite often, but I would prefer take the photo when I see the very interesting scenery.

✓ My answer is yes, but not very often; I prefer to take a photo when I see very interesting scenery.

Errors: missing subject for 'is not quite often' and incorrect verb pattern 'prefer take' which requires 'prefer to do' or 'prefer doing'. Also 'the very interesting scenery' uses an unnecessary article and 'very interesting' should modify 'scenery' without 'the'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer to take a photo when I see very interesting scenery.'

× And also I don't love to take a photo much because I want to take a view.

✓ I also don't like taking many photos because I prefer to enjoy the view.

'Don't love to take a photo much' is unnatural; use 'don't like taking many photos' or 'don't take many photos'. 'I want to take a view' is incorrect: you enjoy or take in the view, not 'take a view'. Use 'prefer to enjoy the view.' Suggestion: use 'I prefer to enjoy the view rather than take photos.'

× I uh, prefer both veil, especially mountain come with the say is the good and perfect combination of the view.

✓ I prefer both, especially mountains and the sea; they make a good, perfect combination of views.

Multiple errors: 'veil' is incorrect word; likely 'well' or nothing needed. Subject-verb and noun forms: use plural 'mountains' and 'sea' with 'and' between them. 'Come with the say' is ungrammatical; intended 'mountains combined with the sea'. 'Is the good and perfect combination' needs article and adjective order: 'a good, perfect combination'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer both, especially mountains and the sea; they make a good combination.'

× When you see outside, you will see calm, you will see the lively of the wave and it's come together is going to make you very.

✓ When you look outside, you see calm waters and the lively waves, and seeing them together will make you feel very peaceful.

Errors: 'When you see outside' should be 'When you look outside'. 'You will see calm' needs a noun: 'calm waters' or 'calmness'. 'The lively of the wave' is incorrect; use 'the lively waves' or 'the liveliness of the waves'. 'It's come together is going to make you very' is incomplete; provide the resulting feeling such as 'feel very peaceful' or 'happy'. Suggestion: use clear nouns and complete the sentence with the feeling produced.