Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 答えは簡潔に目的に直接答えていますが、文法ミス（冠詞、時制、語順）や不自然な語の選択があります。具体的には “at the Chennai” は不自然で前置詞/固有名詞の誤用、過去の習慣を表す際の時制・助動詞の誤り（“when I was child” → “when I was a child”）や冗長な表現があります。改善点：1) 最初の一文で明確に「はい」を述べ、その後に短く理由を述べる。2) 過去の習慣は過去形または “used to” を使う。3) 固有名詞の前の不要な前置詞を取り、場所名は正しく使う。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window because I enjoy seeing nature. When I was a child, I used to travel to Nagano by car with my family.

Gợi ý: 回答は直接的で理由も述べていますが、表現の自然さと文法（単数・複数、時制、語順）に改善の余地があります。例えば “it becomes memories” は不自然で “they become memories” または “it helps me remember” などが適切です。接続詞や副詞を使って理由を明確にし、冗長な語（then）を削るとよいです。改善点：1) “because” の後に具体的な効果を短く述べる。2) 複数形・代名詞の一致に注意。3) 例を一つ加えると説得力が増す。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery because the pictures become lasting memories. For example, I like to capture mountain views so I can remember the trip later.

Gợi ý: 内容は明確で理由と習慣を述べており、論理的です。ただし自然な英語にするために語彙と文法を少し整えるとさらに良くなります。例えば “go on hiking” は不自然で “go hiking” が正しいです。また、接続詞を使って文を滑らかにつなげると効果的です。改善点：1) 動詞句の正しい形（go hiking）を使う。2) 理由をつなぐために短い接続語（for example / because / which）を使う。3) 具体的な頻度や最近の体験を付け加えると説得力が増す。

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy green spaces and fresh air. I often go hiking on weekends, which helps me relax and reduce stress.

× Yes, I look out the window at the Chennai because I like seeing nature.

✓ Yes, I look out the window at Chennai because I like seeing nature.

'the' should not be used before most city names in English. Use 'Chennai' without the definite article.

× So when I was child, I often do go to Nagano by car.

✓ So when I was a child, I often went to Nagano by car.

Missing article 'a' before 'child' and tense/auxiliary error: the time phrase 'when I was a child' requires past tense 'went' rather than 'do go'. Use 'often went' for habitual past actions.

× Yes, I take photos of the scenery because it becomes memories.

✓ Yes, I take photos of the scenery because they become memories.

'Scenery' is uncountable and 'memories' is plural, so use plural pronoun 'they'. Also 'become' agrees with plural 'they'.

× I can remember it when I look back then.

✓ I can remember it when I look back.

The word 'then' is redundant and awkward after 'when I look back'. Removing 'then' makes the sentence natural.

× I often go on hiking.

✓ I often go hiking.

After 'go' use the -ing form without 'on': 'go hiking', 'go swimming', etc.

× It helps me relax and reduce stress.

✓ It helps me relax and reduce stress.

This sentence is correct grammatically; 'it helps' correctly uses third person singular and the verbs 'relax' and 'reduce' are base forms after 'helps'. Therefore no change is needed.