Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence stating whether tall buildings are near you. Avoid repetition and incorrect grammar (use singular/plural correctly, and correct verb forms). Use one or two supporting details with linking words (e.g., however, but, for example). Keep the answer under five sentences.

Ví dụ: No, there are no tall buildings near my home. However, I have seen many impressive skyscrapers in cities like Dubai, which is famous for its modern architecture. For example, many buildings there feature unique designs and striking glass facades.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid repeating previous information. Use clear reasons and one example to support your opinion. Improve word choice (e.g., 'skyscrapers', 'architecture') and grammar (articles, prepositions). Use a linking word like 'because' or 'for example' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I travel. I especially enjoy photographing skyscrapers in Dubai because their futuristic designs and reflective glass surfaces create striking images. For example, I like capturing the contrast between tall towers and the sky at sunset.

Gợi ý: Be specific and concise: name the building and give two clear reasons why you want to visit, using correct adjectives and sentence structure. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'and' to connect reasons. Avoid awkward phrases like 'distant architecture' and 'attractive tourist'.

Ví dụ: I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa because it is the tallest building in the world and offers incredible panoramic views from its observation deck. Also, its glass façade and innovative engineering make it an architectural landmark that I admire.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear, concise opinion and give one or two logical reasons. Avoid hesitations and vague or incorrect claims (e.g., tall buildings are not necessarily the first to be damaged in floods). Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' and end with a short concluding sentence.

Ví dụ: No, I would not want to live in a tall building because I worry about emergencies such as earthquakes and evacuation difficulties. However, I enjoy visiting tall buildings to admire their views and architecture.

× Actually there is no tall buildings near my home, but I have seen this large buildings in cities, especially in Dubai.

✓ Actually there are no tall buildings near my home, but I have seen large buildings in cities, especially in Dubai.

Subject 'there' with 'be' must agree in number with the noun 'buildings' (plural), so use 'are' not 'is'. Also 'this large buildings' mixes singular demonstrative 'this' with plural 'buildings'; use no demonstrative or 'these large buildings'. Suggestion: use 'there are' for plural and match demonstratives: 'these' for plural.

× Dubai is a country where it is attracted mainly by infrastructure.

✓ Dubai is a country that is mainly known for its infrastructure.

The verb 'attract' and phrase 'is attracted by' are wrongly used; 'infrastructure' is uncountable and the sentence intends a passive idea 'known for'. Also 'where' is not appropriate with 'is attracted'; use 'that' or rephrase. Suggestion: use 'known for' or 'famous for'.

× Each and every infrastructure, all the buildings is in a unique way.

✓ Each and every building has a unique design.

Mismatch: 'Each and every' requires singular noun and singular verb. 'infrastructure' is uncountable and awkward here. 'All the buildings is' is incorrect; use singular 'building' with singular verb 'has' or plural 'buildings are'. Suggestion: simplify to 'Each building has a unique design.'

× Every building has its own creature and.

✓ Every building has its own character.

'Creature' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'character' or 'feature'. The sentence is also incomplete; remove trailing 'and'. Suggestion: use appropriate noun 'character' or 'style' and complete the thought.

× Actually, there is no tall buildings near me but I have seen many large scapers in Dubai.

✓ Actually, there are no tall buildings near me, but I have seen many large skyscrapers in Dubai.

Use 'are' for plural 'buildings'. Also 'scapers' is incorrect; correct word is 'skyscrapers'. Suggestion: check plural agreement and spelling.

× So I love taking pictures because Dubai is a country where it is mainly attracted for the distant architecture.

✓ So I love taking pictures because Dubai is a country mainly admired for its distinctive architecture.

Awkward passive construction 'it is mainly attracted for the distant architecture' is ungrammatical. 'Distant' is wrong choice; likely 'distinctive' or 'unique'. Suggestion: use active or correct passive: 'admired for' or 'known for' and choose proper adjective.

× Each and every building has its own style and own infrastructure facilities, so I love taking the picture of those architectures and sculptures.

✓ Each building has its own style and facilities, so I love taking pictures of those buildings and sculptures.

'Each and every' with plural list is verbose; 'infrastructure facilities' is redundant. 'Taking the picture of those architectures' is incorrect: 'architecture' is an uncountable noun; use 'buildings' or 'architectural works' and plural 'pictures'. Suggestion: use 'taking pictures of those buildings'.

× Yes, I always dreamt of visiting Burj Khalifa, that is such an amazing building with a distant architecture and an attractive tourist.

✓ Yes, I have always dreamed of visiting the Burj Khalifa; it is such an amazing building with distinctive architecture and great appeal to tourists.

Tense: 'always dreamt' is acceptable but 'have always dreamed' fits ongoing desire. 'Burj Khalifa' should take definite article 'the'. 'Distant architecture' and 'attractive tourist' are incorrect word choices; use 'distinctive architecture' and 'appeal to tourists' or 'is attractive to tourists'. Suggestion: use present perfect for continuous feelings and correct nouns.

× That is a place which has an efficient glass finished works and a tall building which is has a very great top view and which attracted me.

✓ It is a place with impressive glass finishes and a tall structure that has a great top view and attracted me.

Phrase 'efficient glass finished works' is unidiomatic; use 'impressive glass finishes'. 'which is has' is grammatically incorrect (extra 'is'). 'Very great top view' is awkward; use 'a great view from the top'. Suggestion: simplify and correct word order.

× Actually, I don't want to live in tall buildings, but I love watching tall buildings.

✓ Actually, I don't want to live in tall buildings, but I enjoy looking at them.

'Love watching tall buildings' is understandable but 'watching' suits ongoing activity like TV; use 'looking at' or 'admiring'. Modal is okay; minor lexical choice. Suggestion: prefer 'enjoy looking at' or 'admire'.

× The main drawback for me to live in tall buildings is when any of the earthquakes or uh, some floods happened, The main thing that arms first is the tall building, uh, due to heavy rain, the first thing that get disaster is the tall building.

✓ The main drawback for me about living in tall buildings is that in events like earthquakes or floods, tall buildings can be seriously affected first.

Run-on and ungrammatical phrases: 'for me to live in' should be 'for me about living in' or 'of living in'. 'When any of the earthquakes ... happened' is incorrect tense and article use. 'The main thing that arms first' is meaningless; likely 'suffers first' or 'is affected first'. 'Get disaster' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use clear clause: 'in events like earthquakes or floods, tall buildings are often affected first'.

× It falls down. So I'm.

✓ They could collapse, so I prefer not to live in them.

'It falls down' is abrupt and wrong pronoun (singular vs plural). The fragment 'So I'm.' is incomplete. Suggestion: complete the sentence to state the consequence and preference.