Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, and provide one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Correct verb forms and use singular/plural properly.

Ví dụ: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small town, so most structures are only two or three storeys high. For example, the buildings around my street are low-rise apartments, so the skyline is quite modest.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use clear vocabulary. Say why briefly with a linking word (because/so). Avoid repetition and incorrect collocations (e.g., 'people and nature', 'I'm not the type of person').

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually photograph buildings because I prefer taking pictures of people and natural scenery. For instance, I enjoy capturing candid portraits and landscapes when I travel.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and give specific reasons using linking words (because/so/for example). Reduce hesitations and avoid repeating words. Use correct tense and adjectives (charming, historic, romantic).

Ví dụ: I'd like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because it's a historic and charming landmark. For example, I have seen it in films and TV shows, and I want to experience its atmosphere and the city views in real life.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer and explain with two concise reasons using linking words. Use correct phrases (rooftop views, balcony at night) and avoid filler sounds. Keep to two or three sentences max.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I enjoy rooftop views and city lights at night. For instance, from a high-floor balcony I could relax and look over the illuminated streets, which I find very pleasant.

× No, I don't really have a tall building near my near my house.

✓ No, I don't really have any tall buildings near my house.

The speaker repeats 'near my' and uses singular 'a tall building' which is unnatural when referring generally; use 'any tall buildings' for plural/general negative statements. Also remove duplicate words.

× I living in small town.

✓ I live in a small town.

The sentence lacks an auxiliary/finite verb and an article. Use the simple present 'I live' for habitual state and include the indefinite article 'a' before 'small town'.

× Uh, so there here have only a two or three floors only in in my house.

✓ There are only two or three floors in the houses here.

The original mixes word order and articles. Use 'There are' for plural existence, remove the extra 'only' and repeated words, and pluralize 'house' to match 'two or three floors'.

× Near my house there is a low lower apartments only here, so I didn't see so much, uh, 12.

✓ Near my house there are only low apartments, so I don't see many tall buildings.

Fix subject-verb agreement with 'there are', remove comparative 'lower' (redundant), use 'only' before noun phrase, and replace incorrect past 'didn't see so much' and unclear '12' with present tense and clear quantifier 'many tall buildings'.

× No, I don't like taking photos of buildings.

✓ No, I don't like taking photos of buildings.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It correctly uses the present simple negative to express a general dislike.

× I really like taking photos like people and natures.

✓ I really like taking photos of people and nature.

Use 'of' after 'photos' to indicate the subject photographed. 'Nature' is uncountable here, not 'natures'.

× I like like to attract with that natures and papers.

✓ I like to be attracted to people and nature.

The original uses 'attract' incorrectly and repeats 'like'. Native phrasing is 'be attracted to' or 'be interested in'. 'Papers' is unclear; likely 'people' or 'places'—corrected to 'people and nature'.

× I don't really attract attached to that buildings.

✓ I'm not really attached to those buildings.

Mixes 'attract' and 'attached'; use 'attached to' to express emotional connection and 'those' for plural distant items. Also remove unnecessary 'really' placement.

× What I'm seeing is I'm not uh, that times.

✓ What I see is that I'm not that type of person at those times.

Rewrite for clarity: use simple present 'I see' for general statement, include 'that' to introduce clause, and correct 'type of person' phrasing. 'At those times' clarifies temporal reference.

× I'm not type of persons.

✓ I'm not that type of person.

Use singular 'person' with 'type' and include demonstrative 'that'. 'Persons' is formal and uncommon here.

× I like to visit Eiffel Tower in Paris.

✓ I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris.

Use 'the' with named monuments 'the Eiffel Tower'. 'Would like to' is more natural for expressing desire.

× I love to visit there because, uh, that is so charming place and it's a historical place.

✓ I would love to visit because it is such a charming and historic place.

Use 'would love to visit' and 'such a charming' correct article order; 'historic' is more natural than 'historical' here. Remove redundant 'there'.

× I seen movies and, uh, TV series like that.

✓ I've seen movies and TV series like that.

'Seen' requires an auxiliary; use present perfect 'I've seen' to indicate past experiences relevant now.

× I, I saw in that, that, that way, but I want to see in, uh, reality, it's like a romantic place.

✓ I saw it portrayed that way, but I want to see it in real life; it's such a romantic place.

Clarify sentence structure: 'portrayed that way' for how it's shown in media, 'see it in real life' for desire, and join clauses with correct punctuation/ connectors.

× Yeah, as I really like to live in tall buildings because I like to see, uh, rooftop, uh, views from top of the views.

✓ Yes, I would really like to live in a tall building because I like rooftop views from the top.

Use 'would like' for desire, singular 'a tall building' or 'tall buildings' consistently, and concise 'rooftop views from the top'.

× I in night time that, uh, we go for, uh, we are out for home.

✓ At night when we go out from home,

Rephrase to a correct time clause: 'At night when we go out from home' or 'At night when we go out' is needed; original is fragmented.

× We see, uh, outside in balcony, we see lot of lights in city times.

✓ we can see lots of lights in the city from the balcony.

Use 'from the balcony' to indicate viewpoint, 'lots of lights' for quantity, and 'in the city' not 'in city times'.

× It's uh, nice to see be, uh.

✓ It's nice to see.

Remove extraneous words 'to see be'; 'It's nice to see' is complete and natural.