Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise: begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use correct grammar and natural expressions. Add one or two specific details (e.g., types of nearby structures or scenery) and a linking word to make it coherent. Also correct verb forms and articles (e.g., "I live in a village" not "I'm just living in the village").

Ví dụ: I live in a small village, so there are no tall buildings near my house. Instead, the area is mostly low houses and farmland, and sometimes the trees are taller than my roof, which gives the place a peaceful feel.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and smoothly: state your habit first, then give a concise reason with a linking word. Fix grammar (e.g., "I don't usually take photos of buildings") and avoid unnecessary repetition. If relevant, give one brief example of what you do photograph instead.

Ví dụ: I don't usually take photos of buildings because there aren't many impressive structures nearby. Instead, I prefer photographing nature, like the surrounding fields and trees when I go for a walk.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the building or type (e.g., "an old historical building"). Give a specific reason and one supporting detail, using linking words (because, for example). Correct grammar (e.g., "buildings that have a long history") and avoid vague phrases like "our entire old old guys."

Ví dụ: I would like to visit an old historical building, for example a centuries-old temple or castle. I find those places impressive because they reflect local traditions and remember important events from the past.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct response first (Yes/No). Provide one or two specific reasons linked logically (e.g., safety, preference for space), and correct grammar (e.g., "No, I wouldn't" and "I prefer living in a village"). Keep it concise and natural.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I worry about emergencies like fires and the difficulty of evacuating quickly. I prefer living in a village where I can enjoy open views and sunlight.

× No, especially I'm just living in the village, didn't have any high building nearby my house.

✓ No. I live in a village, and there are no tall buildings near my house.

Original mixes tenses and fragments ('I'm just living', 'didn't have') and uses incorrect word order. Use simple present for habitual/location (I live), and 'there are no' to state absence of plural noun ('buildings'). Combine into one clear sentence with correct subject-verb agreement and article use.

× Especially when you are just living in a village, you just only see a side of silence and just maybe just see the tree is maybe sometimes the tree is more higher than my house.

✓ When you live in a village, it is usually very quiet and sometimes trees are taller than my house.

Original has redundant adverbs ('just only', 'maybe'), incorrect comparative form ('more higher'), and awkward structure. Use simple present for general truths ('you live', 'it is'), avoid redundancy, and use correct comparative 'taller'.

× Not at all, especially when you are living in a places which didn't have any buildings which is that high didn't impress you then I will not willing to think of pictures and in order to go traveling to a far places just for a photo.

✓ Not really. If I live in a place without impressive tall buildings, I am not willing to take photos or travel far just for a picture.

Original misuses modals ('will not willing'), mixes tenses, has plural/article errors ('a places', 'a far places'), and run-on structure. Use 'am not willing' to express present willingness, correct articles and plurals, and simplify sentence structure.

× And probably I would like to go to somewhere which have an old building which have a long, long history.

✓ I would probably like to go somewhere that has an old building with a long history.

Original uses plural verb 'have' with singular subject 'somewhere/ building'. Use singular 'has' to agree with 'somewhere' or 'building', and simplify 'a long, long history' to 'a long history'.

× It's because of the memories for our our entire old old guys which have been make for it.

✓ It is because of the memories of the older generations who built it.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear ('entire old old guys', 'have been make for it'). Use clear noun phrase 'older generations' and correct verb 'built' to express who created the building.

× And I think that it will quite impress me.

✓ I think it would impress me.

Original mixes future 'will' with 'think' in a hypothetical context; 'would' is more appropriate to express a conditional or anticipated impression. Also place adverb correctly: 'quite impress me' -> 'would quite impress me' or simply 'would impress me'.

× It's probably not, especially if any accident happened, maybe some fire damage.

✓ Probably not, especially if an accident such as a fire happened.

Original 'It's probably not' is vague; better to say 'Probably not'. 'If any accident happened' is grammatically awkward—use 'if an accident such as a fire happened'. Maintain conditional sense.

× I unable to get as soon as possible to live to such dangerous places and I'm more willing to living in a village especially I just want to enjoy the view of the sun.

✓ I would be unable to escape quickly from such dangerous places, and I prefer living in a village because I want to enjoy the sunrise.

Original lacks proper verb forms ('I unable to get'), misuses 'living' and articles, and has awkward phrasing. Use modal 'would be unable', verb 'escape', and 'prefer living' to express preference. 'View of the sun' is better expressed as 'sunrise' or 'sunset' depending on meaning.