Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve fluency and clarity by reducing hesitations and correcting grammar (singular/plural, word order). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating words and use more precise vocabulary like "tall buildings," "high-rises," or "skyscrapers."

Ví dụ: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because I live in a small village. Most houses here are low and traditional, so we don’t have high-rises. However, in the nearby city there are many skyscrapers and modern office towers.

Gợi ý: Reduce repetition and hesitations; give a concise topic sentence followed by a specific reason and an example. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and accurate noun forms (buildings, unusual buildings).

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I enjoy unusual shapes and architectural details. For example, when I visited the city center last month I photographed a curved glass tower and an old brick warehouse that had colorful murals.

Gợi ý: The answer is off-topic and unclear. Always respond directly to the question with a topic sentence about a building you want to visit, then give one or two specific reasons or details. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Louvre in Paris because I want to see its architecture and famous paintings. Also, the glass pyramid and the old palace buildings look fascinating, so I would spend a day exploring both the museum and its exterior.

Gợi ý: Clarify meaning and fix common mistakes (live vs. leave). Give a direct topic sentence saying whether you want to live in a tall building, then add specific benefits or concerns using linking words. Keep to two or three supporting details and avoid incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it offers great views and more security. For instance, from a high-floor apartment I could see the whole neighborhood, and many high-rise complexes have good facilities like gyms and 24-hour security.

× To be honest, uh, there are no uh, tall building near my hometown because I live in a small village.

✓ To be honest, there are no tall buildings near my hometown because I live in a small village.

The noun 'building' is countable and the sentence uses 'no' with a plural meaning; therefore it should be 'buildings' to agree in number with 'no'. Use plural after 'no' when referring to zero of countable items.

× So uh, most of the building, umm, most of the buildings are very and small, short, uh, but in the city there are lots of uh, uh, sky building.

✓ So, most of the buildings are very small and short, but in the city there are lots of skyscrapers.

Multiple problems: 'most of the building' should be plural 'most of the buildings' (count noun agreement). The adjectives order and word choice were incorrect: 'very and small' should be 'very small' and 'sky building' is not standard — use 'skyscrapers'. Ensure nouns match plural form when speaking about many items.

× Yes, yes. I, I, I love the, uh, taking photos of the, uh, buildings because there are some, uh, unusual building and there are some tall buildings and uh, I, I always, uh, take the photo when I see the unusual building or tall buildings.

✓ Yes. I love taking photos of buildings because there are some unusual buildings and some tall buildings, and I always take a photo when I see an unusual or tall building.

Article and noun number errors: 'the taking photos' is incorrect — use the gerund without 'the' ('love taking photos'). 'The buildings' is unnecessary when speaking generally. 'Unusual building' should be plural 'unusual buildings' or singular paired correctly; consistency needed. Use 'a photo' or 'photos' and keep noun number consistent with indefinite references.

× Tell the truth, there is no animal.

✓ To tell the truth, there is no building I want to visit.

The original reply 'there is no animal' does not answer the question 'Is there a building that you would like to visit?' and is likely a mis-structured response. It also has a content error. The corrected sentence uses the appropriate phrase 'To tell the truth' and supplies a grammatically correct, context-appropriate negative statement about buildings. Ensure answers match the question asked.

× Yes, of course. Uh, I want to leave now, uh, Star High building.

✓ Yes, of course. I want to live now in the Star High building.

The original used 'leave' instead of 'live' which changes meaning; assuming intended meaning is to live there. Also proper nouns for buildings generally take the definite article 'the' before the name plus 'building' optionally: 'the Star High building'. Ensure verb choice matches intended meaning and include 'the' for this specific building.

× On the place, in my opinion, if I leave the, uh, tall building, I can see that who's.

✓ In my opinion, if I live in the tall building, I can see a lot from that place.

Multiple errors: 'On the place' is incorrect — use 'in that place' or omit. 'Leave' should be 'live' (verb choice). The clause 'I can see that who's' is ungrammatical and unclear; replace with 'I can see a lot from that place' to express the probable meaning. Use correct prepositions ('in', 'from') and ensure clauses are complete and clear.