Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答总体较自然且信息相关，但可改进：1) 开头句可更直接（如先说“Yes, there are”）；2) 避免重复表述（modern and energetic 意义接近）；3) 加入一两个具体细节（如大楼高度或离家多远）并用连词连接，句子数不超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many tall apartment blocks near my home, most of them around 15–20 storeys high. Because of these buildings, the neighbourhood feels modern and lively, and there is a large shopping mall and several hotels within a five-minute walk, which makes daily shopping very convenient.

Gợi ý: 内容清晰表达了偏好，但存在语法和用词问题：1) “on the contrast” 应为 “on the contrary” 或删去；2) 第三句中主谓不一致和搭配错误（"it's always broaden my horizon" 应为 "they always broaden my horizons"）；3) 可增加一两句具体例子或说明拍摄原因并使用连接词。

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually photograph buildings. On the contrary, I prefer natural landscapes because they feel more relaxing and peaceful. For example, I often take photos of sunsets because of their vivid colours, and these images always broaden my horizons and help me relax after a busy day.

Gợi ý: 表达明确但语言需修正并丰富细节：1) 句子中时态与主谓不一致（"it always give" 改为 "they always give" 或指"nature"时用单数一致）；2) 回答过于简短，可补充一个例外或举例说明为何自然景观更有启发；3) 使用连接词使逻辑更顺畅。

Ví dụ: Not really — I'm not very interested in architecture or famous buildings. I prefer natural landscapes because they often give me inspiration for my personal life; for instance, a quiet mountain or a coastal view helps me think more clearly and feel refreshed.

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰且有对比，但可改进：1) 第一句可更自然如 “It depends on the circumstances”；2) 改进措辞（"visit a new place" 用 "stay in a new place" 或 "travel" 更合适；"relax myself" 改为 "relax"）；3) 可加入具体设施或原因（如电梯、安保、阳台、庭院）以增加细节。

Ví dụ: It depends on the circumstances and the available facilities. If I work in the city, I would prefer living in a tall building because of the convenience and security, such as elevators and 24-hour security. However, when I'm travelling or want to relax, I favour low-rise houses with more outdoor space and a garden.

× These tall buildings let this area feel more modern and energetic.

✓ These tall buildings make this area feel more modern and energetic.

原句中语法问题不在单复数，但“let … feel”在此语境中不自然，常用动词是“make”。建议使用“make”来表达使某地显得更现代、更有活力。

× No, I'm not interested in buildings on the contrast.

✓ No, I'm not interested in buildings by contrast.

原句中“on the contrast”是不正确的介词搭配。表示“相比之下/相对而言”常用短语是“by contrast”或“in contrast”。可改为“No, I'm not interested in buildings; by contrast, I prefer natural landscapes.” 从而使句子连贯。

× For example, I like the sunsets for its vivid color and it's always broaden my horizon.

✓ For example, I like sunsets for their vivid colors and they always broaden my horizons.

原句存在代词与名词不一致（sunsets 与 its），以及主语与谓语不一致（it's always broaden）。需将“sunsets”视为复数，使用复数代词“their”，并将“broaden”前的主语改为复数“they”，谓语用“broaden”并去掉多余的助动词“it's”。此外“horizon”常用复数形式“horizons”。

× No, I'm not really into architecture or famous buildings. I prefer nature landscapes because it always give me some inspiration for my personal life.

✓ No, I'm not really into architecture or famous buildings. I prefer natural landscapes because they always give me some inspiration for my personal life.

原句中“nature landscapes”词序和词形不当，应为“natural landscapes”。随后“it always give”主语应与复数“landscapes”一致，需改为“they always give”。动词“give”需与复数主语匹配。

× If I work in the city, I prefer tall buildings because they are more convenient and safe.

✓ If I work in the city, I prefer tall buildings because they are more convenient and safer.

形容词并列修饰时，描述“更安全”应使用比较级“safer”而不是原级“safe”。因此将“safe”改为比较级“safer”。

× But if I visit a new place or want to relax myself, I prefer low rise houses with more space.

✓ But if I visit a new place or want to relax, I prefer low-rise houses with more space.

原句中“relax myself”在英语中不常用，通常直接用“relax”。此外“low rise”作复合形容词应加连字符“low-rise”。句子结构修正后更自然流畅。