Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì và giới từ), loại bỏ tiếng chập chờn (uh, umm) và nói rõ, ngắn gọn. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: số lượng tòa nhà, loại cảnh vật gần nhà) và dùng từ nối đơn giản để mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: I live in a small village, so there are no tall buildings near my home. Instead, my neighbourhood has many trees, rivers and open fields, which makes the air very fresh.

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi đầu tiên (yes/no) rồi giải thích. Tránh dùng từ không liên quan hoặc lỗi (ví dụ 'Tiburon is'). Loại bỏ tiếng ngập ngừng và kết thúc câu rõ ràng. Dùng từ vựng phù hợp (landscape, scenery, peaceful, noisy) và nối ý bằng because/so/therefore.

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't take photos of buildings. I prefer photographing natural landscapes like mountains and rivers because they feel peaceful and the air is fresher, whereas buildings often seem noisy and crowded.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần chỉnh ngữ pháp (subject-verb agreement) và cụ thể hơn về lý do, có thể nêu một hoạt động muốn làm ở đó. Dùng liên từ để làm câu mạch lạc (because, so, for example). Giữ dài không quá 3 câu.

Ví dụ: Yes, I'd like to visit the Twin Towers in the future because they are world-famous landmarks that attract many tourists. I want to see the architecture and take photos from the observation deck to enjoy the city view.

Gợi ý: Trả lời rõ ràng ngay đầu (Yes/No), tránh lặp từ và tiếng ngập ngừng. Cần cụ thể hóa lý do (ví dụ: garden, privacy, noise) và dùng cấu trúc ngắn gọn, mạch lạc. Hạn chế câu dài và chia thành 2 câu tối đa.

Ví dụ: No, I would prefer to live in a house rather than a tall building. I like houses because they usually have gardens, more privacy and fresher air, which makes living more comfortable.

× To be honest, I lived in a small village so in around my home.

✓ To be honest, I live in a small village, so there are not many buildings around my home.

The speaker used 'lived' (past tense) but is describing a current situation; use present simple 'live'. Also rephrase 'so in around my home' to 'so there are not many buildings around my home' for clarity. Suggestion: Use present simple for current facts and restructure the sentence: 'I live in a small village, so there are not many buildings around my home.'

× Uh, there aren't 2 buildings near my home so I rather than rather than have many trees or rivers and fields and the air, my own village is very fresh.

✓ There aren't many buildings near my home; instead, there are trees, rivers, and fields, and the air in my village is very fresh.

Using '2' is incorrect when the intended meaning is 'not many'; 'many' fits better. Also 'rather than rather than have' is repetitive and ungrammatical. Plural nouns 'trees, rivers, and fields' are required. Suggestion: Use 'many' or 'many buildings' and simpler connectors: 'instead' or 'rather than'.

× Tiburon is, I am certain, because I love capturing natural scenery like mountains, rivers and fields.

✓ I'm certain, because I love capturing natural scenery like mountains, rivers, and fields, that I prefer photographing nature rather than buildings.

Sentence lacks clear subject and verb for the intended idea; 'Tiburon is' is unclear and likely wrong. Reorder to express preference clearly: 'I'm certain that I prefer photographing nature...' Suggestion: State preference first and then reasons, ensuring subject and verb are present. Note: If 'Tiburon' was a mistake for 'I do' or similar, replace with correct phrase.

× Uh, because I feel relaxed and umm, enjoying the fresh air, uh, Besides, buildings umm make me feel uh, polluted and noisy.

✓ I feel relaxed and enjoy the fresh air. Also, buildings make me feel that the environment is polluted and noisy.

Mixing 'feel relaxed and enjoying' mixes verb forms; use parallel structure 'feel relaxed and enjoy'. 'Make me feel polluted and noisy' incorrectly attributes pollution/noise to the person; better: 'make me feel that the environment is polluted and noisy.' Suggestion: Use consistent verb forms and clear agent for 'polluted' and 'noisy'.

× So ideally.

✓ So ideally, I prefer taking photos of natural scenery rather than buildings.

Fragment without a verb or object; 'So ideally' is incomplete. Provide a full clause to complete the thought. Suggestion: Expand fragments into full sentences that state preference or conclusion.

× Yes, I want to visit Twin Towers in the future, because it is a famous place in the world and have many people to arrive and attract tourists in the world, and I want to explore it at least once.

✓ Yes, I want to visit the Twin Towers in the future because it is a famous place that attracts many people and tourists, and I want to explore it at least once.

Use 'the Twin Towers' (definite article). 'have many people to arrive and attract tourists' is ungrammatical; use 'attracts many people and tourists.' Correct subject-verb agreement: 'it attracts'. Suggestion: Use 'the' for specific buildings and 'attracts' for present facts. Grammar type also covers article error but primary fix is 'there be'/'subject-verb agreement' and article use.

× Umm, to be honest, I want to live in a house rather than two building because, uh, I think when I, I live in a house, I will umm, I feel convenient and uh, comfortable because I can, umm, enjoy my life and refreshed, uh, besides, I can, I love uh, the fresh air.

✓ To be honest, I want to live in a house rather than in a tall building because I think when I live in a house I will feel comfortable and relaxed; I can enjoy my life and the fresh air.

'Two building' probably intended 'a tall building' or 'two buildings' is wrong; 'two building' is singular/plural mismatch and article missing before 'house' and 'tall building'. Also awkward and redundant phrasing 'I will umm, I feel' and 'enjoy my life and refreshed' is incorrect form — use 'relaxed' or 'refreshed'. Suggestion: Use correct articles ('a house', 'a tall building'), correct adjectives ('tall building'), and parallel verb forms ('feel comfortable and relaxed').