Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Focus on clarity, grammar and conciseness. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and articles, and avoid redundancy. Use one or two supporting details with linking words (for example, 'because' or 'and'). Watch word choice (e.g., 'views' not 'view', 'windows' placement) and sentence structure to make it natural.

Ví dụ: Yes. I live in the city centre, so there are several tall buildings near my home. They are especially beautiful at night because the lights make the skyline feel bright and lively.

Gợi ý: Improve accuracy and vocabulary. Start with a direct statement, then give specific reasons using correct words (e.g., 'architecture' not 'agriculture'; 'I have visited' not 'I have a visit'). Keep sentences concise and use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph buildings, especially historic ones, because photographing their architecture helps me remember places I have visited. Also, old buildings often have interesting details and stories that I like to capture.

Gợi ý: Make the response direct and correct grammar. Name a specific building if possible. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'history' or 'stories' instead of unclear phrases like 'dug tortures'). Use linking words ('for example', 'because') and one supporting detail about what you would learn.

Ví dụ: I would like to visit old churches and castles, for example, Windsor Castle, because their history and preserved rooms tell stories about how people lived in the past.

Gợi ý: Keep it natural and correct collocations. Start with a clear opinion, then give one or two precise reasons. Use correct phrases: 'at night when the city lights are on', 'more secure', 'better facilities'. Avoid repetition and awkward verbs like 'slides on'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. Living in a tall building offers spectacular views, especially at night when the city lights are on, and tall buildings often have better security and convenient facilities like gyms and shops.

× Yes, I live in the center of the city, so there are several view of tall buildings near my maneuvers.

✓ Yes, I live in the center of the city, so there are several views of tall buildings near my apartment.

Subject-verb agreement and noun form: 'several' requires a plural noun ('views'). Vocabulary and word choice: 'maneuvers' is incorrect; context suggests 'apartment' or 'home'. Use 'views of tall buildings' to be grammatically correct. Suggestion: Use plural nouns after words like 'several' and choose the correct noun for location (apartment/home).

× Every time I saw the skyscraper throughout my windows, I especially when the lights on the night, it changed my neighborhood's atmospheres and I feel more than and lively.

✓ Every time I see the skyscrapers through my windows, especially when the lights are on at night, they change my neighborhood's atmosphere and I feel more calm and lively.

Tense consistency and verb form: speaking about habitual actions requires present simple ('see' not 'saw'). Preposition and phrasing: use 'through my windows' not 'throughout'. Use 'skyscrapers' plural to match context. Use 'the lights are on at night' for correct structure. 'Changed' should be present simple 'change' for habitual action. 'Atmospheres' should be singular 'atmosphere' when referring to the general feeling of the neighborhood. 'I feel more than and lively' is ungrammatical; replace with a clear adjective pair like 'more calm and lively' or simply 'more lively'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent for habitual actions (present simple), fix plural/singular nouns, and use clear adjectives.

× Absolutely. Especially like, uh, photographing historical buildings.

✓ Absolutely. I especially like photographing historical buildings.

Sentence structure error: Missing subject 'I' before 'especially'. 'Especially like photographing' should be 'I especially like photographing' to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: Always include the subject in full sentences; place adverb 'especially' before the main verb for emphasis.

× The reason is that it's a really nice way to help me to remember the places I have a visit.

✓ The reason is that it's a really nice way to help me remember the places I have visited.

Verb form and sentence structure: 'help me to remember' is acceptable but more natural without 'to' in this construction ('help me remember'). 'I have a visit' is incorrect; past participle 'visited' is required for the present perfect ('I have visited'). Suggestion: Use 'help me remember' and correct past participle 'visited' after 'have'.

× What's more, uh, their agriculture contains a lot of historical details and inner histories, so it's a good way to help me to get to know about them.

✓ What's more, their architecture contains a lot of historical details and inner histories, so it's a good way to help me get to know them.

Word choice and sentence structure: 'agriculture' is the wrong word; context requires 'architecture'. 'Help me to get to know about them' is wordy and ungrammatical; use 'help me get to know them' or 'help me learn about them'. Remove unnecessary preposition 'about' after 'know'. Suggestion: Choose correct vocabulary ('architecture'), streamline 'help me get to know them'.

× I especially like visit historical buildings.

✓ I especially like visiting historical buildings.

Verb + -ing form: After 'like' to express enjoyment, use the gerund 'visiting' not the base verb 'visit'. Suggestion: Use 'like' + gerund for activities you enjoy (I like visiting, I enjoy seeing).

× The reason is that it dug tortures contains a lot of inner details and historical stories.

✓ The reason is that they often contain a lot of inner details and historical stories.

Word choice and sentence structure: 'it dug tortures' is nonsensical. Likely intended meaning is that 'they contain' (referring to buildings) and possibly 'often contain'. Use plural pronoun 'they' to match 'historical buildings'. Suggestion: Replace incorrect phrases with clear expressions: 'they often contain a lot of inner details and historical stories.'

× When I explored churches and the castles, I find myself getting close to the ancient People's Daily routines and their lives.

✓ When I explore churches and castles, I find myself getting close to the daily routines and lives of ancient people.

Tense consistency and word order: Use present simple 'explore' for habitual statements. Article use: 'the castles' -> 'castles' is fine; 'the ancient People's Daily routines' is incorrect capitalization and word order. Use 'daily routines and lives of ancient people' for natural English. 'People' should be lowercase and possessive repositioned. Suggestion: Maintain consistent tense for habits and place modifiers after the nouns they modify ('lives of ancient people').

× Absolutely, I'd love to live in a tall building because they provide a spectacular view, especially when at night when the city slides on.

✓ Absolutely, I'd love to live in a tall building because it provides a spectacular view, especially at night when the city lights are on.

Pronoun agreement and word choice: Use singular pronoun 'it' to agree with singular 'a tall building'. 'Provide' should be 'provides'. Phrase 'when the city slides on' is incorrect; intended phrase is 'when the city lights are on'. Suggestion: Ensure subject and verb agree in number and use the correct idiom 'city lights are on'.

× What's more, it provides much more security and more in the facilities, which makes my daily life so convenient.

✓ What's more, it provides much greater security and more facilities, which makes my daily life very convenient.

Preposition and word choice: 'more in the facilities' is incorrect. Use 'more facilities' or 'better facilities'. 'Much more security' is better phrased as 'much greater security'. 'so convenient' is acceptable but 'very convenient' is more natural here. Suggestion: Use 'more facilities' and 'greater security' for clarity; avoid unnecessary prepositions.