Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Speak clearly and stay on topic. Begin with a direct topic sentence answering the question (e.g., “Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home.”). Avoid unclear words and filler sounds. Provide one or two specific supporting details (location, purpose, or examples) using linking words (for example, “because” or “for example”). Keep answers concise (no more than five sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, in the city center there are many apartment towers because land is limited. These high-rises are popular since they provide convenient access to shops and public transport. Overall, tall buildings are becoming more common in my area.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your habit. Use correct grammar (e.g., “keen on taking photos” or “I don’t usually take photos”) and add one specific reason or example. Use a linking word such as “however” or “unless” for contrast. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I don’t usually take photos of buildings. However, I will photograph buildings that are historically or culturally important, such as an old temple or colonial-era house. I like to capture their details and learn more about the history from the images.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and eliminate repetition. Start with a topic sentence naming the building you want to visit. Give one or two specific reasons (location, features, or shops) using linking words like “because” or “so”. Avoid awkward phrases and ensure correct collocations (e.g., “under one roof,” “a cup of tea” is informal and optional).

Ví dụ: I would like to visit Lulu Mall, which is near my home. It’s a very tall shopping center with many branded stores and a large food court, so I can buy almost anything there. Because it has good facilities and entertainment, I often enjoy spending an afternoon there.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, grammatically correct topic sentence such as “No, I would not like to live in a tall building.” Then provide specific reasons using linking words like “because” or “so” (privacy, gardening, noise). Avoid vague or incorrect phrases; keep answers coherent and within five sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to live in a tall building. I prefer a single-family house because it offers more privacy and a private garden where I can do gardening. Tall apartment blocks are often noisy and lack outdoor space, so a house suits my lifestyle better.

× First Darrell and he told the drinks in my home, uh, Emily, in the city area, so many people are leaving floods, so it's very convenient for them.

✓ First, Darrell told me that many people live in my home area, Emily, in the city, so it is very convenient for them.

The original sentence has unclear structure, incorrect word choice and sequence (e.g., 'told the drinks', 'leaving floods'), and missing connectors. This is a sentence structure error: reorder elements, use correct verbs (told me, live), and remove irrelevant words. Suggestion: identify subject, verb and object and express them in logical order.

× And also it takes only few, only eight small places to build their houses.

✓ Also, it takes only a few small plots to build their houses.

The error is the incorrect use of quantifier and noun ('places' is acceptable but 'plots' or 'spaces' more natural; missing article before 'few'). This is a preposition/quantifier/article combination issue; add 'a' before 'few' and use a more appropriate noun. Suggestion: use 'a few' for a small number and choose the correct noun for land: 'plots' or 'spaces'.

× So, yeah, many people are building tall houses now.

✓ So, yes, many people are building tall houses now.

The original is mostly correct except colloquial 'yeah' which is fine in speech but 'yes' is more formal. Marked as present continuous tense usage but correct form. Suggestion: keep present continuous for ongoing actions; use 'yes' for formal tone.

× I'm not keen of taking photos of building but if any building that related to the our history or culture I'd like to take pictures.

✓ I'm not keen on taking photos of buildings, but if a building is related to our history or culture, I'd like to take pictures.

The errors: incorrect preposition 'keen of' (should be 'keen on'), missing plural on 'building' and incorrect relative clause 'that related to the our history' should be 'is related to our history'. This fits preposition and sentence structure errors. Suggestion: use 'keen on' and ensure subject-verb in relative clause: 'if a building is related...'.

× Other than no, I'm not taking any random pictures of the building.

✓ Other than that, no; I don't take random pictures of buildings.

This is awkward phrasing and tense mismatch. Use clear connector 'other than that' and simple present 'I don't take' to indicate habit. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and clearer discourse markers.

× I love to go to Lulu Mall every time.

✓ I love going to Lulu Mall all the time.

Using 'love to go' is acceptable, but 'love going' is more natural for repeated action; 'every time' is odd—'all the time' or 'often' preferred. Marked as present tense/verb form preference. Suggestion: use gerund after 'love' for general preference.

× That's the one near to my home.

✓ That's the one near my home.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary after 'near'. This is an incorrect preposition use. Suggestion: use 'near' without 'to'.

× it's a mall, it's a shopping center and it's very tall building.

✓ It's a mall, a shopping center, and a very tall building.

Missing article before 'very tall building' and redundant repetition. This is an article/adjective placement issue. Suggestion: include the article 'a' before 'very tall building' and use commas to join nouns.

× We have every shops, branded shops and things in there.

✓ There are all kinds of shops there, including branded ones.

'We have every shops' is ungrammatical: incorrect determiner and pronoun reference. Use 'there are' for existence and 'all kinds of' or 'many' for variety. This is incorrect pronoun/determiner use. Suggestion: use 'there are' + plural noun and appropriate quantifier.

× So if we went there, we can buy everything at under my under one roof.

✓ So if we go there, we can buy everything under one roof.

Mixed conditional: 'if we went there' (past) with 'we can' (present) is inconsistent. Use first conditional: 'if we go... we can'. Also remove repeated words 'my under'. This is a tense issue. Suggestion: match conditional tenses and remove extra words.

× So it's a cup of my tea.

✓ So it's my cup of tea.

Word order is wrong for the idiom 'my cup of tea'. This is a sentence structure/idiom error. Suggestion: use correct fixed expression: 'my cup of tea'.

× No, I don't want to live in that old building.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building.

Context: question asked about living in a tall building; student replied about 'old building'. If intended refusal of tall buildings, correct sentence should match topic. Modal 'don't want to' is fine. This is a contextual correction rather than grammar; labeled as modal verb usage because 'don't want to' expresses desire. Suggestion: respond directly to question: 'I don't want to live in a tall building.'

× Tall building must be shared apartment with the other people and the loves and shares were always busy and in the garden also not be a private one.

✓ Tall buildings are usually shared apartments with other people; the lifts and stairs are always busy, and the garden is not private.

Multiple errors: singular/plural mismatch ('Tall building' vs 'Tall buildings'), missing verb agreement ('must be shared apartment' should be 'are usually shared apartments'), wrong words ('loves' instead of 'lifts', 'shares' instead of 'stairs'), and incorrect negation 'not be a private one'. This combines subject-verb agreement and vocabulary errors. Suggestion: use plural forms, ensure verb agreement, and choose correct nouns ('lifts', 'stairs'), and proper clause structure.

× I love to have a single house with a beautiful garden.

✓ I would like to have a single house with a beautiful garden.

'I love to have' can be acceptable but 'I would like to have' better expresses desire for future. Labeled as reflexive pronoun use category is incorrect but minor; instead present a more natural modal expression. Suggestion: use 'would like' when expressing preference for future possibilities.

× I love gardening so I like single houses then tall buildings.

✓ I love gardening, so I prefer single houses to tall buildings.

Incorrect comparative connector 'then' should be 'to' in preference expressions 'prefer A to B'. This is a present tense/preposition/comparison error. Suggestion: use 'prefer A to B' to show preference and keep simple present for general preferences.