Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn về cấu trúc ngữ pháp và loại bỏ lỗi lặp. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn (Yes/No + thông tin chính), rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về tòa nhà và các tiện ích, dùng liên từ phù hợp để nối ý. Tránh lặp từ (ví dụ “such as” lặp) và sửa các lỗi ngữ pháp như thiếu động từ hoặc mạo từ.

Ví dụ: Yes. Landmark 81 is very close to my home and it is the tallest building in Vietnam. It also houses many entertainment options, such as shopping centers, cinemas and restaurants, so it is a popular place for my friends and me to hang out.

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời ở thì phù hợp và trình bày rõ ràng hơn. Sửa thì (present/past) cho nhất quán, dùng câu chủ đề trực tiếp (Yes/No + thói quen hoặc trải nghiệm) và tiếp theo là lý do cụ thể. Tránh lỗi phát âm viết thành từ không chính xác (ví dụ ‘Lands match 81’) và mô tả nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp (view, skyline, scenery).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. When I first went to Landmark 81, I took many photos because I was impressed by the view. I especially photographed the skyline and the surrounding scenery to remember the visit.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp (số nhiều/ít, thì), giảm lặp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lý do muốn thăm. Nên dùng liên từ để mở rộng ý (for example, because) và cung cấp một ví dụ cụ thể về “many important things” (ví dụ: museum, artifacts, historical events).

Ví dụ: I would like to visit Independence Palace because it is a historic site. It played an important role in Vietnam’s past, and I want to see its rooms and exhibits, such as the reception halls and historical artifacts, and take some photographs.

Gợi ý: Ý chính rõ ràng, nhưng cần câu gọn hơn và sửa lỗi lặp, ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ “low rise time”, câu cuối rời rạc). Nên bắt đầu với câu chủ đề ngắn, giải thích lý do rõ ràng và cung cấp một chi tiết bổ sung (ví dụ: prefer a house with a garden). Dùng liên từ để kết nối ý.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to live in a tall building because I am afraid of heights and feel nervous when I am high up. I prefer living in a low-rise house where I feel safe and comfortable, especially when I am stressed.

× Landmark 81 is near my home is the tallest building in Vietnam and how many entertainment options such as such as shopping centers, cinemas and restaurants.

✓ Landmark 81, which is near my home, is the tallest building in Vietnam and has many entertainment options such as shopping centers, cinemas, and restaurants.

The original sentence is a run-on with missing relative clause punctuation and an incorrect verb for the second clause. Use a relative clause 'which is near my home' to connect ideas and the verb 'has' to show possession of entertainment options. Also remove the duplicate 'such as' and add commas in a list. Suggestion: break long ideas into clear clauses and ensure each clause has an appropriate verb.

× I took a photos when I first call go to Lands match 81 because I really impact were I really was impressed by the view and I photographed the skin narrates the skylights and scenery at the.

✓ I took some photos when I first went to Landmark 81 because I was really impressed by the view, and I photographed the skyline and scenery.

Multiple errors: 'a photos' uses wrong article/number; use 'some photos' or 'a photo'. 'call go to Lands match 81' is garbled; correct is 'went to Landmark 81' (past tense). 'I really impact were I really was impressed' is incorrect; use 'I was really impressed'. 'photographed the skin narrates the skylights' is nonsensical; likely intended 'photographed the skyline and scenery'. Use past tense consistently. Suggestion: keep verbs consistent and choose correct article/quantifier.

× I would like to visit Independent Place because it is a historic building. Uh, it is a historic building that have uh, many important thing in Vietnam past. I enjoy seeing and take a photo.

✓ I would like to visit Independence Place because it is a historic building. It is a historic building that has many important things from Vietnam's past. I enjoy seeing it and taking photos.

Errors: 'Independent Place' likely 'Independence Place'. 'that have' wrong number; use 'that has' to agree with 'building'. 'many important thing' needs plural 'things'. 'in Vietnam past' should be 'from Vietnam's past' (possessive). 'I enjoy seeing and take a photo' mixes forms; use 'seeing it and taking photos' (gerund after 'enjoy'). Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use gerunds after verbs like 'enjoy'.

× I would not like like to live in a tall building because I'm afraid of heights.

✓ I would not like to live in a tall building because I'm afraid of heights.

Double 'like like' is a repetition error, not a modal problem but relates to word duplication. The modal structure 'would not like to' is correct. Remove the duplicated word. Suggestion: read sentences aloud to catch repeated words.

× When I'm high up I feel very nervous and uncomfortable though I prefer living in a low rise time when I feel sad. Where I feel safe.

✓ When I'm high up, I feel very nervous and uncomfortable. I prefer living in a low-rise place because I feel safe there when I'm sad.

Original has tense and word choice problems: 'low rise time' is wrong; use 'low-rise place'. Sentence fragments: 'Where I feel safe.' is a fragment; combine into full sentence. Maintain present tense for habitual feelings. Suggestion: use hyphen in 'low-rise' and avoid sentence fragments by linking clauses properly.