Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence naming the favourite food, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy (e.g., 'healthy' repeated) and keep to 2–3 sentences. Add a specific example of a healthy dish to make the answer more concrete.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is healthy meals, especially grilled salmon with steamed vegetables. I prefer it because it helps me stay fit and gives me long-lasting energy; for example, eating it after a workout makes me feel refreshed.

Gợi ý: Use past tense consistently and avoid filler phrases. Give a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add a specific example and a brief reason. Replace vague adjectives with one precise description.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked junk food, particularly French fries and burgers. I enjoyed them because they tasted rich and were easy to get from nearby shops.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly about seasonal changes, then add brief supporting details. Avoid repeating childhood information and saying unrelated ideas about the future. Use linking words (e.g., 'in summer', 'during winter') and give one or two specific seasonal examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. In summer I eat lighter foods like salads and fruit to stay cool, while in winter I prefer soups and stews for warmth. For example, I often have a chilled fruit salad in July but a hot vegetable stew in December.

Gợi ý: Respond with a clear past vs present comparison and use fewer repeated words. Give specific items you used to eat and what you eat now, with a short reason for the change. Keep it to two sentences max.

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I often ate sweets and fast food, but now I prefer healthy options like yogurt, curd and green salads because I want to stay fit and have more energy.

× Well, there are ample foods when it comes to my favorite one, that is none other than healthy food.

✓ Well, there are plenty of foods, but my favorite is healthy food.

The phrase 'there are ample foods' is awkward; use 'there are plenty of foods' or simply state 'there are many foods'. Also 'when it comes to my favorite one, that is none other than healthy food' is wordy and incorrect in structure; replace with 'but my favorite is healthy food' to express the idea clearly. Suggested improvement: Use common 'there is/there are' patterns and concise noun phrases (e.g., 'there are many foods, but my favorite is healthy food').

× By eating healthy food, I can stay fit and healthy.

✓ By eating healthy food, I stay fit and healthy.

The modal 'can' suggests ability rather than a habitual result. Since the speaker describes a regular outcome of eating healthy food, present simple 'I stay' is more appropriate. Suggested improvement: Use present simple to describe general truths or habitual results.

× Moreover, it can uplift my mood from sad to happy.

✓ Moreover, it can lift my mood from sadness to happiness.

The verb 'uplift' is acceptable but 'lift' is more natural here; 'from sad to happy' mixes adjective forms with nouns. Use noun forms 'from sadness to happiness' for parallelism. Suggested improvement: Keep parallel noun forms when describing a change in state.

× So when I was young I prefer to have junk food because it was scrumptious as well as it was delicious and mouth watering.

✓ When I was young, I preferred to have junk food because it was scrumptious and mouth-watering.

The sentence mixes past time reference 'when I was young' with present tense 'I prefer'. Use past simple 'preferred'. Also redundant phrasing 'scrumptious as well as it was delicious and mouth watering' is repetitive; combine adjectives and use hyphen for 'mouth-watering'. Suggested improvement: Match verb tense to the time frame and avoid redundant adjectives.

× Certainly yes, because preferences change according to the time and situation.

✓ Certainly, yes, because preferences change according to time and situation.

Minor wording: 'according to the time and situation' is wordy; omit articles for natural phrasing. 'Change' in present simple is correct for general truths.

× So when I was like small I prefer to eat junk food.

✓ When I was small, I preferred to eat junk food.

'When I was like small' is ungrammatical; use 'when I was small'. Also match past reference with past tense 'preferred' not present 'prefer'. Suggested improvement: Use simple past for habits in the past and avoid filler 'like' in this context.

× Nowadays I am health conscious so I love to eat like healthy food.

✓ Nowadays I am health-conscious, so I like to eat healthy food.

'Health conscious' should be hyphenated as 'health-conscious' when used as an adjective. 'Love to eat like healthy food' incorrectly uses 'like' and 'love to eat' is fine but 'like to eat' is more typical for preferences; remove 'like' after 'eat'. Suggested improvement: Use correct hyphenation and avoid unnecessary 'like' before noun phrases.

× So future is unpredictable.

✓ The future is unpredictable.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'future'—'the future' is the correct noun phrase. Suggested improvement: Use articles with abstract nouns when referring to a specific concept.

× So I'm not sure about the future what priorities I will give to the food.

✓ So I'm not sure what priorities I will give to food in the future.

Word order is incorrect: place the question word phrase 'what priorities I will give to food' before the time expression or move 'in the future' to end. Also 'the food' is too specific; use 'food' generally. Suggested improvement: Use correct clause order for indirect questions and position time expressions appropriately.

× Certainly, yes, my preference is as well as food is totally changed nowadays because nowadays I am eating healthy yogurts as well as curd as well as green salad which was not present or in my previous diet.

✓ Certainly, yes, my preferences and my diet have totally changed; nowadays I eat yogurt, curd, and green salad, which were not part of my previous diet.

Multiple issues: 'my preference is as well as food is totally changed' is ungrammatical—use 'my preferences and my diet have totally changed' with present perfect to show change up to now. 'I am eating' can be simplified to present simple 'I eat' for habitual actions. Use parallel list 'yogurt, curd, and green salad' and 'were not part of my previous diet' is correct past reference. Suggested improvement: Use present perfect to describe changes over time, present simple for current habits, maintain parallelism in lists, and avoid redundant 'nowadays' repetition.