Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문법과 어휘 선택 오류를 고치고 문장을 더 간결하고 자연스럽게 만드세요. 구체적으로 음식 이름과 맛 묘사를 정확히 하고, 이유를 하나 또는 두 개의 구체적 세부사항으로 연결어(for example, because, so)를 사용해 설명하세요. 예: 주어-동사 일치(One of my favorite foods), 잘못된 단어(book → dish), 중복 표현 제거, 문장 수는 3~4문장으로 유지.

Ví dụ: One of my favorite foods is mala chang (a spicy Chinese dish popular in Korea). I like it because the bold, numbing spice helps me relax after a stressful day. Also, it has a complex blend of flavors like Sichuan pepper and chili that I find very satisfying.

Gợi ý: 중복된 표현(예: "I was I was", "I I"), 불완전한 문장과 부자연스러운 구성을 고치세요. 핵심 문장으로 시작한 뒤, 이유나 구체적 상황을 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 빈도 표현은 정확하게(use "every day"), 그리고 어휘 정정(udon is a Japanese noodle)하세요.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I loved eating udon, a thick Japanese noodle. I wanted to eat it almost every day because it was cheap and filling, and I even exercised more so I could have it as a treat, which made my mother worried.

Gợi ý: 응답에서 불필요한 반복을 제거하고 계절별 식습관의 구체적 예를 제시하세요. 'sensitive'라는 표현을 구체화(예: I am sensitive to temperature or seasonal ingredients)하고, 전공이 요리였다는 점을 간결히 연결하세요. 문장은 2~3개로 요약해 주된 예시(예: 여름에는 시원한 음식, 겨울에는 따뜻한 국물)를 포함하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Because I studied cooking in Korea, I pay attention to seasonal ingredients and often change my meals accordingly. For example, I eat cold noodles and salads in summer, and hearty soups or stews in winter.

Gợi ý: 부정 응답을 더 자연스럽게 말하고 이유를 명확히 제시하세요. 어색한 표현("No, why hasn't?")을 피하고, 부모의 영향이라는 주장에 대해 구체적 예(어떤 집밥 수프인지, 얼마나 자주 먹는지)를 추가하세요. 문장 수는 2~3문장으로 유지하세요.

Ví dụ: No, it hasn't changed much because my eating habits were shaped by my parents. I still enjoy homemade soups like Korean doenjang or beef bone soup, which we have several times a week.

× One of my favorite food is Mara Chango, which is one of the popular Chinese foods among Koreans.

✓ One of my favorite foods is Mara Chango, which is one of the popular Chinese dishes among Koreans.

The noun 'food' should be plural 'foods' after 'one of my favorite' to indicate one item from a group; alternatively use 'favorite food' without 'one of'. Also 'foods' is awkward with 'popular' here, so 'dishes' is more natural. Use of plural ensures correct agreement and natural phrasing. Suggestion: Say 'One of my favorite foods is Mara Chango' or 'My favorite food is Mara Chango' and use 'dishes' for types of prepared food.

× And I think this book is quite spicy, so I can release my stress while I'm eating this food and there's a lot of flavor of this.

✓ And I think this dish is quite spicy, so I can relieve my stress while I'm eating it, and it has a lot of flavor.

'book' is incorrect adjective/noun choice; should be 'dish'. 'Release my stress' is unnatural; use 'relieve my stress'. 'There's a lot of flavor of this' is ungrammatical; use 'it has a lot of flavor.' Also replace 'this food' with pronoun 'it' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: Use precise nouns ('dish') and natural verbs ('relieve') and concise pronouns.

× When I was young, I was I was really keen on eating noodles called udon, which is the *** which is the Japanese food and I I exercised a lot to eat those food everyday and my mother was worried about that.

✓ When I was young, I was really keen on eating noodles called udon, which is a Japanese food, and I exercised a lot to be able to eat those noodles every day, so my mother was worried about that.

Reduce repetition and correct article usage: 'a Japanese food' or better 'a Japanese dish'. 'Those food' should be 'those noodles' (plural noun agreement). 'Everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverbial phrase). 'to eat those food everyday' is awkward; 'to be able to eat those noodles every day' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: Use correct noun plurality, 'every day' for frequency, and concise clauses.

× Yes, I do because I think I'm quite sensitive person, especially on food and my major, my major in Korea was cooking.

✓ Yes, I do because I think I'm quite a sensitive person, especially about food, and my major in Korea was cooking.

'sensitive person' needs an article 'a'. Preposition 'on' with 'sensitive' is incorrect; use 'about'. Repetition 'my major, my major' should be reduced to one phrase. Suggestion: Use 'a sensitive person' and 'sensitive about' to express concern or sensitivity.

× So I I tried various food when I had my own opportunity and I.

✓ So I tried various foods when I had the opportunity.

Remove repetition 'I I' and fix plural 'various foods'. 'my own opportunity' is awkward; use 'the opportunity'. Sentence fragment 'and I.' is incomplete and must be removed or completed. Suggestion: Avoid repetitions and complete sentences; use plural for 'foods' and concise phrases.

× No, why hasn't? Because my food, my food interest was influenced by my parents taste.

✓ No, it hasn't, because my interest in food was influenced by my parents' tastes.

'No, why hasn't?' is ungrammatical in this context; question form wrong. Use 'No, it hasn't.' Possessive 'parents taste' needs apostrophe plural 'parents' tastes'. 'my food interest' should be 'my interest in food'. Suggestion: Use correct subject-verb structure for short answers and proper possessive forms.

× So these days I eat a lot of house soup based on my based on my parents favorite food.

✓ So these days I eat a lot of homemade soups based on my parents' favorite dishes.

'house soup' is unnatural; use 'homemade soups' or 'home-style soups'. Remove repeated 'based on my'. 'parents favorite food' needs possessive 'parents'' and plural 'favorite dishes' for naturalness. Suggestion: Use 'homemade soups' and correct possessive 'parents'' and avoid repetition.