Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は明確で簡潔ですが、いくつか改善点があります。語彙の正確さ（“kiaki”は不明瞭）と具体性を高め、リンク表現で理由をつなぐとより自然になります。またセンテンス数を3〜4文に整え、音声での流暢さを意識してください。例えば料理の特徴や好む理由を具体的に述べると良いです。

Ví dụ: My favourite food is Japanese cuisine, especially sushi and miso soup. I particularly enjoy sushi for its fresh ingredients and variety, and miso soup because it is comforting and healthy. In addition, I like foods with simple, clean flavors.

Gợi ý: 意味は伝わりますが、文法と語順に注意が必要です（“has not been changed”は不自然）。過去の習慣を話すときは過去形や過去の表現を使い、理由や具体例を一つ加えることで説得力が増します。接続詞を使って現在との比較も示しましょう。

Ví dụ: My tastes haven't changed much since I was a child. When I was in elementary school, I often ate Japanese dishes like rice, grilled fish and miso soup, so I grew up loving that cuisine. Therefore, I still prefer similar foods today.

Gợi ý: とても分かりやすく理由も述べられています。より自然に聞こえるように、時制と表現を少し整え、接続表現を使って流れを滑らかにすると良いです。また具体的な食べ物の例を挙げると内容が豊かになります。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. In summer I tend to choose cold dishes, such as salads or cold noodles, because they help me feel refreshed. In contrast, during winter I prefer warm foods like stews or hot soups to stay cosy.

Gợi ý: 内容は明瞭ですが表現の自然さと文法（“parents taste influence me”→“my parents' tastes influenced me”）を改善してください。理由を具体的に述べ、一つ例を加えると説得力が増します。接続語で前の発言とつなぐと良いです。

Ví dụ: As I mentioned, it hasn't changed much since I was a child because my parents' tastes influenced me. For example, my parents often cooked traditional Japanese meals at home, so I became accustomed to those flavours early on.

× My favorite food is Japanese cuisine, especially sushi, miso soup, and kiaki.

✓ My favorite food is Japanese cuisine, especially sushi, miso soup, and kaki.

'kiaki' appears to be a misspelling or incorrect word; likely intended 'kaki' (persimmon) or another food name. This is not an article error per se but correcting a word keeps meaning clear. Ensure proper nouns and food names are spelled correctly to avoid confusion.

× This is because it's healthy and tasty.

✓ This is because it is healthy and tasty.

Contraction 'it's' is acceptable in speech; however, for clarity and formality in test answers, using 'it is' is preferred. No grammatical tense error, but full form improves clarity.

× Actually, my taste of food has not been changed so much when I was young.

✓ Actually, my taste in food has not changed much since I was young.

Use 'taste in food' (correct preposition), 'has not changed' (present perfect) pairs with 'since I was young' to indicate a change from past to now. Original had unnecessary passive 'been changed' and incorrect time expression 'when I was young' with present perfect.

× When I was an elementary school student, I also preferred eating Japanese cuisine.

✓ When I was an elementary school student, I also preferred Japanese cuisine.

'Preferred eating' is acceptable but 'preferred Japanese cuisine' is more natural. The past tense 'preferred' correctly matches 'when I was'.

× Yes I do. During summer time I prefer cold food because I want to clear my mind and feel fresh.

✓ Yes, I do. During the summer I prefer cold food because I want to clear my mind and feel refreshed.

Add comma after 'Yes'. Use 'the summer' or 'summer' as 'during the summer' is natural. 'Feel fresh' is unnatural for a person; use 'feel refreshed'. Also add 'the' for natural noun phrase 'the summer'.

× On the other hand, when it's winter I prefer eating warm food.

✓ On the other hand, when it's winter I prefer warm food.

'Prefer eating warm food' is acceptable, but 'prefer warm food' is more natural. No need for 'eating' after 'prefer' in this context. Also consider a comma after 'winter' for clarity in speech writing.

× As I mentioned, it has not changed so much since I was a child.

✓ As I mentioned, it has not changed much since I was a child.

'So much' is conversationally acceptable but 'much' is more natural in this formal response. Present perfect 'has not changed' with 'since I was a child' is correct.

× I think this is because my parents taste influence me a lot.

✓ I think this is because my parents' tastes influenced me a lot.

Possessive apostrophe needed: 'parents' tastes'. Also use plural 'tastes'. 'Influence me' should be past 'influenced me' because referring to shaping past preferences; present perfect 'have influenced me' could also work if influence continues. Choose tense to match meaning.