Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct minor mistakes, be concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I walk twice a day), avoid typos (‘work’→‘walk’), and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add a brief reason or feeling using a linking word (for example, because/so) to enrich the answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk twice a day. In the early morning I walk barefoot on the grass with my father-in-law, and after dinner I take another walk with my husband. I do this because walking helps me relax and sleep better.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and pronunciation words in writing, be concise and natural. Begin with a direct topic sentence (Yes, I often did), correct verb forms and phrasing (“used to take me to the park”), and provide a specific detail with a linking word (because/so) about what you remember. Avoid capitalization mistakes and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often did. My grandparents used to take me to a nearby park so we could listen to their stories and relax together, which I remember fondly because those walks felt safe and warm.

Gợi ý: Good answer: clear topic sentence, reasons, and linking words. To improve, add a brief specific example or contrast to make it more vivid and natural, and vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., ‘tranquil’ or ‘calming’). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because the greenery is visually calming and helps reduce stress. Also, parks are more tranquil than busy streets, so people can exercise, chat, or unwind without traffic noise. For example, I often go to a park to read on a bench where it feels peaceful.

Gợi ý: Answer is clear and structured. To improve, make the opening sentence more natural (“If I had the chance, I would choose…”) and avoid redundancy (‘a lot’ + ‘this all together’). Add a short specific detail about the park or activity during the walk to enrich the response.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would choose a large city park because I love the greenery and fresh air. I would walk along tree-lined paths and sit by a lake for a while, which would help me relax and clear my mind.

Gợi ý: Be direct and correct sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question (I recently walked in my front garden). Remove filler words (“uh”) and fix grammar (“it has a beautiful sunrise” → “where I can enjoy the sunrise”). Add one specific detail about the walk and a linking word (for example/so) to explain why you choose that spot.

Ví dụ: Lately I have been walking in my front garden. I usually walk there in the morning because I can enjoy the sunrise and the sun-warmed grass, which makes me feel energetic for the day.

× Yeah, I definitely work twice a day.

✓ Yeah, I definitely walk twice a day.

The student used 'work' instead of the correct verb 'walk' for the activity being asked. This is a word choice error rather than a tense or agreement issue. Replace with 'walk' to accurately convey the meaning.

× First is the early morning walk barefoot on the grass with my father-in-law and the other one would be after my dinner with my husband.

✓ The first is an early morning walk barefoot on the grass with my father-in-law, and the other is after my dinner with my husband.

Use consistent noun phrases and parallel structure: add the article 'an' before 'early morning walk' and make the second clause parallel ('the other is') instead of 'the other one would be', which unnecessarily changes modality. This keeps present habitual meaning.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

This sentence is grammatically acceptable in past tense question form. No change needed. (Included to show it meets the tense of the question.)

× When I was a child, my grandparents used to Take Me Out for a walk in a park so that we can here to their stories and relax a bit.

✓ When I was a child, my grandparents used to take me out for a walk in a park so that we could listen to their stories and relax a bit.

Correct capitalization: 'Take Me Out' should be 'take me out'. 'Can here to' is ungrammatical: use past modal 'could' (matching 'used to') and the verb 'listen to' for hearing stories. Also change 'their' to refer to grandparents (correct). These changes fix verb form, tense consistency and word choice.

× People like to walk in parks because it's full of greenery, which is visually relaxing and reduces stress.

✓ People like to walk in parks because they're full of greenery, which is visually relaxing and reduces stress.

The subject 'parks' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' or the contraction 'they're' rather than 'it's'. This is a subject-pronoun agreement issue and article/pronoun choice.

× It's also quieter than the streets, so people can exercise or chat and relax without the noise and rush of the traffic.

✓ It's also quieter than the streets, so people can exercise or chat and relax without the noise and rush of traffic.

Omit the definite article 'the' before 'traffic' in this general statement. 'The traffic' implies specific traffic; 'traffic' as an uncountable noun is more natural here.

× If I had a chance, I would definitely choose a large City Park because I enjoy the greenery a lot with some fresh air and a peaceful atmosphere.

✓ If I had the chance, I would definitely choose a large city park because I enjoy the greenery, fresh air, and peaceful atmosphere.

Use 'the chance' rather than 'a chance' in this conditional phrase for natural English. 'City Park' should not be capitalized unless it's a proper name. Also make the list parallel and concise: 'greenery, fresh air, and peaceful atmosphere'.

× This all together will help me relax and clear my mind.

✓ All of this together will help me relax and clear my mind.

Better word order is 'All of this together' rather than 'This all together' for natural emphasis. Keeps future/modal sense from prior conditional consistent.

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where have you gone for a walk lately?

The adverb 'lately' commonly pairs with present perfect in English to ask about recent experience, so use 'have you gone' rather than simple past 'did you go'.

× My house has two beautiful gardens both in the front and at the back.

✓ My house has two beautiful gardens, one in the front and one at the back.

Use 'one in the front and one at the back' for clarity and natural phrasing instead of 'both in the front and at the back' which is awkward.

× Mornings are always, uh, at the front area because it's it has a beautiful sunrise and sun kissed.

✓ I always walk in the front garden in the mornings because it has a beautiful sunrise and is sun-kissed.

Original is ungrammatical and redundant ('it's it has'). Clarify the subject and verb: 'I always walk in the front garden in the mornings'. Use 'is sun-kissed' as an adjective; hyphenate 'sun-kissed'. This fixes sentence structure and tense consistency.