Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Speak more accurately and concisely. Begin with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (e.g., subject-verb agreement, correct verb forms) and use precise vocabulary (e.g., “walk to school,” “track my steps,” “calories burned”). Avoid filler phrases like “you know.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk to school every day, and I also use a step-tracking app on my phone to monitor how many kilometers I walk and the calories I burn, which I find motivating.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear past-tense response with specific, coherent details. Start with a direct topic sentence in past simple, then add one or two concrete memories using correct pronouns and past verbs. Avoid trailing off and unnecessary fillers.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often walked to a nearby park with my mother when I was a child. She would read me stories while I lay on her lap, and I remember feeling very safe and happy during those afternoons.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give clearly structured reasons with linking words. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., “because,” “so,” “therefore”) and correct grammar. Mention specific benefits (fresh air, greenery, relaxation) and contrast briefly with walking near roads.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because they offer green space and fresher air, which is a relief in cities with high pollution. Also, parks provide a peaceful atmosphere for exercise and relaxation, unlike busy roads with traffic and exhaust fumes.

Gợi ý: Clarify and organize your response: state the location clearly, then give two specific reasons using linking words like “because” and “and.” Use natural collocations (e.g., “convenient,” “burn calories,” “look for items,” “air conditioning”). Avoid hesitations and repetitions.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk around the shopping mall near my home because it is convenient and air-conditioned. I could burn calories while window-shopping, and I might also find useful items for my home.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and simple clear sentences. Begin with a direct past-tense answer naming the place, then give specific details about when and with whom, using appropriate vocabulary (e.g., “met,” “coffee shop,” “catch up”). Avoid filler words and apologizing for content.

Ví dụ: Recently I went for a walk to a coffee shop near my home. I met some friends there in the evening and we sat and talked about our lives and caught up on news.

× Well, I'm actually kind of person who usually go to school on foot and you know, working is actually my activity daily basis 'cause I'm set up an app in my iPhone and it's count how kilometers that I'm work in this day and how curries are burnout.

✓ Well, I'm actually the kind of person who usually goes to school on foot, and you know, walking is actually my daily activity because I set up an app on my iPhone that counts how many kilometers I walk each day and how many calories I burn.

Pronoun and article errors: 'kind of person' needs the definite article 'the' for a specific description; 'who usually go' must agree with singular 'who' referring to 'the kind of person' so verb becomes 'goes' (subject-verb agreement, grammar type 27 as well). 'Working' is incorrect meaning; context requires 'walking' (word choice). 'I'm set up an app' misuses pronouns/voice; correct is 'I set up an app' or 'I have set up an app'. 'in my iPhone' should be 'on my iPhone'. 'it's count how kilometers that I'm work in this day and how curries are burnout' contains multiple pronoun and word errors: use 'that counts how many kilometers I walk each day and how many calories I burn'. Suggestions: use correct articles ('the'), ensure subject-verb agreement, choose correct nouns/verbs ('walking', 'calories'), and use correct prepositions ('on my iPhone').

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside for a walk when you were a child?

Minor preposition and phrasing: 'to have a walk' is non-idiomatic in this context; native usage is 'for a walk'. The sentence tense is correct (past), so maintain past tense form 'Did you... go'. Suggestion: use standard collocations like 'go for a walk'. (Also could accept 'Did you often go outside to walk when you were a child?').

× Well, definitely yes and walk to a park near my home with my Ukrainian parents and you know, she just read me a a novel books and I'm enjoy it when I'm laying down on her chest.

✓ Well, definitely yes; I walked to a park near my home with my Ukrainian parents, and you know, she would read me novels and I enjoyed it when I lay on her chest.

Pronoun and tense errors: Mixed tenses and wrong pronouns. 'walk' should be past 'walked' to match 'were a child' context. 'she just read me a a novel books' has pronoun and number errors: use 'she would read me novels' or 'she read me a novel' but keep number consistent. 'I'm enjoy it when I'm laying down on her chest' mixes present and progressive incorrectly for past recollection; correct is 'I enjoyed it when I lay on her chest' (past simple). Suggestions: maintain past tense for childhood memories and match singular/plural nouns ('novels' or 'a novel').

× And also we just left a beautiful moment and sometimes we just.

✓ We also had many beautiful moments together.

The original is incomplete and ungrammatical: 'we just left a beautiful moment' is incorrect verb and tense, and the sentence trails off 'sometimes we just.' Rewrite succinctly to convey intended meaning. Suggestions: complete the idea with a correct verb ('had') and noun ('moments'), and avoid trailing fragments.

× Well, because in Vietnam, a country who have a lot of air pollution and so we enjoyed working in the park to have a green space for everyone to enjoy a peaceful atmosphere.

✓ Well, because in Vietnam, a country that has a lot of air pollution, we enjoy walking in parks to have green spaces where everyone can enjoy a peaceful atmosphere.

Preposition and relative clause errors: Use 'that has' not 'who have' for a country (use 'that' and singular verb). 'working in the park' should be 'walking in parks'. 'to have a green space' is awkward; better 'to enjoy green spaces' or 'to have green spaces' plural. Suggestions: use correct relative pronoun 'that' for things, match verb number, and use idiomatic verbs ('walking in parks').

× Apparently you work outside on the road and with a lot of, you know, vehicles, gas.

✓ Otherwise you walk outside on the road among many vehicles and exhaust fumes.

Preposition and word choice: 'Apparently you work outside' doesn't fit context; likely 'you walk outside'. 'and with a lot of, you know, vehicles, gas' is unclear; use 'among many vehicles and exhaust fumes' or 'traffic and exhaust'. Suggestions: choose precise nouns and prepositions ('among', 'outside on the road').

× Well, I would say that was a mall near my home because it's actually, uh, kind of convenience, right 'cause when you walk, uh, and you know, you burnout your calories and also you can look for something stuff, kind of stuff for your home and furniture.

✓ Well, I would say the mall near my home because it's actually kind of convenient; when you walk you burn calories, and you can look for items for your home and furniture.

Tense and adjective/adverb errors: 'that was a mall' is incorrect; use 'the mall near my home'. 'kind of convenience' should be adjective 'convenient'. 'you burnout your calories' uses incorrect verb form; correct is 'you burn calories'. 'look for something stuff' is ungrammatical; use 'look for items' or 'things'. Suggestions: use correct adjective forms and simple present for general truths ('you burn').

× And it's also have an AC inside so you cannot get hard.

✓ It also has air conditioning inside so you won't be uncomfortable.

Article and verb errors: 'it's also have' should be 'it also has' (subject-verb agreement). 'an AC' is informal; better 'air conditioning'. 'so you cannot get hard' is incorrect and unclear; intended meaning likely 'you won't be uncomfortable' or 'you won't get too hot'. Suggestions: use correct verb form, clearer vocabulary for comfort/temperature.

× Well, I would say it if I'm just work at night, that's absolutely that.

✓ Well, I would say if I just work at night, that's absolutely true.

Tense and structure errors: 'if I'm just work at night' mixes present continuous with base verb; correct conditional is 'if I just work at night'. 'that's absolutely that' is unidiomatic; use 'that's absolutely true'. Suggestions: form conditionals correctly and use standard collocations ('absolutely true').

× I have a meet with my friends at a coffee shops near our home and we reach them there and, you know, start a deep talk and also talk about, you know, some gossips.

✓ I meet my friends at a coffee shop near our home; we meet there and start a deep conversation and also talk about some gossip.

Pronoun and noun number errors: 'I have a meet' should be 'I meet' or 'I have a meeting'; 'a coffee shops' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'a coffee shop' or 'coffee shops'. 'we reach them there' is wrong pronoun; use 'we meet there' or 'we get there'. 'start a deep talk' should be 'start a deep conversation'. 'some gossips' should be 'some gossip' (uncountable) or 'some gossip topics'. Suggestions: use correct collocations ('meet', 'coffee shop', 'conversation') and correct countability for 'gossip'.