Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No + frequency), then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetition, filler words (actually, umm) and unclear phrases ("my major is to raise my"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot in my free time. I usually hike in the mountains because it helps me relax and keeps me fit, and I often walk for an hour or two after work.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a clear contrast or detail about past habits. Use past simple for childhood and avoid repeating the same idea. Provide a brief reason or specific memory to enrich the response.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went outside to walk when I was a child. My family lived near a park, so we used to walk there every weekend and I enjoyed exploring the trees and streams.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use varied vocabulary (relaxing, peaceful, fresh air) and avoid contradictory or unclear words like "freezing" if you mean cool or shaded. Use linking words such as "because" and "for example."

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because they are peaceful and offer fresh air. For example, parks have trees and benches where you can relax, and the open space feels less crowded than city streets.

Gợi ý: Respond directly with the place, then give two specific reasons why. Reduce repetition and remove fillers. Use linking words like "because" and "for example" to structure the answer.

Ví dụ: I would like to take a long walk in Switzerland because the scenery is beautiful and it's surrounded by mountains and lakes. For example, walking along alpine trails or through picturesque villages would be very peaceful.

Gợi ý: Use past simple to describe a recent activity and give clear, specific details about where and what you did. Avoid unclear or incorrect place names and reduce fillers. Mention one or two outcomes (felt relaxed, exercised) with linking words like "and" or "so."

Ví dụ: I went for a walk in the mountains two days ago. I hiked a local trail called Shambhala, and it was very relaxing and a good workout since the path was steep in places.

× Oh yeah, in my free time, I actually like walking. It's actually hiking in the mountains because it helps me relax and stay fit.

✓ Oh yeah, in my free time I actually like walking; I especially like hiking in the mountains because it helps me relax and stay fit.

The student mixed forms and phrases awkwardly. 'It's actually hiking' is ungrammatical; use a clear verb phrase such as 'I especially like hiking'. Keep consistent gerund use ('like walking', 'like hiking'). Also remove redundant 'actually' and fix punctuation for clarity.

× And actually my major is to raise my and I am a more umm, walking and more hiking in a day.

✓ Actually, walking and hiking are major parts of my routine, and I try to walk and hike more each day.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'My major is to raise my' is incomplete. Rephrase to state the intended meaning: that walking and hiking are important in the student's routine. Use plural 'walking and hiking are' and verbs 'try to' with 'each day' for clarity.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

This question sentence is already correct. No grammatical correction needed. (Kept because it matches past question form.)

× Yeah, in my childhood, I often went outside to have a walking, to have a walking, uh, because I am a person who really like walking.

✓ Yeah, in my childhood I often went outside for a walk because I am a person who really likes walking.

Use the noun phrase 'for a walk' rather than 'to have a walking'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement: 'I am a person who really likes walking' (likes matches 'who'). Remove redundancy and filler words.

× I don't know childhood or in a uh, today I am really like walking.

✓ I don't know about my childhood, but today I really like walking.

Replace 'I don't know childhood or in a uh' with 'I don't know about my childhood' for meaning. Use present tense 'I really like walking' and remove extra 'am' which is incorrect here.

× I think a lot of people like walking in a park because park is a place where you feel calm and also comfortable.

✓ I think a lot of people like walking in parks because a park is a place where you feel calm and comfortable.

Use plural 'parks' to generalize, or use 'a park' with article. Original 'park is' lacks an article. Also 'calm and also comfortable' is redundant; simplify to 'calm and comfortable'.

× Because when when sunny outside a park is a more freezing, more comfortable, more calm, calm place walking.

✓ When it's sunny outside, a park is a cooler, more comfortable, and calmer place to walk.

Original has word repetition and incorrect word order. Use contraction 'it's' or 'it is', adjective order 'cooler, more comfortable, and calmer', and 'place to walk' for correct verb-noun structure.

× I would like to take a long walk in, uh, Switzerland because I really like Switzerland vibe.

✓ I would like to take a long walk in Switzerland because I really like Switzerland's vibe.

Remove filler 'uh' and use possessive 'Switzerland's vibe' to show the vibe belongs to the country. The rest of sentence is correct for conditional/future desire.

× I really like Switzerland streets, uh, and surrounded by nature.

✓ I really like Switzerland's streets and being surrounded by nature.

Use possessive 'Switzerland's streets' and the gerund phrase 'being surrounded by nature' to make the sentence grammatical. Remove filler 'uh'.

× I really like walking in the in the future, I really like I I really want to Switzerland to take a long walk.

✓ In the future, I really want to go to Switzerland to take a long walk.

Original repeats fragments and misorders elements. Use 'In the future' at the start, then 'I really want to go to Switzerland to take a long walk' for correct verb order and cohesion.

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where did you go for a walk recently?

'Lately' is acceptable, but 'recently' is more natural with past simple 'did you go'. This is a stylistic suggestion rather than grammatical necessity.

× I went for a walk lately is actually mountains and two days ago I went in mountains a who killed Shambhala and it's really really umm relax, enjoy and helps me stay fit.

✓ Recently I went for a walk in the mountains; two days ago I hiked to a place called Shambhala, and it was really relaxing and enjoyable and helped me stay fit.

The original is very fragmented, with incorrect word order and tense inconsistencies. Use 'Recently I went' or 'two days ago I hiked', name insert 'a place called Shambhala' if that's intended, use past tense 'was' and 'helped' for completed actions, and adjectives 'relaxing' and 'enjoyable' (present participles) to describe the experience.