Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I do walk a lot' or 'Yes, I walk a lot'), use articles and verb forms properly, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk quite a lot. I usually go for a 30–40 minute walk every evening because listening to music helps me clear my mind after a long day of work and think about my project.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with correct past tense and concise explanation. Avoid repeating the same idea and clarify the cultural reason in one or two sentences with correct grammar. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to make the cause clear.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't go outside often as a child because, in my community, girls were discouraged from going out. So I rarely had the chance to walk around.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons with correct word forms and linking words. Avoid unclear words and unfinished sentences. Use vocabulary like 'relax', 'reduce stress', 'enjoy nature', and 'exercise'.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because it helps them relax and reduce stress. In addition, parks offer fresh air and pleasant scenery, which make people feel more comfortable and confident.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct conditional sentence and give specific reasons concisely. Use correct conditional verb forms and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so that'.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in a quiet park because it would help me relax, clear my mind, and reduce stress.

Gợi ý: Answer in past tense for 'did you... lately' and be specific about when and where. Reduce filler words and give a clear reason using linking words. Mention a recent time to make it concrete.

Ví dụ: I went to the nearby city park last weekend. I like walking there because it makes me feel comfortable, reduces my stress, and boosts my confidence.

× Yes, I do work a lot.

✓ Yes, I work a lot.

The original uses auxiliary 'do' unnecessarily with the main verb in present simple. Use simple present 'I work' to state a habitual action. Suggestion: remove 'do' when not forming a question or emphatic statement.'

× I usually go for 30 to 40 minutes walk every evening while I am listening to music which help me to clear my mind after a day of working alone.

✓ I usually go for a 30- to 40-minute walk every evening while I listen to music which helps me clear my mind after a day of working alone.

Use the adjectival form '30- to 40-minute' to modify 'walk' and singular 'walk' with this duration. Change continuous 'am listening' to simple present 'listen' for habitual actions. 'Help' must agree with singular 'music', so use 'helps'. Also 'to clear' is fine; remove 'a' before 'day' is optional but original 'a day' is fine, retained. Suggestion: use consistent simple present for routines and ensure subject-verb agreement.'

× Walking alone gives me time to think about the project.

✓ Walking alone gives me time to think about my projects.

Original is grammatically acceptable, but 'the project' is vague; if speaking generally, use 'my projects' or keep 'the project' if referring to a specific project. No tense change needed. Suggestion: choose singular or plural to match intended meaning.'

× When I was a child, I did not go outside from home because of our society.

✓ When I was a child, I did not go outside because of our society's rules.

Use simple past 'did not go' correctly. Remove 'from home' which is awkward; 'go outside' already implies leaving home. Add a possessive 'society's rules' to clarify reason. Suggestion: simplify phrase and add a clear noun for the cause.'

× They don't.

✓ They did not allow it.

This fragment 'They don't.' is vague and mixes present auxiliary with a past context. The speaker referred to past restrictions, so use past 'did not allow it' or 'would not allow girls to go out.' Suggestion: make the subject and action explicit and match past tense.'

× They didn't go out to girls to go outside.

✓ They did not allow girls to go outside.

The original word order is incorrect. Use 'allow' with object 'girls' and infinitive 'to go outside'. Keep past tense 'did not allow' to match context. Suggestion: use correct verb + object + infinitive structure.'

× So that's why I do not go outside for a long time when I was a child.

✓ So that's why I did not go outside for a long time when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present 'do not go' with past time marker 'when I was a child'. Use past 'did not go' to maintain consistent tense. Suggestion: ensure tense matches the time reference.'

× People like to walk in Barsa due to relax their mind and feel more confident M more comfortable, so they working in the parks and they.

✓ People like to walk in parks to relax their minds and feel more confident and comfortable, so they spend time working or resting there.

Use 'to' + verb (to relax) instead of 'due to relax'. 'Barsa' unclear; likely 'parks' generalized. Use plural 'minds' to match 'people'. Fix 'M more' typo and join adjectives with 'and'. 'They working' lacks auxiliary; use 'they spend time working'. Suggestion: use 'to' for purpose, plural agreement, and include auxiliary verbs.'

× If I had a chance to walk along I would go to the park and I will walk in the park for a long time to relax my man mind and reduce stress and for that I am choosing a park to take a longer walk.

✓ If I had the chance to walk alone, I would go to the park and walk there for a long time to relax my mind and reduce stress, so I would choose a park for a long walk.

In the second conditional, use 'would' in both main clauses and 'walk alone' (not 'along'). Replace 'will' with 'would' to match hypothetical condition. Fix 'man mind' to 'my mind'. Simplify repetition and keep consistent conditional structure. Suggestion: use correct conditional forms and correct word choice.'

× I usually go, uh, to park.

✓ I usually go to the park.

Use the definite article 'the' before 'park' when referring to a specific or habitual place. Remove filler comma. Suggestion: include articles with singular countable nouns.'

× To walk there and because I feel comfortable when I am working in the park and to reduce my stress and feel confident.

✓ I walk there because I feel comfortable in the park, and it helps me reduce stress and feel confident.

Original is a sentence fragment lacking a clear subject and verb structure. Use simple present 'I walk' to state habit, change 'when I am working' to 'in the park' for simplicity, and combine purposes with 'and it helps me...'. Suggestion: form complete sentences with subject and verb and keep tense consistent.