Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and relevant: answer the question about walking first, then add brief supporting details about frequency, purpose or context. Use correct grammar, limit to max 4–5 sentences, and avoid unrelated personal traits. Use linking words (for example, 'because', 'so') and precise vocabulary (e.g., 'often', 'rarely', 'for exercise', 'to commute').

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk fairly often, usually in the evenings after work because I like to relax and stay fit. For example, I walk for about 30 minutes three times a week along nearby streets. Although I work long shifts at the hospital, I try to fit in short walks whenever I can.

Gợi ý: Answer clearly with a topic sentence (Yes/No), then give 1–2 specific supporting details about routines or reasons from childhood. Avoid pauses and unfinished sentences; use simple past tense correctly. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't often go for walks as a child because my days were mainly filled with school and studying. For instance, I usually went straight home after classes and spent most of my free time doing homework or helping at home.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence explaining general reasons. Provide 2–3 specific reasons with brief examples or effects, and use linking phrases (for example, 'for example', 'also', 'because'). Correct common vocabulary errors ('people', 'park', 'exercise', 'fresh air') and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks for several reasons. For example, older adults often walk there to exercise gently and socialize, while younger people go to enjoy fresh air and nature. Also, parks provide a quiet, safe place to relax and reduce stress.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence naming the place, then add 1–2 specific reasons why you prefer it. Use correct expressions ('beachside' → 'the beach', 'beach person' → 'I love the beach') and avoid filler words. Keep it concise and cohesive with linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the beach because I love the sea views and the sound of the waves. Walking on the sand helps me relax and I can walk for hours without getting bored.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly in past tense: name the most recent walk or state you haven't had one recently. Provide a reason and, if possible, say when you plan to go next. Use correct tense and smoother phrasing (e.g., 'I haven't had time recently because I work from 1 pm to 10 pm').

Ví dụ: I haven't been for a walk recently because I work long shifts from 1 pm to 10 pm. However, I plan to go for a relaxing walk this weekend when I have a day off, probably in the morning to enjoy the fresh air.

× Yes, I'm a very hard worker, hard working, adaptability and very charming person.

✓ Yes, I'm a very hardworking, adaptable and charming person.

The speaker used 'hard working' and 'adaptability' incorrectly. Use the adjective 'hardworking' (one word) and 'adaptable' as the adjective form of 'adaptability' to describe a person. Also use parallel structure when listing adjectives (hardworking, adaptable, and charming).

× I'm working hard for my future.

✓ I am working hard for my future.

The sentence is grammatically acceptable but contractions and style: expand 'I'm' to 'I am' or keep contraction consistently. The present continuous 'am working' correctly indicates ongoing effort toward the future. No tense change needed; suggestion: 'I am working hard for my future.' for clarity.

× I still working as an AHR in hospital.

✓ I am still working as an HR at a hospital.

Missing auxiliary verb 'am' after subject 'I' (present continuous). Use the correct abbreviation 'HR' and the preposition 'at' for working location: 'at a hospital.' Also place 'still' before 'working' for natural word order.

× I have a big dreams like I want to become an account so there is so much hard work I need.

✓ I have big dreams: I want to become an accountant, so I have a lot of hard work to do.

Mismatch between singular article 'a' and plural 'dreams' (article removal). 'Account' is the wrong noun; the correct profession term is 'accountant.' Use 'a lot of' instead of 'so much' for countable/uncountable context with 'hard work' and rephrase to 'to do' for clarity.

× No, probably not, because when I was in my childhood, uh, there is. I didn't remember that I had gone along with anything.

✓ No, probably not, because when I was a child, I don't remember going anywhere with anyone.

Use 'when I was a child' rather than 'in my childhood.' The clause 'there is' is incorrect and should be removed. Use simple present 'I don't remember' or past simple 'I didn't remember' depending on context; 'I don't remember' is more natural. Use 'going anywhere with anyone' instead of 'had gone along with anything.'

× Umm, I have only my school and my.

✓ Umm, I only had my school and home.

The original is incomplete ('my.' unfinished). Use complete nouns: 'school and home.' Match tense to context: 'had' or 'only had' if speaking about childhood; 'I only had my school and home' clarifies intended meaning.

× Yes, there are so much types of people who like to walk in a palace.

✓ Yes, there are so many types of people who like to walk in a park.

Use 'many' with countable plural 'types' (not 'much'). 'Palace' is incorrect for the context; likely 'park.' Also use plural agreement 'types of people.'

× Uh, I think some are old people when they have to be spent time or they have to be, uh, exercising there for a healthy journey.

✓ I think some are older people who spend time there or exercise for their health.

Use 'older people' rather than 'old people' for politeness and correctness. Replace awkward passive 'have to be spent time' with active 'who spend time there.' 'Exercising there for a healthy journey' is unclear; use 'exercise for their health.' Adjust pronouns for clarity.

× And some people are like, uh, some they have to get a fresh air.

✓ And some people want to get fresh air.

'Have to get a fresh air' is incorrect: 'fresh air' is uncountable so no article 'a.' Use 'want to' instead of 'have to' for intention. Remove redundant 'some' and 'they.'

× So that's why they are.

✓ So that's why they go there.

Original sentence is incomplete and unclear ('they are' what?). Complete the idea: 'they go there' or 'they do that' depending on referent. 'They go there' clearly states the reason.

× I think I want to be a if I get a chance to take a long walk, I will definitely go on a beach side because I love beachside and I can walk every long path if they're near a beach.

✓ If I get the chance to take a long walk, I will definitely go to the beach because I love the seaside and I can walk long paths near a beach.

The original has fragments and repeated words. Remove the stray 'I want to be a.' Use 'If I get the chance' for conditional, 'go to the beach' instead of 'go on a beach side.' 'Seaside' or 'the beach' is natural. 'Walk every long path' is awkward; use 'walk long paths.' Replace 'they're' (plural pronoun) with 'they are' is unnecessary; rephrase for clarity.

× I'm a very beaches person, so yeah.

✓ I'm a very beach-loving person, so yes.

'Beaches person' is ungrammatical. Use compound adjective 'beach-loving' or 'I really like beaches.' 'So yes' is more natural than 'so yeah' in a formal response.

× Uh, not right now because I'm working as a HR and my duty time is uh a 1:00 PM to 10:00 PM so I don't get any time to walk, but I will definitely go for walk whenever I get a time to relaxing.

✓ Not right now because I'm working as an HR and my duty time is 1:00 PM to 10:00 PM, so I don't have time to walk, but I will definitely go for a walk whenever I get time to relax.

Use 'I'm working as an HR' is acceptable but 'an HR' is informal; 'an HR assistant' or 'in HR' may be clearer. Remove extra 'a' before the time range. Use 'I don't have time' rather than 'I don't get any time.' 'Go for a walk' requires the article 'a.' 'Whenever I get time to relax' is correct phrasing instead of 'get a time to relaxing.'