Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and concise: give a clear topic sentence then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and small grammar mistakes (e.g., "bought bought", "one of my favorite kind"). Use correct article and plural forms ("historical books are one of my favorite kinds"). Aim for 2–4 sentences and a natural linking phrase if needed.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love reading, especially historical books. For example, I enjoy biographies of past leaders and books about major events because they help me understand how societies changed. I also read comics sometimes for relaxation.

Gợi ý: Organize the answer: start with a clear preference, give one or two specific reasons, and avoid filler words and repetition. Correct common mistakes: say "physical/paper books" and "my eyes start to hurt". Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use a linking word like "because" or "so" to connect reason.

Ví dụ: I prefer reading physical books rather than on a screen. I find paper books more comfortable because my eyes tend to hurt after long screen use, and I enjoy the feel of real pages.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct topic sentence then two clear examples of when you read carefully and when you skim. Use clearer grammar and specific phrasing (e.g., "dates and events" rather than vague clauses). Avoid trailing words and repeat only needed information. Use linking words like "for example" and "however."

Ví dụ: I read carefully when the text contains important facts, such as dates and descriptions of events, because I want to understand the sequence and causes. However, I skim sections that contain minor personal details, like family relationships, unless they are relevant to the main story.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give one or two concise reasons and an example. Avoid redundancy ("only" repeated) and tighten grammar ("detailed reading" or "reading in detail"). Keep answer to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "so."

Ví dụ: I prefer reading in detail because I want to fully understand and learn from a book. For example, when I read a history book I carefully study each paragraph to remember dates and causes of events.

× Usually read books like comics, biography or the historical books.

✓ I usually read books like comics, biographies, or history books.

The original sentence omits the subject and uses inconsistent noun forms. 'Usually read' needs the subject 'I' and verb in simple present 'read'. 'Biography' should be plural 'biographies' to match 'comics' and 'history books' is a more natural phrase than 'the historical books'. Improve by including the subject and using consistent plural forms.

× The historical books are one of my favorite kind of books.

✓ Historical books are one of my favorite kinds of books.

Using 'The' before a general category is unnecessary. 'one of my favorite kind of books' is incorrect because 'one of' requires a plural noun after it: 'kinds'. Also 'historical books' without 'the' is more natural when speaking generally.

× I usually bought bought that kind of books only.

✓ I usually buy only that kind of book.

'Usually' indicates a habitual action, so use simple present 'buy' rather than past 'bought'. Remove the duplicated word 'bought'. Use singular 'that kind of book' or plural 'those kinds of books'; here 'that kind of book' is corrected for clarity and place 'only' before the phrase it limits.

× I prefer reading on pay books from books, the physical books, yeah, because I think that's the best, uh, kind of reading books because when we read from the screen, like our my eyes started paining.

✓ I prefer reading from physical books because I think that's the best way to read; when we read from a screen, my eyes start hurting.

The original has several preposition and word choice errors: 'on pay books from books' is garbled. Use 'reading from physical books'. 'Kind of reading books' is redundant; use 'way to read'. For the second clause, use simple present 'my eyes start hurting' to describe a general effect, not past tense 'started paining', and 'paining' is incorrect — use 'hurting'.

× So I usually pref always prefer reading books from the paper.

✓ So I usually always prefer reading books on paper.

Mixing 'pref' and 'prefer' and 'from the paper' is incorrect. Use 'prefer' and the idiomatic preposition 'on paper' for reading medium. 'Usually always' is redundant; choose one or reword to 'almost always' or simply 'usually'.

× As I said, I like historical books, so I read very carefully like when the particular dates are mentioned in their books, like from this year, the that king start fighting and this kind of things.

✓ As I said, I like historical books, so I read very carefully when particular dates are mentioned in the books, such as when a king started fighting in a certain year.

Use simple present 'I read very carefully' for habitual action, but the subordinate clause describing past events in a book should use past tense 'started fighting'. Remove 'their' (unclear possessive) and awkward fillers 'like' and 'this kind of things'. Use 'such as' to introduce examples and correct noun and verb forms.

× So but the things I don't care about is the like The Who is the father of that person and and.

✓ But I don't care about details like who the father of a person was.

Original has pronoun and capitalization errors: 'the things I don't care about is' should be 'the things I don't care about are' if keeping structure, or reword as 'I don't care about details'. 'The Who is the father' is incorrect; use 'who the father of a person was'. Remove duplicated 'and' and unnecessary 'the'.

× I always prefer to detail reading only because I think if the if we are reading book so we are we should gain some knowledge from that book and that knowledge only came only if we read the very carefully each and every line of that book.

✓ I always prefer detailed reading because I think if we read a book we should gain some knowledge from it, and that knowledge comes only if we read each and every line very carefully.

'To detail reading' is incorrect; use adjective 'detailed reading'. Remove redundant words ('if the if', 'we are we should') and use correct tense: simple present 'we read', 'comes' to express general truth. Place 'very carefully' after 'read' for natural adverb placement and remove extra 'the'.