Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct minor mistakes, shorten slightly, and provide a specific example. Use a clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details with a linking phrase. Avoid tense/word errors such as “leading” and redundant phrases like “I think it works.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy reading because it helps me relax after a long day at work. For example, recently I read a novel by Milan Kundera, and focusing on the story really helped me forget about my routine for a few hours.

Gợi ý: Make the response more concise, fix minor vocabulary/collocation issues (e.g., “tactile feel” not “feels over pages”), and use a linking word to show contrast or reason. One topic sentence plus one clear supporting reason and a brief example is enough.

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because I enjoy the tactile feel of pages and find turning them satisfying. In addition, screens strain my eyes, so I usually choose paper for novels and other long texts.

Gợi ý: Correct unclear word choices (e.g., “study thefts” is incorrect—probably “study texts” or “academic texts”), be specific about examples, and use a clear linking contrast word like “whereas” or “but.” Keep sentences concise and precise.

Ví dụ: I read carefully when the material is important, such as contracts or academic texts, because I need to understand details and avoid mistakes. In contrast, I skim social media posts and casual messages since they usually do not require close attention.

Gợi ý: This answer is strong but can be slightly tightened and include a brief linking phrase and a concrete example to showcase specificity. Maintain natural phrasing and avoid redundancy like “understand and remember... in one go.”

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand and remember information. For instance, when I read articles carefully, I rarely miss important points and can form clearer opinions.

× Recently I've been leading a novel by Milan Kundera.

✓ Recently I've been reading a novel by Milan Kundera.

The verb 'leading' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is to engage in reading. Use 'read' in the present perfect continuous 'have been reading' to show an action that started recently and is ongoing. Suggestion: replace 'leading' with 'reading' to match the context and tense.

× I prefer to read on paper because I love the tactile feels over pages and turning pages feels more satisfying and I also find text on screen makes my eyes tired so I usually choose paper for novels or longer texts.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because I love the tactile feel of pages, and turning pages feels more satisfying. I also find that text on a screen makes my eyes tired, so I usually choose paper for novels or longer texts.

The phrase 'tactile feels over pages' is ungrammatical; 'feel' is the correct noun form and 'of pages' expresses possession. The long run-on sentence should be split for clarity. Also add 'that' after 'find' and the article 'a' before 'screen'. Suggestions: use 'tactile feel of pages', split into two sentences, and include 'that' and 'a' as shown.

× When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

✓ When do you need to read carefully, and when do you not?

The original ellipsis omits the auxiliary verb in the second clause, which is acceptable in conversational speech but less grammatical in written form. To parallel the first clause, include the auxiliary 'do' in the second clause: 'when do you not?'. This keeps subject-auxiliary inversion consistent.

× I read carefully when the material is important, for example, contracts or study thefts, because I must understand details and avoid mistakes.

✓ I read carefully when the material is important, for example, contracts or study texts, because I must understand details and avoid mistakes.

The phrase 'study thefts' appears to be a word choice error; likely intended 'study texts' or 'study materials'. 'Thefts' is unrelated. Suggest replacing with 'study texts' or 'study materials' to convey the meaning of academic or learning-related documents.

× However, I usually skim the social media posts and casual messages since they generally don't require close attention.

✓ However, I usually skim social media posts and casual messages since they generally don't require close attention.

The original is mostly correct but contains an unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'social media posts'. Omitting 'the' is more natural and idiomatic. Suggest removing unnecessary articles for natural phrasing.

× I prefer detailed reading because I can understand and remember information in one go.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I can understand and remember information in one go.

This sentence is grammatical. No correction needed. Keep as is.

× When I concentrate on the texts, I'm less likely to miss important points, which helps me think more clearly.

✓ When I concentrate on the texts, I'm less likely to miss important points, which helps me think more clearly.

This sentence is grammatical and matches present tense usage; no correction needed.