Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific reasons with examples. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases like "a reading" or "I am a free." Use linking words (for example, because, so, and) to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. I especially like stories because they entertain me and help me relax after a busy day. For example, I often read short novels before bed because they help me unwind and forget about stress.

Gợi ý: Answer directly (paper or screen), then give clear reasons and a brief example. Use correct vocabulary ("screen," not "Sun green") and fixed expressions ("read on my phone"). Avoid repeating the same idea.

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on a screen, mainly on my phone, because it is easy to carry and I can quickly search for articles. For instance, when I commute I read news on my phone rather than carrying heavy books.

Gợi ý: Structure the answer with a clear contrast using linking words ("when... but..."). Use correct collocations ("read carefully," "for my studies," "leisure magazines") and give a specific example of each situation.

Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I study because I must understand facts and remember details for exams. In contrast, when I read magazines in my free time I usually skim articles and look at pictures, for example when I read a fashion magazine I just look at images rather than reading every article.

Gợi ý: State your preference clearly (detailed reading or scanning) then give specific reasons and an example. Use correct vocabulary: "detailed reading" (not "retail"), "overthinker" is informal—say "I tend to think deeply." Avoid redundant words like "very" repeated.

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because I like to understand everything thoroughly and remember facts. For example, when I read a novel I pay attention to dates, timelines and characters so I can follow the plot and make connections later.

× Yes, I like a reading because in the reading all things are entertained and sometimes I free.

✓ Yes, I like reading because reading entertains me and sometimes it makes me feel free.

The indefinite article 'a' is unnecessary before the uncountable noun 'reading'. 'In the reading' is awkward; use 'reading' as a general activity. 'All things are entertained' is incorrect passive and meaning; change to 'reading entertains me'. 'I free' is ungrammatical; express as 'it makes me feel free'. Use natural subject-verb order and appropriate verbs.

× I prefer reading because it's stories and stories are very interesting and I feel very good to read and that's why I I am a free I prefer to read.

✓ I prefer reading because stories are very interesting and I enjoy reading, which makes me feel free, so I prefer to read.

The pronoun 'it's' incorrectly refers to 'reading'; 'stories' is plural so use 'stories are'. Remove repeated 'I'. 'I am a free' is incorrect pronoun/adjective use; say 'feel free'. Reorder clauses for clarity and correct pronoun reference.

× I prefer on Sun green because it's easy to carry and sometimes I feel free.

✓ I prefer reading on my phone because it's easy to carry and sometimes I feel free.

The phrase 'on Sun green' appears to be incorrect; likely 'on screen' or 'on my phone'. Use correct preposition 'on' with 'my phone' or 'a screen'. Also include possession 'my phone' for clarity.

× I open the my phone and search the article but I read it and I read the all articles in the phones and the screen but not a paper.

✓ I open my phone and search for an article; I read it on the phone screen, not on paper.

Remove the extra definite article 'the' before 'my phone'. Use 'search for' rather than 'search'. Use 'an article' for one article; 'all articles' is unnecessary. Use 'on the phone screen' or 'on the phone' and say 'not on paper' (no article).

× When I read for my studies and I focus and I read very focusfully.

✓ When I read for my studies, I focus and read very carefully.

'Focusfully' is not a standard adverb; use 'carefully'. Simplify repetitive verbs: 'I focus and read' conveys same meaning. Maintain present simple for habitual actions.

× But when I read some time magazines over free time and I'm not focused on the reading and I only see the pictures and there's a funny pots, I learned it not in the interesting point.

✓ But when I read magazines in my free time, I'm not focused; I only look at the pictures, and if there are funny parts, I don't learn much or find it uninteresting.

'Some time magazines over free time' is ungrammatical; use 'magazines in my free time'. Use proper conjunctions and punctuation to join clauses. 'There's a funny pots' should be 'if there are funny parts'. 'I learned it not in the interesting point' is unclear; replace with 'I don't learn much' or 'I don't find it interesting'.

× I prefer to reading because I'm a very overthinker person and sometime I read the novel.

✓ I prefer reading because I'm an overthinker and sometimes I read novels.

Use gerund 'reading' after 'prefer' (or 'prefer to read'); 'to reading' is incorrect. 'A very overthinker person' is ungrammatical — say 'an overthinker' or 'a very anxious person'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Use plural 'novels' for general habit.

× I read very carefully and very tailed.

✓ I read very carefully and pay close attention to details.

'Tailed' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'detailed' or 'thoroughly'. Use appropriate adverb 'thoroughly' or phrase 'pay close attention to details' for clarity.

× I learn about all dates, all time and all characters and that is why I prefer the retail reading.

✓ I learn about all the dates, times, and characters, and that is why I prefer detailed reading.

Add definite article 'the' before plural nouns when referring to specific items: 'the dates, times, and characters'. 'Retail reading' is a wrong word; likely 'detailed reading' or 'close reading' is intended. Use the correct adjective 'detailed'.