Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I really into I'm the kind of person who can't pass by a bookstore without getting in. There's just something about reading that can lift my mind. Reading books makes me happy.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I'd see. I prefer grading from a physical book. I find it much easier to focus and honestly I just love the feeling of turning pages.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
I think I read carefully. 1 is something important like an e-mail from my my boss. But if it's just a poster on social media or headline I don't really read carefully, I just quickly skim it.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
I think it depends on what I'm reading. For story or an e-mail from from a friend I read carefully. But for an advertisement or a manual I just scan quickly.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 67.0Gợi ý: 你回答很自然並表達了喜好,但語法和用詞有些錯誤與重複,句子有點冗長。注意主語與動詞的一致(例如“I'm really into”),避免重複短語(例如兩次表達同一意思)。嘗試在開頭用一個清晰的主題句,然後用一到兩句具體細節支持。
Ví dụ: Yes, I love reading. I'm really the kind of person who can't walk past a bookstore without going in, because books help me relax and lift my mood.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 表達意思清楚,但有發音或用詞錯誤(例如“I'd see”應為“I'd say/ I prefer reading”或“I prefer reading”;“grading”應為“reading”)。保持句子簡潔,並用一到兩個具體原因支持你的偏好。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading from a physical book because it's easier to concentrate, and I enjoy the tactile feeling of turning the pages.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答有邏輯但語法與發音錯誤明顯(例如“1”可能是語誤,重複“my my”)。建議先用一個總結句,然後分別說明需要仔細閱讀和不需要的情況,使用連接詞(例如“however”或“but”)來銜接句子。提供具體例子會更好。
Ví dụ: I read carefully when the content is important, for example an email from my boss or official documents. But for social media posts or headlines, I usually just skim them quickly.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答簡潔並具體,但有少量重複和小語法錯誤(例如“from from”)。可以用一個更自然的連接詞來展開對比,例如“whereas”或“however”,並在舉例時更精確地描述哪種情況用哪種閱讀方式。
Ví dụ: It depends on the material: for a novel or an email from a friend I read in detail, whereas for advertisements or instructions I usually just scan them quickly.
× Yeah, I really into I'm the kind of person who can't pass by a bookstore without getting in.
✓ Yeah, I'm really into reading; I'm the kind of person who can't pass by a bookstore without going in.
句子结构混乱:原句把“I really into”与“I'm the kind of person”并列但缺少动词,且“getting in”用法不自然。建议把“really into”后接名词或动名词(reading),并用分号或连词分开两个分句;把“getting in”改为更自然的短语“going in”。 改进建议:学习动词短语搭配(be into + 名词/动名词),保持完整句子(主语+谓语),并使用更地道的表达(go in/go into a bookstore)。
× There's just something about reading that can lift my mind.
✓ There's just something about reading that lifts my mood.
时态与搭配问题:原句用“can lift my mind”不太自然,通常说“lift my mood”表示心情变好,且此类一般陈述用一般现在时更合适。建议用一般现在时和常用搭配。
× Reading books makes me happy.
✓ Reading books makes me happy.
该句语法正确,无需修改。仍使用一般现在时表达习惯性事实。
× I'd see. I prefer grading from a physical book.
✓ I'd say I prefer reading from a physical book.
现在分词/动名词使用错误:原句“I'd see”应为“I'd say”或“I'd say so”;“grading”错误,应为“reading”。并且介词搭配为“read from”或更常见“read a physical book”或“read on paper”。建议记住常用短语:I'd say, read from/read a physical book。
× I find it much easier to focus and honestly I just love the feeling of turning pages.
✓ I find it much easier to focus, and honestly, I just love the feeling of turning pages.
副词位置和标点:句子本身语法正确,但需要逗号分隔以提高可读性。将“honestly”用作插入词时放在句中并用逗号隔开更自然。
× I'd see. I prefer grading from a physical book. I find it much easier to focus and honestly I just love the feeling of turning pages.
✓ I'd say I prefer reading from a physical book. I find it much easier to focus, and honestly, I just love the feeling of turning pages.
综合修改:将“I'd see”改为“I'd say”,并把“grading”改为“reading”,加上必要的标点使句子流畅。解释同上。
× I think I read carefully. 1 is something important like an e-mail from my my boss.
✓ I think I read carefully when it is something important, like an e-mail from my boss.
时态与句子结构错误:原句“1 is something important”为打字或识别错误,应为“when it is something important”。另外“my my boss”重复,应删去重复。建议使用时间状语从句连接条件(when it is ...)。
× I think I read carefully. 1 is something important like an e-mail from my my boss.
✓ I think I read carefully when it is something important, like an e-mail from my boss.
代词与重复错误:原句中数字“1”应为代词“it”,并且“my my boss”有重复。修正为“it”并去掉重复。建议检查录入错误并确保代词指代明确。
× But if it's just a poster on social media or headline I don't really read carefully, I just quickly skim it.
✓ But if it's just a poster on social media or a headline, I don't really read carefully; I just quickly skim it.
连词和冠词问题:缺少冠词“a headline”,并且句子应使用逗号或分号分隔两个分句以避免逗号拼接错误。建议在“headline”前加“a”,并用分号或句号分开两个独立分句。
× I think it depends on what I'm reading. For story or an e-mail from from a friend I read carefully.
✓ I think it depends on what I'm reading. For a story or an e-mail from a friend, I read carefully.
冠词与重复错误:短语“For story”缺少不定冠词“a”;并且“from from”重复。建议在可数名词前加冠词,并检查重复词。
× But for an advertisement or a manual I just scan quickly.
✓ But for an advertisement or a manual, I just scan quickly.
冠词使用正确,但需要在分句之间加逗号提高可读性。句子语法正确,仅加逗号。